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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
PrimalApex that is exactly what Alan’s attribute is. So now y’all know why Alan was ranked higher than Jerry on the list. And yes, the two do have a past with each other but Alan doesn’t remember Jerry. Jerry does though. I’d also feel scared if I was Bob, Sunny, although luckily his attribute only activates if he’s starving. I can’t wait to see Jerry in action in TOT. I think it’d be cool if he worked with Samuel since I think he’d find Samuel very capable and sympathize with him since he has no implant. Although he wouldn’t work FOR him.
Okay thanks for correcting Wyvernian, Wyveria is the actual ARK itself and there seem to be different kingdoms, each one with each type of wyvern, and some wyverns are trying to unite them all together. That’s honestly really cool! And if Cinder has the hottest fire breath… hmm, that’s probably why she’s the leader of the wyverns on Hades. Anyway, I read the Epilogue and it was really interesting. So our predictions were correct, they’re landed on the Earth next and may even potentially be fighting the Titans. Well they’re probably gonna try going home to Pandora but they might still have to fight them anyway. Hmm, I wonder who Ryker and Ras found. There are two of them… hmm, there’s a small small small chance that it’s Caesar and Salizar and they somehow also got transported to Earth. But it could also just be two random creatures. Anyway I can’t wait to see the third installment of the Pandora Chronicles!
Lava, Prior Extinction is really good!!! Good Extinction stories are hard to come by so it’ll be interesting to see how this one is!! I really enjoyed it!!! And from the few Extinction stories I’ve read so far, it’s unique to me!! The first person PoV was great and the protagonist’s backstory was very good and sad!! I like that the Titans weren’t already corrupted and first came to be guardians to protect the city!!! And I really excited to see more of this story!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Yeah, it has been rather unnaturally quiet around here.
PrimalApex, I read chapter fourteen of Ultimus……NO NO NO! This can’t be happening!!! Pls don’t die, Reuben, pls don’t die. 🥺. He’s just a puppy..I can’t—
I know Reuben is going to die eventually but still!! 😡. Mean old raptors. I wonder why that raptors eyes were glowing magneta tho.
Hmm, interesting….
Cya later!
-Detective SunnyFox57 is on the case
Welcome back moon!, I got ark mobile and got on the server but my phone sucks so bad I can’t even ride a flyer without getting kicked so I won’t be able to really play but if I’m not flying it’s.. fine-ish.. also you should catch up on PoP I’ve wrote 1-3 since you were gone
—Wyvernain
Hey the reader-
I like ur story but, one thing:
Idk who is talking in the story. Try using quotes for ppl to recognize who is talking in the story. Like this;
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“What are you doing today, Astro?” Raz asked.
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That’s one example. Here’s another;
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“Why are you following me? And why are you here?” She asked. But further away was a dog. “The cat must be scared..” she said again. The cat didn’t leave her side either way.
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Lol sorry, that was a paragraph. Anyways, I hope you get this. This will make your story a WHOLE lot better, and it will make it where you have more likes. Your welcome!
-SpecialRaptor (I hope no one thinks I’m gone from Dododex—I haven’t been writing very often)
Hey PrimalApex, good to meet you and thanks for the feedback! I’m relatively new to story writing so anything helps😂. I haven’t had the time to check out the wiki or to start the next chapters yet, but I will try to get to both soon, but chapter IV will be in ammonite. I think the next step is to try to flesh out Marcel as a character, but I do have plans for future chapters.
Anyway thanks for taking the time to read my story, I hope you all enjoy it!
-Jerrald
Re-ascends!!!
Hi! I’m really like - unorganised rn. So if I take alootaa time to reply im just dying metaphorically. Hi Primal! Hi Sunny! I’m so happy y’all r still here <33, you guys are Awesome. And hello everyone new!
-PD
(ps…. new things may come on haze, or a new story may emerge on achatina…. :3 )
Greetings and Salutations Jerrald!!!! Welcome to Achatina!!! I’m PrimalApex, I’m the heavy Ark lore/alternate universe sequel writer here. I write Ultimus and Journey. But if you would like you can call me Apex or Primal!!! If you want to check out some of the other stories. Check out the fandom as RelatingHen said, you can most of the stories written by any of the other authors. But if you need some more information, I can help!!! Hope you enjoy being here in Achatina!!!
Also, looking at your writing to see what can be fixed. I would divide up your work into more paragraphs and when you add dialogue, it should immediately should be a new paragraph. I haven’t looked too deep into your story yet to see if there’s anything else. But it looks pretty good!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
So uh, just wanted to let you all know, though I'll put this on the wiki as well. I'm going to be taking a break for a little bit, as I joined around three art contests and need to work hard on the submissions, as it's against some other really good artists. I'll still be writing FATF and TFTOA, but I need a bit of a break as I'm also a little low on motivation.
-SangToareGirl
MrGhostGamer, being slightly lethargic in my case. Also writing the next chapter of Ultimus and working a bit on Chapter 30 of TOT ahead of time.
Ben, I read chapter 66a!! It was great!! It’s sad that Skyler lost all her trust with her companions except for Rick. At least Gary now believes that she’s telling the truth, if only partially. I’m excited to see what happens with the group in this mini game to gain the artifact!!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next part of the chapter!!!
-PrimalApex:)