Once upon a time there was a snail who was haunted head so many raptors
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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion
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Ben, chapter 9 was great, I only have two issues, 1, nobody ever asked about the giant bat in a coma on the couch 😂(we can just say he’s on a couch decently far from everyone else, it’s a mansion.) And 2 Darkhide was a bit to feisty, he’s more quiet, but the accusation about poison makes sense and him and Emeralds distrust about humans was spot on, because they only ever knew about Olympus humans and those guys were kinda like Nerva’s tribe (brain fart, it’s new legion right?) from the explorer notes. Emeralds commanding nature and distrustful attitude was spot on and you got Sheeri’s timidness really well, Nova doesn’t really have too much character depth yet so you couldn’t really get her wrong but I kinda see her as energetic and pretty optimistic and brave. So nailed it.
Also Darkhide doesn’t actually want to eat them, it was kinda a joke, it’s been fine so far I just don’t want it to become a main thing for him to constantly say they should eat everyone. Also he’s probably gonna be pretty paranoid about dangerous situations, and betrayal, since he was betrayed so often in his life. (by Salizar and his own people, but we’ll have to get farther in before I explain that… I see a very nice character arc in play…)
Anyway excited to read chapter 10, and write chapter 11, um should syl’s characters show up in chapter 10 since in chapter 8 they were already at the door basically? And then in Apex’s chapter he could have his and Mrghosts characters meet at the bottom of the stairs and then Mrghost’s chapter (or maybe the later part of Apex’s chapter can be everyone together.) and then maybe they should split into smaller groups in MrGhosts chapter because this is like 30 characters. It’s a lot to keep track of. If we are splitting into groups I think we’ll have to decide which of our characters team up. And we can explain them splitting up as like they are trying to figure out what’s happening so they split up.
If we do split up I think my characters should team up with MrGhosts because they’d feel more comfortable traveling with other creatures, and we both have villains so maybe our characters could be trying to find where Drain, Yang and Steve went. (Steve was a villain right? He went on Yangs shoulder.) anyway enough rambling from me I’m gonna go write the next PoP chapter.
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Wyvernian Chapter 47 was really funny! The Anky boss would probably get along really well with Lagoon. Anyway, it was that easy? Well i dont believe it, something fishy is at play here.. and Ping and Richard are still hurt. Bad. Thats not good.
Hopefully nothing bad happens to them or Alfred.
From Ben
Wait no longer cuz Chap 9 of TOT is out already. And I liked Chap 8 Sylveevee!
LLTCCATOT
With info regarding TOT heres how i think the other casts will be introduced, judging from their chapters.
Sylveevee's cast will be rung in with the others at the end of Wyvernian's chapter.
MGG and PrimalApex's cast will meet in PrimalApex's chapter, and MGG can detail them like entering mansion and stuff.
Anyway, PrimalApex I really liked the latest chapters of Journey and Ultimus! So the creature was a Troodon.. cool! I forgot what i predicted it to be. But this Troodons a bit freaky cuz it knows about other ARKs and Fjordur's great prophecy? This is already turning to be an interesting character. And Ultimus, WOW thats gonna make things harder for Andrew. I guess his parents forgot to consider that before heading off to Arat Prime.. welp sucks to be Andrew. But since he has a while to go hes probably gonna meet other survivors along the way, right?
Also I feel like the dragon roar on TV at the beginning is gonna foreshadow the Titans... Nice work ok seeya later
Apex, read the newest chapters of ultimus and journey, they were really good, so Forest somehow transferred himself to the island? Are the other five there too or did they get sent to other arks? Hmm.
Also Sunny, of course imposters aren’t allowed 😂 but that won’t exactly stop them.. because.. imposters…
-Wyvernain
From Ben
Yes.. i dont think anyone here is in favor of impersonators or haters working on TOT. Also if youre talking about "Chapter 8" of TOT i made that post since Syl's Chap 7.5 should technically be 8
PrimalApex, Jerry is extremely deranged for sure he's kinda fun to write. I wouldnt mind putting him in TOT in the future. But he does have his own backstory which explains his mentality of the world.