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Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
Angel if you feel quitting is right then go for it. Although if you want to find joy in writing again, write what you think is fun! You dont have to take it seriously in the beginning, nor do you have to be super ambitious at first. You can always start with short stories with only a chapter or two and do what you think is best for you. Thats just my tip tho
I definitely agree, Slyveevee I could never write like you when I was in middle school. I was TERRIBLE at writing. It’s a miracle that the ROTP series is here at all. 🤣.
Also Wyverian, yeah I’ve been trying to use the website. That’s what I’ve been using to see y’all’s messages on the fandom account. I refreshed the app and the website but it continues showing the error message every time I post something. I can’t wait to see the TOT map!
-SunnyFox57
Wyvernian, I read chapter 23 of TOT!!! It was really good!!! I really like how you explained how Sheeri split away from the main group!!!! Darkhide and Emerald getting chased by the feral drakes were really cool!!!! And Steve’s interactions with Darkhide were great!!!! I really enjoyed it!!!!
I also read chapter 53!!! It was really good!!! Uh oh, liquid element and creatures or humans don’t mix well. Salizar really did find a good way to make her suffer and allow her to destroy Caesar’s friends. Interesting that there’s a large temple in the mountain!!! Poor Ferox’s that we’re trying to get away from their element addiction ways. I really enjoyed it!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
I loved both chapters!!! And I’m glad you enjoyed my new chapter!!! I really appreciate it!! When I released it and read it over, I thought I did really bad with it.
Thank you everyone who’s been reading my stories!! I really appreciate it all and I’m blessed that you guys read it!! Thank you!!!
Sunnyfox, I read chapter 28!!!! It was really good!!!! Peggie’s power is finally revealed!!!! The fight between James and Tom was awesome!!! It was really good!!! But I wonder what the gunfire was? An assassination attempt? I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Sylveevee, YOUR JUST STARTING MIDDLE SCHOOL!! Like…
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*me crying in a corner
But for real, you write amazingly!!!! I could never write that good at middle school. English was kinda my worst subject and most hated subject, it still is to be honest.
Well, Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
PrimalApex, Chapter 10 was interesting. Who could this creature be? And why was he trying to get to Fjordur? What did he mean by the fact that he’s free now? Well I hope he doesn’t do to much damage in the Redwoods, that’s where the Terror Bird Empire is, right? Hey, maybe we’ll see the Terror Birds or Bramble again. Maybe we’ll see more perspective in Fjordur in the future.
Sylveevee, Chapter 17 was great! I’m glad my tip worked for you. What a plot twist, I did not expect that at all! But I’m so glad Cooper is alive, and he’s getting super strong too, he might be one of the most powerful people in QOA at the moment, if he still has two more powers to go… Overall, a really good chapter. Drake’s feelings were used very well in this chapter following Cooper’s “death”, and I really liked it. But man, I feel bad for Blue. Ten children!
Sunny, I really enjoyed Chapter 22 and 23! So Cole is going to hide it out and work for nobody. Honestly, I don’t blame him at all, that’s a smart move on his part. Also THATs what happened to River Bend… yeah, I dont think Jack can visit it any time soon. I hope Peter and the rest of Cole’s family survived the attack, but, probably not :( RIP. TBH that chapter I almost expected an Among Us reference LOL. “There’s a spy among us, we need to find him,” XD. And Cole what in the world are you doing with that picture… Creepster. Hopefully he stops doing that, sheesh. Youre just as bad as Michael (well, not as bad, at least you didnt kill people, but you might since youre just a DIRTY SPY).
And the Shadowy Figure is being crazy again as always. Hmm, Jack seems familiar to him. Yeah it’s probably Aaron. If it was Aragorn, he’d be way more familiar to him since it’s his own son. Yeah, he’s all corrupted and whatever and maybe if it’s Aragorn he’s gone so mad he can’t even recognize his own son, but, you know what this seems like the most viable option of it being AAaron.
Anyway, good job everyone. Seeya around!
OK, I don’t have a lot of minor villains in the ROTP series but here is three that I came up with for ToT:
Michael. Acts haughty and thinks he’s better than everyone else. Michael has dirt brown hair that is kneaded into very tight curly knots and has a horribly trimmed goatee. He likes to wear a tie suit. He will occasionally assume something that isn’t true.For example, in TTDOT, he accused Aragorn of keeping Emma away from him. Which is not true. Emma hates him. He’s desperately in love with Emma, who is revolted by him. He hates Aragorn and Aragorn hates him.
Willow. Has black hair usually up in a ponytail, green eyes, and tanned skin. Her implant gives her the ability to go through solid objects. She CANNOT go through people tho. She doesn’t like anyone who gets in her way. she is very mean when provoked.
Camille. (I don’t remember her exact appearance) She has long black hair and brown eyes, and has large black feathered wings sprouting from her back. She usually wears black clothes. Her implant someone malfunctioned and instead of being able to transform into a bird, wings sprouted from her back and are there permanently. Although she works for villains, she is very gentle. She is also very quiet and rarely speaks.
Also Ben, it wasn’t mentioned but the firey creature that saved Josephina and Jaquin was a phoenix. Josephina accidentally summoned it with her powers to protect them. I posted another chapter of TWOTP btw. Cya later!
-SunnyFox57
Hey guys just wanted to share something stupid I did on a server on ark.
So, I was playing PVP at the red obelisk, with a bunch of other players, several of which had fabricated stuff. I only had a wooden bat and an ascendant wooden bow I got from a pursuit. I was losing TERRIBLY. Most of the players were brawling on the platform, right in the middle. So, I decided to come up with plan that I thought would make me win. I quickly crafted a parachute, pulled out my ascendant bow, and jumped of the cliff, floating peacefully toward the red ob platform. Only got a quarter of the way toward the platform when a dude in tek armor jumped out from behind a rock and shot and killed me in midair. I’m such a noob.
A very ashamed MrDemonRealz
Wow, I am hungry now, and hungry for pizza now. Also I just realized that I had a typo in my last post, I didn’t mean don’t, I meant just. Anyway I have been busy writing my story and getting a good plot for it (I am just about at chapter 20. This is going to be a long story from what I can tell from now.). I also have been reading jointed mysteries, and I got to say. I really like it!!!!!! Keep up the awesome work SpecialRaptor!!! Also I have been looking around for the next chapter of the obelisk and HoP and PoP. Also I am still falling off the cliff from the last chapter of the obelisk. Okay, I just wanted to let everyone know I am not dead or gone and that I am going back to reading jointed mysteries!!
-Apex
Nvm my last tip I saw the wiki page. I might read some of the stories used in ToT.
Also, Chapter 24 is out now!! That means we’re on the horizon of the end of Section I!! I promise you, Chapter 25 will pull you in and you won’t take your eyes off until it’s done.
I will make the complete Chapter 25 then release it in its parts and in its creatures once all is done.
-RelatingHen8906
PS, Chapter 27 of CON was pretty cool!
To: Wyvernian, SangToareGirl, DiploLover, RelatingHen
Wyvernian, Chapter 15 of TOP-OOS was awesome! Putting this here to raise awareness of the story to those who don’t know.
Sang, Chapter 1 of TFAF and Chapter 5 of TFTOA were great! Of course I’ve already left thoughts on Fandom blah blah blah, I’ll leave it here though anyway.
DiploLover, Chapter 26 of CON was great! Very excited to see how the five wolves will adapt to their new human forms, and how KJ and the human girl will inevitably interfere with the Five Wolves’ operation of saving the wolves from Carnivore Island, especially if the human girl is going to try and tame Reign. This makes me interested though how creatures act when and after being tamed, especially since the wolves are sentient. Considering that Paradise the Crystal Wyvern doesn’t seem to speak (then again, we just might not know), it seems they become automatically obedient as is in the original game. Interested to see how it goes! Also as RelatingHen said, if you don’t want to create multiple parts for the same chapter, once you run out of space simply switch to a category like Funny and then back to Stories. There’s still a limit to how much you can put, but I doubt anyone here would reach that limit through conventional chapters. (*cough cough TAOH chapter 100).
RelatingHen, I’m sure anyone’s stories being made into a TV show would be a wonder, though the question of whether media “deserves” a show is a strange one. Shouldn’t all books deserve their own adaptations if they’re all good pieces of work? Anyway, Chapter 19 and 20 were good stuff, I liked how the Immune cave was done in Chapter 19, I like the cave chapters in general because it can actually be reliable source of info on how to clear them. Also interested to see how Terad’s scheming with the Titanosaur will interfere with Nameless, who seem to be as big as a threat as C Tribe if not more. Also considering Sodden is also nearing T creatures that means he’ll probably get involved in the mix too to try and kill it. In usual gameplay though Titanosaurs weren’t too useful, at least in my opinion. Idk, maybe it’s a PVP thing I’m unaware of. Also like how mindwipe tonics are utilized in the last part of Chap 19, I suppose that’s a useful way of using them. The only reason why i don’t use them constantly in my playthroughs is because they’re a bit expensive and they also reset all engrams which means constantly re-learning stuff. Chapter 20 was also really cool too, and it’s interesting to see the stakes now that Sodden’s implant is about to break, and seeing that Nameless is also around the corner. I’m guessing Chapter 21 will be about that encounter, and it won’t be very pretty.