From Ben

Sylveevee i read the past three chapters of QOA and..

😱😱

WHY IS DRAKE DEAD

WHY DIDNT COOPER CRAFT A NUKE AND SHOVE IT UP THEIR BUTTS

Anyway besides that it was a good chapter its a good fight scene and your fight scenes have improved a lot although my only complaint is I just realized but in the last chapter Pat transformed into a shadowmane but I feel like he shouldnt be able to because he doesnt know they exist (since theyre in Genesis) so it could just be changed into a Thyla or smth but other then that it was a good past few chapters