Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Oof, me? And OG? Really? Personally I don’t even think I’m close to being one of them. I’m probably the last of the “popular” writers on Dododex, especially since The Obelisk started out so terrible with zero plot. Maybe one day when I post my more thought through stories. I can only hope.
—Moon
From Ben,
Cool, it's over. Just one more thing though, Ghost, before you blame anyone for anything, just try to understand their perspective. Why someone does something. From Moon's perspective, she may have saw you as a troublemaker with this whole Hater League Association thing that happened and the multiple personas, and I was the one being yelled at? I'd be upset, because I tried my best to be as nice and respectful, but now it seems everyone's against me. I'd be sad too.
I don't think it's anyones fault. Just a misunderstanding that shouldnt have escalated to where it is. And I tried to understand your perspective, and the why, but I couldnt. Thats why i thought you did all this for nothing besides attention. But, you seem like a nice person. Even though i dont agree with some of your opinions, no one can be two different people at once.
Just keep perspectives into mind. Because after reading these logs, yes, Moon may have started this fight but she had good reason.
I hope youre doing well Moon, and everyone else. I've been in an annoyed mood again since my friends have been ticking me off again. Just trying to find a place where people actually share the same interests and stuff, yk?
Thats all, signing off.
- Ben
The Story Of Cheese:
“What is this place” I said out loud. I looked around me and and I saw DINOSAURS! What but this can’t be possible, I thought. Then I saw it: a UNICORN. I ran to the nearest bush and picked up some berries. I slowly crept up to the unicorn and hand fed it. THE UNICORN WAS MINE!! I brought him up a little hill and left him there. I started exploring and I found a trike. I had a plan to tame it. I would punch it and run. The plan still needed a little bit of work but for now I’m gonna try it. I ran up to a big lime green Trike and punched it. I wasn’t expecting it to be that fast but it was. It stabbed me with his horn in my leg. I was injured and I couldn’t run. I whistled for Cheese (the unicorn) to attack. I saw Cheese sprint down the hill and it started kicking the trike with its back legs. After a couple more kicks the trike was knocked out. I fed it berries and now I had a trike. I took both of my animals up the hill and then I saw a Theri. I sent both of my animals to kill it. Cheese led the charge and started stabbing the theri. But the theri was too powerful and he ruthlessly murdered Cheese. “NOOOOO!” I screamed. But Lime (the trike) kept fighting and eventually killed the theri. I was sad but also happy. I had killed the theri but at what cost…
The red pike
Tyrana’s story
Chapter 2
She went back to the village in redwoods. She had lately tamed 20 dire bears each 1000 health and 500 damage. They killed everyone in the village and everything. The only thing left there after that fight was Tyrana. For some reason she was laughing at the pain she caused on the village. Now she went out to tame many more creatures. (20 dire bears 10 terror birds 1 Galli with saddle and 9 carnos ) she felt as if she could take on anything. Little did she know Goliath and nerva weren’t the only ones in her way. She left tons of hints to make nerva know where she is in follow her. Of course nerva was a part of her plan. The sacrifice. Her main mission was to summon. The end of the chapter (haha you’ll get the answer in the NEXT chapter)
The red pike
Tirana’s story
Chapter 1
She woke up in a cage. She though about why she was in there. Then she realized... nerva.there were lots of guard protecting her cage. She was in solitary but... the only way the guards were safe was that she was unconscious. She found a rock and found a weak point in the cage. She broke the door open and killed 24 out of 25 guards. One ran to tell nerva but she threw a spear that she got from a dead guard. She walked out of the village and looked around. She quickly tamed many animals with... fear. She has a reputation that nobody would ever guess. And she knew nerva’s weakness. The only problem was nerva knew her weakness to, but it’s unlikely he would/could. The end of chapter 1
Happy Groundhogs Day everyone!!!! Also, sorry for being quiet. I’ve been busy. I got do one of my new broadcasts for a review of everything I missed broadcasting.😬 sorry.
I hope everyone is enjoying the new year so far though!!!!
Also fact: we are closer to 2050 than 1990…
Until Next Time!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Duke it really depends on how you are trying to tame it. The best thing to do for a lower level taming is to get it wedged in a mountain, or shoot from a cliff. I usually wait until I have the tranquilizer dart unlocked. You could always tame a stego and use the stego as the slow meat shield while you shoot at the Yuty. Stegos are quite tanky, but you’ll need to be able to make a saddle to make sure it is fully protected during this.
Idk if it will work though, I’d just suggest use the high ground until it’s on a torpor run, then use a Dire Wolf to chase it down.
-PrimalApex
From Ben
Hey everyone, Ben here. How y’all doing?
Hello LunarDragon, good to see you and welcome to Achatina! I’ll be waiting around for your story. Uhh there’s a bunch of others you can read if you like reading. There’s a whole list somewhere in here. Ask Apex for it.
GitezGood I’d join butttt i don’t know your username and all that so I can’t find your sever. Plus it’s a non-ded server so that’d be harder to get together and all that. We’d have to schedule something.
OMEGA09, Chapter 3 of Falling Tides was nice! Wish the chapters could be longer though. Like, idk, the length of ten of these combined. Is that too much? Idk, most of these chapters can be combined though. Or extended in other ways, like describing the scene and all that jazz. I hope Dylan and Sarah don’t get together though. That would feel too cliche, to me at least. Don’t know why I’m pointing this out. Usually the main male lead and female lead always get together by the end of the book. It’s just icky in my opinion especially if their relationship isn’t that well developed.
MrGhostGamer, Chapter 4 and 5 of Life Before was fabulous! I don’t like Jackson though, his German accent is annoying. I’m guessing they’re gonna try to find a way onto the ARK. It’s a bit different from the typical ARK story, but still pretty cool. I hope we get more background on these characters though.
Sylveevee, Chapter 5 of War of Aberration was cool. A bit confusing, especially with the whole Sylveevee and Pat betraying the others thing, but I’m working on it. Sarah seems cool but we haven’t seen her enough yet so I don’t care about her too much. A part of me does though anyway. Don’t think anyone’s forgotten about WOA though, just busy writing. Also plz don’t spoil plz put spoiler warning and then space out the message 😪
Hey Moon Tales Girl, thanks for taking the time to read all the stories people have here. Not many people do that and either post their own story and that’s it or read one story exclusively. Anyway, Chapter 12- uhh i mean Episode 12 of Moon Tales was really nice, feel bad for John now. I can see why he’s more willing to just work for Sand Clan compared to Andromeda. Hopefully John snaps out of it. Sand Clan is really shady.
Nazgul, the two new chapters for Convergence were amazing! I’m guessing that the main character for Book 1 is going to be Spark. Also liked the build up for the mega tribe on Ragnarok. Most stories have pre-existing mega tribes which is pretty boring in my opinion. However I like the take that Convergence does. Also I already like Eddie I know I’m gonna like him a lot. I’m guessing that Spark is going to ask Cole to help him lead the army with him. Hoping we get to meet more characters, maybe from other towns. Anyway that was nice, can’t wait for the next chapter!
Wyvernian, Chapter 10 of OOS was awesome! Welp there goes Dr. Flight. Dawg did not need to die. I’m mostly wondering about how Ryker and his gang are going to ascend off the ark and go to the earth if they can’t get to the dragon trophy. It’s making me really curious, since they seemed to have spent quite some time on the earth from the epilogue in POP. Anyway, that was nice. Dr. Primalis is probably gonna die now tho.
Sunny, Chapter 24 was… grahhhhh but really well done. Well, that’s that. At least she’ll see him again. Still so curious about this new mysterious Shadowy Figure 2.0. They obviously know about Andrew and Emma and about the medallion and her future-seer sight, and inflicted a painful death for her (#1 opp by the way), but how do they know? We don’t have as many hints this time as Shadowy Figure though. I don’t think it’s the Master. He probably wouldn’t go out of his way to kill her on his own. And if he had the power to do that wouldn’t he just go after everyone else? Still. Interesting to think about also i lowk would have freaked out better if the spoilers didn’t get to me guys reminder not to put spoilers unless you have spoiler warnings or its super long.
Moon, Pandora Chapters 13 - 14 were phenomenal! The flashback scene with Bria’s father’s (who we now know is named Wind) relatives was awesome. Lune clearly is afraid of or is disgusted by Pandora, but it’s really sweet that Wind still cares about her. Sasha is probably my favorite relative right now, because she doesn’t care about the fact that Pandora is different from the other wyverns in obvious ways. I loved the foreshadowing at the end of Chapter 13 with the rocks surrounding Sasha, hinting Wind’s fate. I caught that detail fast and I’m still pretty suspicious of why Pandora chooses not to tell anyone. Maybe it’s because she finds it hard to talk to people. I’m also a little suspicious of the lightning wyvern who claimed to be a cousin…
Chapter 14 was also really well done. I’m betting that Bria’s friends are going to play a bigger role now. Bria’s dream was also really creepy, and the owl was really really cool. Owls typically symbolize wisdom, knowledge, and spiritual type stuff, but seeing one in a dream can symbolize death too. Mysterious creatures, they are considered. We know Bria won’t die since we know she’s ‘Mother’ in Chapter 1, which takes place after the events of Pandora, but we do know that the Vardiland will suffer lots of death in the coming events. The owl also speaks German, and the words it speaks roughly translates to “Hello there”, “Please don’t remember” or something like that. I have a feeling the owl appears more often than we assume, and this is the reason why Bria doesn’t have good intuition of the future that Pandora does. I like the magical element of this, which plays into the overall larger world of Fjordur, which is based on Nordic mythology. I’m still trying to figure out what the owl means though. It might be Pandora herself trying to make Bria forget so she doesn’t interfere with her plan, since the owl has those creepy eyes like Pandora does.
Overall they were great chapters and worth the wait. The mystery of Pandora continues…
Yeah that’s about it seeya.
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