Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
To, SunnyFox57, MrGhostGamer, Moon
SunnyFox57 I also copy paste my stories from another document then to Dododex, it's so much easier than just starting on Dododex on phone. Personally I prefer Docs, since it's a lot easier imo to use than Word, and theres a Docs app on the phone too so I can do it directly.
MrGhostGamer, I don't recall if there was anyone else on this platform named Ghost, but considering it's a popular username maybe someone's already used the name. Changing it is up to you. And I dont think anyone will know you as the first person to fight with Moon, you seem like a nice person like we said, Im sure you and Sunny will leave behind a good legacy. And as for my story it spans from a Prologue to currently Ch7. You can find the prologue under Achatina, and the rest of the chapters are posted in Aerial filter in reverse (starts with Wyvern will end with Archaeopteryx). I'll of course find myself reading you and Sunny's story when I have free time.
Moon, huh, thats pretty interesting. I didnt expect you to be working on THREE other stories at the same time as Obelisk! Idk who can do that but youve gotta be pretty dang determined if you can work on so much and still make expertful stories (pretty sure MrGhost or Sunny also working on multiple stories too, mad props to them). But hey, Wattpad seems like a good start. Im sure youll find an audience there (unlike me). But I guess that means we're opposites, I despise writing animal POV stories, it's just too much of a hassle and human POV's I feel and relate to a lot more.
Cheers, and I'll see you all in a future message. I'm glad to come back.
- Ben
(PS: Can you give me some tips on romance stuff? Im not very good at that.)
Oof, me? And OG? Really? Personally I don’t even think I’m close to being one of them. I’m probably the last of the “popular” writers on Dododex, especially since The Obelisk started out so terrible with zero plot. Maybe one day when I post my more thought through stories. I can only hope.
—Moon
From Ben,
Cool, it's over. Just one more thing though, Ghost, before you blame anyone for anything, just try to understand their perspective. Why someone does something. From Moon's perspective, she may have saw you as a troublemaker with this whole Hater League Association thing that happened and the multiple personas, and I was the one being yelled at? I'd be upset, because I tried my best to be as nice and respectful, but now it seems everyone's against me. I'd be sad too.
I don't think it's anyones fault. Just a misunderstanding that shouldnt have escalated to where it is. And I tried to understand your perspective, and the why, but I couldnt. Thats why i thought you did all this for nothing besides attention. But, you seem like a nice person. Even though i dont agree with some of your opinions, no one can be two different people at once.
Just keep perspectives into mind. Because after reading these logs, yes, Moon may have started this fight but she had good reason.
I hope youre doing well Moon, and everyone else. I've been in an annoyed mood again since my friends have been ticking me off again. Just trying to find a place where people actually share the same interests and stuff, yk?
Thats all, signing off.
- Ben
The Story Of Cheese:
“What is this place” I said out loud. I looked around me and and I saw DINOSAURS! What but this can’t be possible, I thought. Then I saw it: a UNICORN. I ran to the nearest bush and picked up some berries. I slowly crept up to the unicorn and hand fed it. THE UNICORN WAS MINE!! I brought him up a little hill and left him there. I started exploring and I found a trike. I had a plan to tame it. I would punch it and run. The plan still needed a little bit of work but for now I’m gonna try it. I ran up to a big lime green Trike and punched it. I wasn’t expecting it to be that fast but it was. It stabbed me with his horn in my leg. I was injured and I couldn’t run. I whistled for Cheese (the unicorn) to attack. I saw Cheese sprint down the hill and it started kicking the trike with its back legs. After a couple more kicks the trike was knocked out. I fed it berries and now I had a trike. I took both of my animals up the hill and then I saw a Theri. I sent both of my animals to kill it. Cheese led the charge and started stabbing the theri. But the theri was too powerful and he ruthlessly murdered Cheese. “NOOOOO!” I screamed. But Lime (the trike) kept fighting and eventually killed the theri. I was sad but also happy. I had killed the theri but at what cost…
The red pike
Tyrana’s story
Chapter 2
She went back to the village in redwoods. She had lately tamed 20 dire bears each 1000 health and 500 damage. They killed everyone in the village and everything. The only thing left there after that fight was Tyrana. For some reason she was laughing at the pain she caused on the village. Now she went out to tame many more creatures. (20 dire bears 10 terror birds 1 Galli with saddle and 9 carnos ) she felt as if she could take on anything. Little did she know Goliath and nerva weren’t the only ones in her way. She left tons of hints to make nerva know where she is in follow her. Of course nerva was a part of her plan. The sacrifice. Her main mission was to summon. The end of the chapter (haha you’ll get the answer in the NEXT chapter)
The red pike
Tirana’s story
Chapter 1
She woke up in a cage. She though about why she was in there. Then she realized... nerva.there were lots of guard protecting her cage. She was in solitary but... the only way the guards were safe was that she was unconscious. She found a rock and found a weak point in the cage. She broke the door open and killed 24 out of 25 guards. One ran to tell nerva but she threw a spear that she got from a dead guard. She walked out of the village and looked around. She quickly tamed many animals with... fear. She has a reputation that nobody would ever guess. And she knew nerva’s weakness. The only problem was nerva knew her weakness to, but it’s unlikely he would/could. The end of chapter 1
Happy Groundhogs Day everyone!!!! Also, sorry for being quiet. I’ve been busy. I got do one of my new broadcasts for a review of everything I missed broadcasting.😬 sorry.
I hope everyone is enjoying the new year so far though!!!!
Also fact: we are closer to 2050 than 1990…
Until Next Time!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Duke it really depends on how you are trying to tame it. The best thing to do for a lower level taming is to get it wedged in a mountain, or shoot from a cliff. I usually wait until I have the tranquilizer dart unlocked. You could always tame a stego and use the stego as the slow meat shield while you shoot at the Yuty. Stegos are quite tanky, but you’ll need to be able to make a saddle to make sure it is fully protected during this.
Idk if it will work though, I’d just suggest use the high ground until it’s on a torpor run, then use a Dire Wolf to chase it down.
-PrimalApex
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