Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Duke, there are many stories here and I’ll do my best to list most of them.
Creatures of Nightmares by DiploLover. -Starts in Hyaenodon, Chapters 6-11 in Direwolf and Chapters 12 and beyond in Mammoth
The Five Talons of Abberation by SangToreGirl
War of Aberration by Sylveevee -Featherlight exclusive, I think
The Omega Timeline by Sylveevee -Yi Ling exclusive
Journey Through All Creatures by RelatingHen8906 -Varied creatures in ABC order and many different segments
The Fleet of Fate by GitezGood - Crystal Wyvern Exclusive
Ultimus by PrimalApex
Journey by PrimalApex
Obelisk by Moon
I may miss some stories or some information may be wrong but this is the best I have! You don’t gotta read them all but these are some very cool ones!
-RelatingHen8906
To: Duke, RelatingHen, GitezGood, DiploLover
From: Ben, & KM
Duke, welcome to Achatina.
RelatingHen, Chapter 11 of JTAC was also really cool, I’m glad to see the new characters in action and I can’t wait to see how they act.
GitezGood, if it’d be mobile, I think it’d be good to get the logistics down like what map, what gamemode and other game settings etc. I don’t think it’d be necessary to have to plan every single time we want to play, but the first time only just to get a tribe set up and all that junk. Also, I read the third part to Chapter 9 of Fleet of Fate and it was pretty cool, though I feel like GitezGood’s injuries could have been described in a different way. They just sort of exist, though they don’t seem to serve any consequence to Gitez. The sequence with the Raptors and Rex was a bit too quick too, and they didn’t seem like much of a threat. Extending that scene would have added to the suspense and describing in detail how each character gets injured or defeated would make it better too.
DiploLover, Chapter 90 of TAOH is in Raptor. You will have to go down a little farther though since there’s a lot of tips in Raptor. The chapter is titled “Aurora Borealis.” Anyway, I read the past, what, five chapters of CON that got released? They were all a lot of fun. Apollo is such a cool character, especially as the son of Ridley/Shadow. A little silly that he got caught so easily. Oh well it’s his first time betraying someone. Also I find it a little crazy Pax got caught if he has time powers. They must be pretty good at what they do. I’m interested though, apparently Apollo claims that Shadow was supposed to be the protector of wolves? Sort of like a Transformers thing. One thing that I find interesting is that Apollo doesn’t seem to be a part of the prophecy. We see the winged wolf (the fourth wolf in the prophecy). It’s giving me a bad feeling. Hmm, I’m guessing that Apollo will be the fifth wolf. As for who will die out of the prophecy wolves, I’ll have to guess either Prince or Apollo. Apollo may turn on them, but will make it up with some sort of sacrifice. Or Prince will die in order to protect Astra. Also Shadow getting mad at the fact that his wolves aren’t getting the job done shows how lazy he really is, he just can’t do it on his own. Since he can transform the wolves into other creatures, he might just turn them into something stronger. Anyway they were fun, can’t wait to see what’s in store.
Land Before Time PTSD vibes but on a whole other level!!!!
The poor baby Theri!!! But THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!! I wonder what the carnivore was? Well If it’s snout is half buried in its neck and the neck of the Theri being very thin compared to other dinosaurs, that might mean it’s smaller carnivore so possibly a Raptor!! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Chapter 83, WOW! It was really good!!! And really sad. I am not sure what else to say but that it was really good and sad. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Also Reader, I do have to admit that Moon is my favorite writer. However it’s a little bit unfair as everyone here writing is at different levels of experience in writing. I also really liked Wyvernian’s story Hero’s of Pandora(and I’m excited for season two and Protectors of Pandora), Jointed Mysteries by SpecialRaptor and A World of Dinosaurs by The Reader. (I have only read these stories because I lost track of where everyone else’s stories start and where they continue. But I can’t wait to read the next one!!)
Anyways, I’m was so excited to see the new chapter of the Obelisk!!! And I loved the new chapter!!! Until next time!!
-Apex
To you dedicated readers
Thank you to Moon’s Biggest Fan / Reader. Although it has been five months, I came back. I came back because you are all so happy reading these stories. So I want to make you happy too with my stories. I noticed I got 4 downvotes or something, which makes me laugh. It makes me laugh because it means people see my message, which means it is indeed possible to be renowned. So, let me present to you my gift to the world. My story. - Ben
The Arks: Over Heaven
Prologue: Ill-Fated
The day was sunny. The day was bright. There were no clouds in sight. All that filled the skies was the light that poured in from the sun. It seemed like the perfect day. After all, for dear Samuel, it would be his last day at the confines of Terran High. The last day he’d have to spend in a hell that he called school.
Samuel was standing amongst a crowd, along with many other waiting graduates, each one wearing a black gown and graduation cap. They were watching the stage with anticipation, eager for the big moment.
“Are you excited?”
Samuel turned around, facing one of his closest friends, Nova. Nova had a big smile on her face, and her long black hair fell all the way down to her chest. Samuel had become friends with Nova during their freshman years, when they were paired next to each other in English. Samuel had forgotten his pencil at home accidentally, so he borrowed one from Nova, and thus blossomed their friendship. Samuel never really got close to anyone else after that, Nova was Samuel’s greatest friend, and no one could surpass her.
“Well, of course I’m excited! After we finally get our diplomas, we can get outta here and do whatever we want! We won’t have to wake up so early for school and stay up so late for homework, it’ll be like heaven!” Samuel answered.
“That does sound pretty cool, but things will be so boring now! We won’t see any more school fights or get any juicy gossip!” Nova complained.
“Uh huh, since that’s the most interesting thing in the world,” Samuel replied with a hint of sarcasm, rolling his eyes.
Before Nova could talk, someone walked up to the microphone and tapped on it, startling a large majority of the crowd. Standing on the stage was Mr. Mo, their principal. He was looking extra nice today, with his gray suit complementing his blue tie and combed back gray hair. He had many wrinkles across his face, and he had a jagged scar running down his eye. Many people always asked how he got that scar. He would always reply,
“When I was little, I would scratch my face whenever I got itchy, and one day I scratched a little too hard.”
Some speculated that that wasn’t the case, and that he got into a fight and that’s how he got it, but who knows? Samuel didn’t think it mattered anyway. He probably would never visit this school again, so it’s not like he needed to know how he got that scar.
Samuel’s thoughts were interrupted by Mr. Mo’s abrupt speech.
“Attention everyone. It truly has been a wild ride for all of you, huh? You spent the past 12 years, and now here you are, ready to move onto a new chapter and become men and women. You all worked hard to get here, and I applaud you for that. But now it’s time for you all to move on to a bigger future. It might sound scary, but I’m sure you all will do well as long as you put your heart into it. That’s all I have to say, now I’ll pass the mic onto our valedictorian, Aurora Romero!”
Everyone erupted into applause, cheers, and whistles as Mr. Mo stepped off the stage. Soon, a girl with glittering dark brown hair stepped onto the stage. Unlike the other graduates, she wore a white gown and white cap, and she had a red plume which reached all the way down to her shoulders. Her walk was elegant and filled with confidence.
“Seriously, take a look at this girl!” Nova groaned, “She got a 4.80 GPA. How is that even possible?! Does she not have a life or something? And she’s the best on the tennis team too, there’s no way she didn’t cheat on her finals!”
“Now, it’s not that big a deal. I know you always tried your hardest,” Samuel comforted her.
“It just doesn’t make sense, she’s naturally talented, it’s not fair!” Nova complained. Nova stopped talking, and looked back at Aurora with a pissed off look on her face. As Aurora began to speak in the microphone, a few girls in the crowd were cheering her on.
“Greetings, fellow students. It truly is an honor to be your valedictorian, to be here standing in front of you to give you my thanks. My appreciation goes out to my parents who supported me my entire life, my teachers who helped me get to where I needed to be, to my friends who were there whenever I felt lost and hopeless,” Aurora paused, as she seemed to be contemplating if she should keep on going. “And to my boyfriend, who I will never forget. He may not be with us anymore, but he’s the reason that I have a future now.”
Everyone went silent, as they seemed to be giving her a moment of silence to mourn. Not even Nova scoffed, as she looked on solemnly.
“But, enough of me. Mr. Mo is right. Starting today, we move onto a new chapter of our lives. We’re going to need to tough it out, because life won’t be so easy now. You think high school is hard? Just wait until you get a job! That’s what my parents would say, at least.”
“She’s gotta be kidding,” Samuel muttered as he turned white.
“And even if you weren’t the greatest student, it shouldn’t stop you from being a good person. You can do it, you can do whatever you want to do, just let your heart and mind lead the way, and you will always succeed. Life is hard, and tough times will come, but tough people will last,” Aurora closed her eyes and smiled, rubbing her eyes a little as she said, “That’s all for now.”
As Aurora stepped away from the microphone, Mr. Mo ran up and grabbed the microphone.
“What are you guys waiting for? Get ready to throw your caps up in the air!”
Everyone began to murmur in excitement, as they took hold of their caps.
“TEN! NINE! EIGHT!”
The soon-to-be adults began to chant the countdown along with Mr. Mo. Samuel and Nova joined in too, smiles growing on their faces.
“SEVEN! SIX! FIVE!”
The screaming grew louder and louder to the point that Samuel’s ears started to hurt.
“FOUR! THREE! TWO! ONE-”
Suddenly Mr. Mo let out a loud gasp of pain, as he fell to his knees, clutching his wrist. Everyone stopped the countdown, and whispers began to radiate throughout the crowd.
“What’s going on? What happened to Mr. Mo?” the people asked. Just at that moment, Aurora screamed out too, visible pain across her face as her wrist began to bleed. As soon as Aurora started to cry out in pain, many more people in the crowd began to feel it too. By the dozen, everyone was writhing around, an unexplainable pain in their left wrist.
“AGHHHH!” Nova screamed as she fell. Samuel caught her, yelling, “Don’t worry, I got you!”
The sky above them suddenly began to generate clouds, and the blazing ball of fire they called the Sun began to move around the sky at an alarming rate. The sky seemed to be generating streaks of red, blue, and green, spinning around in a triangle and aiming right down at them.
Samuel looked up in horror as a bright light enveloped everyone, and before he knew it his conscience slipped away.
That’s all for the prologue! I know it's a little long at 1200 words. Please leave feedback or comments, and any questions you may have! Trust me, the actual Arks will be brought in Chapter 1, this is just the beginning. - Ben.
This so Moon again, and wow, we’re hoarding the snail section. Welp, this will get peoples attention about my story, that’s for sure! I just have a little message for one of you, you’ll know if it’s you or not;
Do not copy my story. Im watching you.
I understand it’s different, but no. No. No. NO. Yur a scammer! Please just don’t. I don’t want someone taking my ideas.
🙄😖😔 I’m not usually mad. But right now I’m MAD.
-Moon. sorry, guys, I’ll be fine in a few hours. I’ll write the next chapter tonight.
Hey Break-It, nothing much!!! Been sick again. This time with a stomach flu. Not fun at all. Now I’m writing and waiting for chapters to be released so I can read like a happy clam. Glad you’ll be making regular visits here!!!! We’ve missed ya around!!!!
Also, make a note to raise the roof everyone’s comments. Haters are going around and dogging them badly it seems. So we gotta keep the good fight going to them. Remember ya’ll to do your part!!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Hey PD!!! Awesome to see you!!! It’s alright, everyone has kinda been doing that lately. But I’m just glad to see you’re still around too!!!! If it’s alright me asking, how’s your game doing? I hope it’s doing awesome!!!
OH, I gotta say this. THERE IS AN INDIE GROUP REMAKING A 3D VERSION OF THE LAND BEFORE TIME!!!!!
Well, back into the void I go until the next conversation starts!!
Until next time!!
-PrimalApex
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