To: Duke, RelatingHen, GitezGood, DiploLover

From: Ben, & KM

Duke, welcome to Achatina.

RelatingHen, Chapter 11 of JTAC was also really cool, I’m glad to see the new characters in action and I can’t wait to see how they act.

GitezGood, if it’d be mobile, I think it’d be good to get the logistics down like what map, what gamemode and other game settings etc. I don’t think it’d be necessary to have to plan every single time we want to play, but the first time only just to get a tribe set up and all that junk. Also, I read the third part to Chapter 9 of Fleet of Fate and it was pretty cool, though I feel like GitezGood’s injuries could have been described in a different way. They just sort of exist, though they don’t seem to serve any consequence to Gitez. The sequence with the Raptors and Rex was a bit too quick too, and they didn’t seem like much of a threat. Extending that scene would have added to the suspense and describing in detail how each character gets injured or defeated would make it better too.

DiploLover, Chapter 90 of TAOH is in Raptor. You will have to go down a little farther though since there’s a lot of tips in Raptor. The chapter is titled “Aurora Borealis.” Anyway, I read the past, what, five chapters of CON that got released? They were all a lot of fun. Apollo is such a cool character, especially as the son of Ridley/Shadow. A little silly that he got caught so easily. Oh well it’s his first time betraying someone. Also I find it a little crazy Pax got caught if he has time powers. They must be pretty good at what they do. I’m interested though, apparently Apollo claims that Shadow was supposed to be the protector of wolves? Sort of like a Transformers thing. One thing that I find interesting is that Apollo doesn’t seem to be a part of the prophecy. We see the winged wolf (the fourth wolf in the prophecy). It’s giving me a bad feeling. Hmm, I’m guessing that Apollo will be the fifth wolf. As for who will die out of the prophecy wolves, I’ll have to guess either Prince or Apollo. Apollo may turn on them, but will make it up with some sort of sacrifice. Or Prince will die in order to protect Astra. Also Shadow getting mad at the fact that his wolves aren’t getting the job done shows how lazy he really is, he just can’t do it on his own. Since he can transform the wolves into other creatures, he might just turn them into something stronger. Anyway they were fun, can’t wait to see what’s in store.