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To you dedicated readers
Thank you to Moon’s Biggest Fan / Reader. Although it has been five months, I came back. I came back because you are all so happy reading these stories. So I want to make you happy too with my stories. I noticed I got 4 downvotes or something, which makes me laugh. It makes me laugh because it means people see my message, which means it is indeed possible to be renowned. So, let me present to you my gift to the world. My story. - Ben
The Arks: Over Heaven
Prologue: Ill-Fated
The day was sunny. The day was bright. There were no clouds in sight. All that filled the skies was the light that poured in from the sun. It seemed like the perfect day. After all, for dear Samuel, it would be his last day at the confines of Terran High. The last day he’d have to spend in a hell that he called school.
Samuel was standing amongst a crowd, along with many other waiting graduates, each one wearing a black gown and graduation cap. They were watching the stage with anticipation, eager for the big moment.
“Are you excited?”
Samuel turned around, facing one of his closest friends, Nova. Nova had a big smile on her face, and her long black hair fell all the way down to her chest. Samuel had become friends with Nova during their freshman years, when they were paired next to each other in English. Samuel had forgotten his pencil at home accidentally, so he borrowed one from Nova, and thus blossomed their friendship. Samuel never really got close to anyone else after that, Nova was Samuel’s greatest friend, and no one could surpass her.
“Well, of course I’m excited! After we finally get our diplomas, we can get outta here and do whatever we want! We won’t have to wake up so early for school and stay up so late for homework, it’ll be like heaven!” Samuel answered.
“That does sound pretty cool, but things will be so boring now! We won’t see any more school fights or get any juicy gossip!” Nova complained.
“Uh huh, since that’s the most interesting thing in the world,” Samuel replied with a hint of sarcasm, rolling his eyes.
Before Nova could talk, someone walked up to the microphone and tapped on it, startling a large majority of the crowd. Standing on the stage was Mr. Mo, their principal. He was looking extra nice today, with his gray suit complementing his blue tie and combed back gray hair. He had many wrinkles across his face, and he had a jagged scar running down his eye. Many people always asked how he got that scar. He would always reply,
“When I was little, I would scratch my face whenever I got itchy, and one day I scratched a little too hard.”
Some speculated that that wasn’t the case, and that he got into a fight and that’s how he got it, but who knows? Samuel didn’t think it mattered anyway. He probably would never visit this school again, so it’s not like he needed to know how he got that scar.
Samuel’s thoughts were interrupted by Mr. Mo’s abrupt speech.
“Attention everyone. It truly has been a wild ride for all of you, huh? You spent the past 12 years, and now here you are, ready to move onto a new chapter and become men and women. You all worked hard to get here, and I applaud you for that. But now it’s time for you all to move on to a bigger future. It might sound scary, but I’m sure you all will do well as long as you put your heart into it. That’s all I have to say, now I’ll pass the mic onto our valedictorian, Aurora Romero!”
Everyone erupted into applause, cheers, and whistles as Mr. Mo stepped off the stage. Soon, a girl with glittering dark brown hair stepped onto the stage. Unlike the other graduates, she wore a white gown and white cap, and she had a red plume which reached all the way down to her shoulders. Her walk was elegant and filled with confidence.
“Seriously, take a look at this girl!” Nova groaned, “She got a 4.80 GPA. How is that even possible?! Does she not have a life or something? And she’s the best on the tennis team too, there’s no way she didn’t cheat on her finals!”
“Now, it’s not that big a deal. I know you always tried your hardest,” Samuel comforted her.
“It just doesn’t make sense, she’s naturally talented, it’s not fair!” Nova complained. Nova stopped talking, and looked back at Aurora with a pissed off look on her face. As Aurora began to speak in the microphone, a few girls in the crowd were cheering her on.
“Greetings, fellow students. It truly is an honor to be your valedictorian, to be here standing in front of you to give you my thanks. My appreciation goes out to my parents who supported me my entire life, my teachers who helped me get to where I needed to be, to my friends who were there whenever I felt lost and hopeless,” Aurora paused, as she seemed to be contemplating if she should keep on going. “And to my boyfriend, who I will never forget. He may not be with us anymore, but he’s the reason that I have a future now.”
Everyone went silent, as they seemed to be giving her a moment of silence to mourn. Not even Nova scoffed, as she looked on solemnly.
“But, enough of me. Mr. Mo is right. Starting today, we move onto a new chapter of our lives. We’re going to need to tough it out, because life won’t be so easy now. You think high school is hard? Just wait until you get a job! That’s what my parents would say, at least.”
“She’s gotta be kidding,” Samuel muttered as he turned white.
“And even if you weren’t the greatest student, it shouldn’t stop you from being a good person. You can do it, you can do whatever you want to do, just let your heart and mind lead the way, and you will always succeed. Life is hard, and tough times will come, but tough people will last,” Aurora closed her eyes and smiled, rubbing her eyes a little as she said, “That’s all for now.”
As Aurora stepped away from the microphone, Mr. Mo ran up and grabbed the microphone.
“What are you guys waiting for? Get ready to throw your caps up in the air!”
Everyone began to murmur in excitement, as they took hold of their caps.
“TEN! NINE! EIGHT!”
The soon-to-be adults began to chant the countdown along with Mr. Mo. Samuel and Nova joined in too, smiles growing on their faces.
“SEVEN! SIX! FIVE!”
The screaming grew louder and louder to the point that Samuel’s ears started to hurt.
“FOUR! THREE! TWO! ONE-”
Suddenly Mr. Mo let out a loud gasp of pain, as he fell to his knees, clutching his wrist. Everyone stopped the countdown, and whispers began to radiate throughout the crowd.
“What’s going on? What happened to Mr. Mo?” the people asked. Just at that moment, Aurora screamed out too, visible pain across her face as her wrist began to bleed. As soon as Aurora started to cry out in pain, many more people in the crowd began to feel it too. By the dozen, everyone was writhing around, an unexplainable pain in their left wrist.
“AGHHHH!” Nova screamed as she fell. Samuel caught her, yelling, “Don’t worry, I got you!”
The sky above them suddenly began to generate clouds, and the blazing ball of fire they called the Sun began to move around the sky at an alarming rate. The sky seemed to be generating streaks of red, blue, and green, spinning around in a triangle and aiming right down at them.
Samuel looked up in horror as a bright light enveloped everyone, and before he knew it his conscience slipped away.
That’s all for the prologue! I know it's a little long at 1200 words. Please leave feedback or comments, and any questions you may have! Trust me, the actual Arks will be brought in Chapter 1, this is just the beginning. - Ben.
This so Moon again, and wow, we’re hoarding the snail section. Welp, this will get peoples attention about my story, that’s for sure! I just have a little message for one of you, you’ll know if it’s you or not;
Do not copy my story. Im watching you.
I understand it’s different, but no. No. No. NO. Yur a scammer! Please just don’t. I don’t want someone taking my ideas.
🙄😖😔 I’m not usually mad. But right now I’m MAD.
-Moon. sorry, guys, I’ll be fine in a few hours. I’ll write the next chapter tonight.
GitezGood, Wyvernian’s around. He’s just been busy like most of us. He has been posting his chapters like Origins of Salizar. In fact he released one just this week. And yes, an imposter has been posting in Bob the Survivor’s stead with the mentioning of him being gay (this is not Bob) and in more rare cases Moon or others. It happens from time to time but this one has been more persistent than others. Also I have looked for your YouTube channel, but sadly haven’t seen it yet. Do you plan on showing on there your models for Ark mods? Just curious! :)
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
The Red Pike
Nerva’s Story Part Eleven
By Red Dragon
“Sir, we have found Tirana. She was just captured by Christopher and Siyu.”, said one of Nerva’s soldiers. “Good. Try to capture all three of them but kill if necessary. I will accompany you on Tyrannis.”, Nerva responded. “Yes sir.” They rode until they saw the house, and then they attacked. A giga charged along with trikes, Rexes, stegos and other creatures. Eventually the massive giga started destroying the house out of its rage, and Christopher, Siyu, and Tirana escaped into the redwood forest. They could not hide forever though. Nerva knew eventually they would be eaten by Thylacoleos or found by Nerva’s soldiers. It would just be a matter of time...
Hello New person!!!! Welcome to Achatina!!! This a hub of writers and readers who read and write stories and share their thoughts on them, growing as a healthy community!!! We do ask to keep conversations in here family friendly and no language (stories can have more mature themes being at most TV14). I hope you enjoy being here!!!
RelatingHen, it’s okay!! No real harm has been done to the majority and speaking from myself, I see no need forgiveness as I see nothing that needs an apology. You’re new here and didn’t know what age category we went to (which is at max, is TV14). It’s been a long time since someone mentioned it and it was good to bring up again. I’d just say if you don’t know something or have some questions on questionable things. Ask about it, because it may not have been created by us and may have been made by writers that existed here before us. But if you see something questionable, asking is a lot better than trying to direct.
Until Next Time!!
_PrimalApex:)
Wow, my search web wasn’t updating the messages for me and I missed this. First of all, RelatingHen, I don’t know why you would ask us to calm down when me and Break-It were simply stating we were confused. I knew everything that was going on. I was just conversing.
Second, PG stories… The trauma, conflict, pain, gore and death our stories have are most definitely more TV-14.
I’d say it’s pretty chill in here. Don’t worry Break-It. Things like this have happened before and are bound to happen again sometime. I’ve been here for three years now after all lolz
Syl, you can calm down though. But I might advise, or more of beg, that you wait until you’re older to think about things like that. You don’t understand the sick parts of it and are being pulled along with all the others that will eventually regret it. I will not tell you what to do though. I don’t want to talk about conflicting things here.
I’m all good here, so here, here’s a cat for yall
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—Moon
RelatingHen. Firstly, not all of our stories are PG. Yeah we try keep our stories language free and never use inappropriate content for our stories. But we aren’t PG. If I were to rate stories, at most they are TV14 or PG13 for Violence and Blood with very, very mild language. The content we talk about though is always PG. But our stories are not. Now I have never looked into The Chosen Rex as it wasn’t any of us who made it. But from what I’ve heard, it’s appropriate for any of us to read.
Secondly, some of the people are actually exposing personal info (specifically Syl). But others are just trolls faking to be other people. Specifically the one who said they were Bob the Survivor.
Lastly, not everyone’s able to see all of these conversations daily. So they do miss a lot. So people do need to be given a rundown of what happens.
And this is pretty calm, in fact it’s really quiet. And I have enjoyed your newest chapter too!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Hey PrimalApex!
Thanks for responding to my tip. I decided to read your Journey series today and I thought it was pretty cool. Traveling through the Arks to get home, a tribe looking for them… it’s pretty good. I think it deserved more love. I hope to see more chapters soon!
Chapter 6 of my series is on the way so catch up when you can. Glad you like it.
-RelatingHen8906
from Ben
oh yeah i should probably clarify what Mr .Mo/Ma's name is:
Ma: Horse
Mo: Do Not
In Chinese language certain words have multiple meanings, like Mo and Ma, and have different definitions based on the context.
But digging deeper, these two surnames do mean something else in different contexts. Ma can mean mother (Mr Ma literally based his surname off his mother's), and Mo can also mean "to die" or "there is none who". Both meanings of Mo can tell a different story. "To die" could foreshadow that he wasnt meant to survive on the island, "there is none who" signifies his ambition to escape the loop of the ark, and because he changed his identity to hide from his father.
Anyway heres a fun fact:
There will be a short Chapter 50.5 and then Chapters 51 and 52 will be centered around Warren and Sam. Hehe. Okay later.