Moon, chapter thirty nine of TOT was great!!!! I love how they were abstracted, and it’s funny how Zeer just glanced around then was like nope, and flew away!! 🤣. And Tago and Jethezzar recognizing each other just makes me more curious for what will happen in See!! The only complaint I have is that you spelled Michael wrong, but that ok! Other than that the chapter was awesome!!! Bravo.

Ben, chapter forty was pretty freakin cool!! Lol, I love how Ben was running up the stairs and he was like “ugh I knew this was a bad idea” 😂😂. Stairs are like his mortal enemy or something…

The battles were epic, and i think you portrayed the characters perfectly. The Keymaster seems to be always there, always lurking. Lol, I can’t wait to see what happens to Michael now that Ben has found him…

I can’t wait for the next chapter of TOT!!

-SunnyFox57