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Wyvernian Chapter 5 was really nice and set it up well for 7! Or 5 or 6? The only complaint i have is Samuel felt a little out of character. He already knew the PoP cast were making their way to the mansion (as the TAOH cast saw the dragons flying in Chapter 3) and he wouldnt get so scared easily, that is unless they tried to eat him. His goal was to investigate why the dragons also made their way to the mansion like them. So he wouldnt have backed off unless they actively tried to hurt him or his allies.

Other than that everything else was really good! Also you forgot to name Chap 5. Please give us Chap 5 name here in Achatina, or Yi Ling

Lol Drain is still in that state ๐Ÿ˜‚

Okay anyway that means Chap 6 is being written by PrimalApex, MGG will write Chap 7, then i will do 8

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