from Ben

Arks Over Heaven Chapter 30 might take a little bit longer to come out compared to the previous ones, it’s going to be very very special and may or may not have some scenes in there that are going to require a lot of care and thought put into. Soo perhaps expect Chapter 30 out by Saturday or Sunday. Sorry about that, but trust me that this chapter is going to be great!

Woah, I guess you are right PrimalApex… if Sunny confirms it herself. I thought that when Tom said that it just meant he was smart and he kind of understood James’ feelings… but in that chapter I realize that he said he was going to “convince” their parents to visit one last time, that sort of makes sense now. However I wonder what the Krakos has to do with this? They are beings created by extreme anger. And also I’m wondering if Tom’s power makes him sick? Well it does, right, but to what extreme?

Sandmaster, Chapter 13 was super cool! Nice work showing what species the inspectors were, although the Rock Drake part confused me (even though this scene was super awesome!). What does it mean by they know they’re lying? Lying about what, going on the ship? I don’t really understand this part, can you please clarify? Well the Shadowmane, Eclipse sounds pretty cool, and I wonder how Fuzzball’s going to get out of this. He needs to hurry fast so he can save his family… Well I’ll be waiting for Chapter 14!

Also SunnyFox I somehow didn’t see the Prologue of TOHM in Fenrisulfr, I guess I just skipped past it or something. Whoopsie daisy. Mmm, interesting, a first person perspective story is always a lot of fun to read and write. I spent a year working on a 1st person perspective once and I’ve grown fond of it, I connect with the main character more tbh. So let’s see here… main character is Hailey and she’s gone a bit mad which is why it’s called House of Madness, neat! Also has a Hyaenodon named Brutus… A Hyaenodon’s Scar reference? Nyeh heh heh. Also the dream she has, I think that’s supposed to be Tortuga, isn’t it? The square is the town square, and that house is the boat house that the Buckleshoot family sail away in. Now I’m just wondering how Hailey dreams this…

Also Chapter 1 really shows how crazy Hailey is… schizophrenic? Her reflection talks back to her, and Brutus talks. And I wonder what Marv’s relation is. Butler? Sounds like it. And I wonder what his real name is. And Hailey’s father seems like a king, although I don’t think it’s Tom, Tom would never marry someone else he loved Leah too much. Probably someone new. Also Hailey’s design reminds me of like a reverse Enid Sinclair, that one character from Wednesday Addams show.

And Chapter 2… DANG! Tom just killed his father! And probably his mother too. Which is kind of sad, his mother didn’t really do anything wrong, it was his father. And I guess we’ll never know Edward’s medallion power 😞. I don’t blame him for killing his father, his father didn’t necessarily CARE about them, he just wanted him and James to be king. And for some reason now they want Tom to not be king? I’d be upset as well. Tom doesn’t need to go through all this. So unless he’s been doing some actual villainous stuff and hurting innocents, I stand by the fact that Tom didn’t really do anything wrong. And since Jenny is still alive, I wonder if we’ll see her in the future.

That was nice reading, nice chapters everyone! Later!