From Ben

Nyeh! Just my luck! As soon as I post my message Chapter 23 of Shadow Phoenix and Chapter 12 of Overseer release! Well that doesn’t matter! As payback, I have released Chapter 28 of The Arks: Over Heaven in Desert Titan. Take that! (oh yeah Chapter 27 is also already out in Desmodus lol. Just in case someone didn’t notice).

Sandmaster, Chapter 12 was a lot of fun to read! The Glowtail that Fuzzball decides to keep as a friend is a nice little touch, although I’m wondering whether or not “Buddy” will have some special moment in a later chapter. It sounds like he will. And also I cannot believe the Mosasaurus was killed! He was so awesome! (even though he only appeared for a little while, he was a lovable goofball). What could have even killed him? Probably a Plesiosaur or something… However, I think you should elaborate what species the ship inspector and his crew is. It would be so cool!

Uhh, what else. Oh, adding a new ship in Overseer? Hmm, I wonder what type of ship. A battleship or…

Oh. OH. THAT type of ship! Well, I can’t really blame you. It’s a hard habit for me to break 😅. I’m sure you’ll do great, just be careful and try not to make it too obvious who it’s gonna be, okay? The fun is making it unpredictable! Or wholesome sweet and spicy. Either one works.

Chapter 23 and 24 were very very interesting to read SunnyFox. Cole and James are just fighting over Arianna… except Cole isn’t really fighting and he’s doing absolutely nothing and… Cole this ISNT GONNA WORK OUT!!! Come on drop it and just go out with Toe Crusher- I mean Tabitha or something it doesn’t have to BE this way. I mean you decided to go with her! That’s a start, right? There’s more to her than toe crushing I’m sure! And don’t deny the feeling James… otherwise you’re gonna regret it!

And zamn Chapter 24 was crazy, love is like, everywhere in my eyes. I really feel bad for Arianna, I really do. She def doesn’t like Cole, but feels forced to go out with him because he’s her friend and she doesn’t want to hurt his feelings. You don’t have to worry Arianna, he isn’t going to do anything crazy to you! I think. Also woo hoo James for the win! Doing the classical give her his jacket trick to keep her warm and cozy! And man… “sadness filled her heart but she didn’t know why.”

Samuel says, “It’s because you’re spending time with the wrong man! In situations like these, don’t deny your heart!”

Oh, and James left his jacket 😏. I bet you a romantic scene in Arks Over Heaven that Arianna is going to go to James to return it or James is going to go to Arianna to get it back (I guess I’m going to have to write a romantic scene).

Ah. That was fun to read. Well thanks for the treat Sandmaster and Sunnyfox! And before I leave, I have one more question for you. What’s your favorite ‘romance’ between two characters in the stories you’ve read so far? And specifically for Sunny and others who’ve written romance, which was your favorite one to write? I’ll answer my question in a follow up message tomorrow.

Later!