To: a bunch of people

From: Ben

Okay, first off, Chapter 13a of The Arks: Over Heaven is out! Multi-part in Pteranodon. It’s one of my favorite chapters I’ve made, besides 10 which was also a blast.

Before I go over answering questions, Sandmaster, try not to be too hard on yourself. I haven’t personally read your story just yet BUT I’m sure it’s not that bad. Some people dislike stories because they don’t like fanfiction, so they just dislike every one they see. Some might not like your stories for certain things, but that’s fine. As long as you have an open mind, and are willing to grow and have a big imagination, you’ll have great potential to be one of the stars of Dododex.

Anyway Wyvernian I’ll take that Singleplayher into consideration. Maybe i’ll finally beat the game, although I don’t want to edit any stats. I’ll just use single player settings. Wish me luck!

First off, SunnyFox, yep, i did get a few names from the Dododex platform. There’s a pretty big reason for that. I’m not saying what but it’ll be in the future. Also, the other agents (Agent Dragon and Agent Swamp) are also authors of Dododex. All three agents, along with a few others who may be making future appearances, collaborated and worked on a story called “The Red Pike”. Very inspirational and powerful how they all got together to work on that. So who knows? You may see some familiar faces in the future 😉. This was supposed to be a tribute to the platform.

Anyway, I’ll start with Hyena’s Scars. So, I read all 10 chapters and I like it, not as much as Tortuga, but I still like it! It’s headed down an interesting path and i’m wondering how everything will play out. I think Zora’s a little naive and childish at times, but hey she’s barely gone out for her first hunt. And I think Roxy’s just pure evil, killing children and old dogs. Like what kinda psychopath? Anyway, she better have a good reason, cuz I hate her guts rn. I’m wondering if you got the name from that one FNAF game. Also I like Axel. He sounds like a nice dog, I hope he isn’t killed off later down the line.

Moving on to Tortuga. Okay, the next few chapters were VERY interesting. Starting with Chap 7, woah. The medallions are pretty cool, they remind me of the specimen implants of Ark. Each one has different color, so it has to have some meaning. Jay: Green, Jack: Blue, Emma: White-pink, Josephina and Jaquin: Gold. What could it all mean??? There’s gotta be a meaning, i’ll look into it. And I have a feeling that Emma’s gives her powers, future foresight? Seems like it. Maybe the other medallions have powers too. Also I love Jay, this guy is way so sarcastic.

Okay for chapter 8, new character, Eric! Cool guy and all, probably likes Elizabeth. Because they’re the same age? Idk, this is the only part that confused me. I hope Emma and Andrew, and Eric and Elizabeth, have more complex relationships, and more chemistry besides just being the same age group. I’m sure you can do it though. You seemed very knowledgeable about the topic. Anyway Emilia actually has interesting stuff going on, which is pretty nice. It seems she doesn’t like the island. I wouldn’t either, just being cooped up like that. I believe in her though, I’m sure she’ll escape. Anyway, Michael is a creepy weirdo, so I don’t like him. He reminds me of this one guy from my school whose name also happens to be Michael. He’s also weird. Aaron Jr’s knowledge of plants and mushrooms is really nice, I hope other have hobbies too. And I just realized that the mayor has multiple sons, and from what it sounds like none of them sound good. This could probably lead to a lot of chaos, they’re almost adults so they’ll be the new mayors soon! (according to Jack). Anyway that’s it for now.

Yeah thats about it. Seeya later.