From Ben,
From Ben,
You seem off to an interesting start Nugget, although one thing you could add are quotation marks for Dialogue,
Ex: "I do not like animals," he said.
Ex: He said, "I do not like animals."
Ex: "I do not like animals," she said, "And I don't like you either, so quit it."
For question and exclamation.
"Do you like me?" I asked.
"No, I hate you!" she spat.
Good luck on your story.













