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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion
Stories Tips
What are some stories about the cosmo? Memorable cosmo stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
Hey OMEGA09, nice seeing you again! I saw your story The Falling Tides in Cosmo and in Yuty. Anyway I just wanted to drop by to give you tips as you asked at the end of your chapter.
Okay so so far there isn’t much to say since it’s just the first chapter but I still have a little bit to give. You can try making your chapters a bit longer, maybe like double the length of Chapter 1 would be a good start. Also you don’t need to put parts for shorter chapters, it’s only if it’s super long. So that’s it for formatting, but since the story has just started I’m not too sure where you’re at for story elements. For now just focus on giving the main character Dylan some background like what he used to be before the ARKs (which you already did he was a gamer) and some other things like his morals (who is he willing to harm for his own survival?) and also his personality traits. Is he nice, or maybe mean? You can work on that for Dylan, and also for any other characters you plan on introducing in The Falling Tides. Well that’s about it, I’ll be waiting for the next chapter!!
From Ben
OMEGA09, hopefully u see this Chapter 3 of Falling Tides was nice! Wish the chapters could be longer though. Like, idk, the length of ten of these combined. Is that too much? Idk, most of these chapters can be combined though. Or extended in other ways, like describing the scene and all that jazz. I hope Dylan and Sarah don’t get together though. That would feel too cliche, to me at least. Don’t know why I’m pointing this out. Usually the main male lead and female lead always get together by the end of the book. It’s just icky in my opinion especially if their relationship isn’t that well developed.
Uhh any other advice, no dont think so. Just see my last few tips and yeah. Thats about it.