Dododex

ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion

From Ben

OMEGA09, hopefully u see this Chapter 3 of Falling Tides was nice! Wish the chapters could be longer though. Like, idk, the length of ten of these combined. Is that too much? Idk, most of these chapters can be combined though. Or extended in other ways, like describing the scene and all that jazz. I hope Dylan and Sarah don’t get together though. That would feel too cliche, to me at least. Don’t know why I’m pointing this out. Usually the main male lead and female lead always get together by the end of the book. It’s just icky in my opinion especially if their relationship isn’t that well developed.

Uhh any other advice, no dont think so. Just see my last few tips and yeah. Thats about it.