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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion
Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Sunnyfox, I just read the chapter ten and eleven. These chapters are the chapters that make me wish the villain gets what they deserve. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Mr.GhostGamer, it’s good to see your back!!! I’m glad to see you’re also going to continue Hope’s Cry. I caught up to chapter 21 and I’m excited for chapter 22!!!! Also if you are trying to find out where my teaser is, it’s in Achatina. If you can’t find it looking through there, you can probably find it by searching it on Google by typing Journey Teaser.
Anyways, Until next time!
-PrimalApex:)
Wow! I feel like the Overseer right now! Just staring at these tips and preparing the next chapter of my story! Sorry I haven’t been posting! Was working on both school and my next chapter! And wow Ben! I’m glad I started reading your story! It’s very intriguing. Although I don’t trust Skylar! She seems sus….(*Among us Music*) Neddy and Ruby seem too like each other very much! But I think Samuel is still attached too Nova…. Yeah I don’t think that’s going too work out for u Aurora. And PrimalApex, I haven’t read ur story yet.(Idk where it is.) Moon, can’t wait for next chapter. And also…. WHY DID U KILL ORBIT???!!! MOON WHAT HAVE YOU BECOME….. YOUR A MONSTER…. Welcome slyveevee! Angel… keep up the good work! SandMaster, I love the glowtail! And Too myself, CONTINUE WRITING CHAPTER TWENTY TWO!!!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
Wow I can’t believe I’ve been her for three months! It’s felt like a year! Also Ben, I just read ur new chapter. 😉…..I’m 99.8 percent sure that Star is Nova. Anyways….I might of posted two more chapters. Also PrimalApex I read ur teaser and…I can’t wait to read your story!!!!
-SunnyFox57
Moon!! I’m glad you liked my teaser!!! I really can’t wait for everyone’s thoughts on it once I start posting it!!
While that is so greatly tempting, I don’t want to spoil anything for anyone including myself. So I gonna pass on asking questions. If I miss something that isn’t plot changing I can always quickly edit it. And if something major happens or doesn’t happen in your story that does or doesn’t happen in my story, I would like to keep it like that.
I’m going to be sad when The Obelisk comes to end. Not a depressing sadness, A bitter sweet sadness. It’s what got me started on reading in this community.
And it’s okay!! We’re all waiting patiently. I’m so excited for chapter 97!!! But take as much time as you need to get it the way you think is perfect.
Wyvernian, I read chapter 31 of PoP. Nash’s predicament is getting a lot more interesting. Also don’t worry if you accidentally made it sound like Mario. It just means you came up with a good plot for your story!! I can’t wait for the next one!!!
Ben, I read Chapter 31 of The Arks Over Heaven, I enjoyed it!!! And I can’t wait for the next one!!!
Well, until next time!!
-PrimalApex:)
P.S, for those who read my teaser. I’m going to tell a hint about something in my teaser. I may or may not have hinted towards what the creature is. As I said in the teaser I didn’t spoil anything about Journey, but I did hint towards the creature and didn’t say that I did. I won’t be answering questions if you ask any. But I’ll enjoy hearing your speculations. :)
Ark Tales (Chapter 3 of 20)
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The gates to the huge metal structures swung open, and Hanson and Greta stepped inside, followed closely by Bill. A huge table sat in the middle, with several chairs around it. All the chairs were empty. At the end of the room sat a huge wooden throne, upon which sat a tall, muscular woman with a tanned skin and brown shoulder length hair. She wore hide boots, metal gloves, a cloth shirt, and hide pants. She looked up and stared at them. “Ah, Bill, you have returned.” She peered at Greta and Hanson. “Who are they? Are they the delegates from the Saber tribe?” “No, my chief. I discovered them near Drayo’s Cove and brought them here.” The chief bolted upright, suddenly furious. “You did what?!” She screamed. Bill recoiled slightly. “That is Chief Zargot’s territory! You can not just take men from that area!” “With all do respect-“ He started but she cut him off. “This could start another turf war!” She yelled. “One that could bring us into debt with other tribes, which could-“ Bill had enough. He grabbed Hanson’s arm and forced his sleeve up. “They have no implants!” He yelled. Chief Thunderstar stopped. “What?” She said, startled. “They have no implants.” He hissed. A moment of silence settled in the room. The chief finally spoke. “Send out messengers. Call in our scouts.” She said, face white. “We need to hold a meeting with the tribes.”
MrDemonRealz
Ark Tales (Chapter 3 of 20)
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Hanson stared ahead at the blazing campfires that lit up the wooden structures ahead people cluttered around the campfires, placing meat on them and talking in low tones with each other. The man marched Hanson and Greta along, pistol drawn. A huge metal structure stood in the middle of the campsite, the only one of its kind. Two men with dirty, sandy hair stood near the structure, heads bowed together in conspiratorial positions. The man stopped. “George! Edward! What are you two doing?” The two men jumped, then slowly turned in guilt. They were twins, with impish faces and dirt covered faces. They held their hands behind their backs in an attempt to hide something from sight. “Owhh, crikey, look it who it is.” The one to the left said.
“Yeah, old Bill Dilley, Chief Thunderstar’s personal assistant.” The one to the right teased. “I know what you two were doing.” The man called Bill Dilley said. He held out his hand. “Now turn over the explosives. Another stunt like that could get you kicked from the tribe. We’re already struggling as it is.” The twins grumpily handed over the C-4 charges, and Bill tossed them in his pack. “Now, go do something useful.” The twins looked at each other and sighed. “Such a spoilsport, innit he?” The one to the left said. “Aye.” The one to the right said wearily. They walked off, heads low. Hanson felt Bill prod him with his pistol. “Well, get on now, nothing to see here.” He said gruffly. Hanson and Greta continued walking.
Hope you enjoyed,
MrDemonRealz
Good to hear from you Sunnyfox!!! I’m glad to hear you got time to relax and rest!!! I promise I’ll finish my story. I may bash my head against the wall with writer’s block but I’ll finish it. I read chapter eight of THOM!!! Whilst I have an idea on who it is and possibly why he went after Paul and even Sarah. I am going to remain silent and let it play out without trying to guess aloud. I can’t believe it’s only been three months with you here!!!
Ben, I’m excited to see what you have in store for the next thirty chapters!!!! I can’t believe you’ve only been here for six months here too!! It’s felt so much longer than that. And to think I started writing here just over a year ago. It’s felt much more than that!!!! And I hope it continues for longer than that!!!
Wyvernian, I won’t ask any more questions about PoP until you are okay with it. But yeah if Caesar ever catches up to Salizar and doesn’t kill him. First thing they should do is put him in a psych ward and have a psychiatrist with him every day.
Well, I think that’s it for now. Until next time!!
-PrimalApex:)
The teaser for Journey was amazing rahhhhh
I loved it! And also really wanted MORE! I honestly cannot wait to see what it is about. If you have any questions Apex about anything related to The Obelisk for yur story, I will gladly answer them! The Obelisk is almsot over, I swear lmao—
Still working on 97! Bare with me!
—Moon
Wyvernian, whilst I don’t like to put mine over anyone else’s. I would like to suggest that you check out my teaser of Journey first, since it’s the shortest currently with only one chapter released at the moment.(Just search on Google Journey Teaser and it should pop up in the top, it’s in Achatina). I would then suggest you either start on Ben’s The Ark Over Heaven which is reverse aerial order or Sunnyfox’s The Terrible Demise of Tortuga (which also has a prequel and sequel currently) which is just alphabetical order from Allo. Hope’s Cry is also a good one to read and is also alphabetical order starting at Achatina. I still haven’t yet gotten to the other’s (please forgive me, I am a slow multi reader). I hope this helps, Until next time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Yeah SandmasterXD, it has been really quiet lately. This inactivity has happened before, but I can’t remember if any lasted as long as this one. Also are you still looking for name suggestions? Because I might have a couple ideas if you still are. Anyways, Until next time!
-PrimalApex:)
Wyvernian, I read chapter 30!!! I wonder how Salizar is doing that. I mean he’s able to see all of their actions and yet they all seem to be on different maps or something like that. So it makes me wonder🤔. I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Ben, I guess I’ll shear from you in the future. I’ll be here when you come back. But I do hope this inactivity will end soon. But this happens every so often. It most likely will end here soon. But until we hear from you again. See ya around!
Well, Until next time!
-PrimalApex:)