Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
To, MrGhostGamer
From, Ben
MrGhostGamer, I read Hope’s Cry Chapter 14, and I was like “Oh my ggoshhh here come the army!” But one thing I am wondering is, are the rogues really bad guys? Mara Kong seems pretty chill if you ask me. Maybe Buddy will question it later down the line, or Dawn or the other people who were tasked to take them down.
Cheers!
Guy, I just found out I have an imposter in Orc!!! I just checked it out for the first time today and saw someone say that they were doing a weekly search of Dododex and came across this. And read through the comment and saw who wrote this. And he went by apex, same style I usually do except for the ‘until next time’ I say at the end. I wrote back to him asking if went by the name or is an imposter. But just on the safe side, I’m warning everyone that there might still be an imposter running around using my name. I hoping not but it’s still good to warn just in case.
Until next time!!
-Apex :)
To: Many
From: Ben
GhostGamer, I took the time to read your story Hope's Cry and I liked it. It felt like a fever dream and a comedy show at time. It reminds me of stories I used to write when I was little, with my friend. I like it, although there are a few things that would work. I dont think Dawn's species was ever elaborated, remember that. Also I like the characters, they all seem fun but Im sure you especially have big plans for Jake/Buddy. The 30 year coma seems weird, but works somewhat. And the fact that the main character is a Purlovia is pretty cool too. Keep it up, Ill remember to like your stories too (i mostly read stories on PC where you cant like). Idk who Shadow is, you might have to ask Moon. Never heard of them.
Reader, i didnt know you even had a network of stories in Electrophorus, ill be sure to check it out,
And guys, remember there are plenty of other fanfictioners out there actively posting (Reader, ME) who have plenty cool stories 😁 remember to check them out
Cheers.
Ben, if you want too read my story it’s in The Island filter abc order. It’s called Hope’s Cry. I hope you like it! And I might change my name too ChromiumGaming? Maybe 🤔. But uh… goodnight for now. Toodles!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
P.S. Is Shadow still writing in Dododex? I love her/his stories and I would love too talk too her/him! Pls respond!
To, All
From, Ben
Chapter 8 of my story is officially out (has two parts, please read them in order if you read it). Oh yeah I guess I should mention the name of the story, LOL, it's called The Arks: Over Heaven.
Moon, SunnyFox57, thank you for the advice, I've always struggled with adding romance because I never know if its good love or not. The first time I added romance to a story it was more a 'love at first sight but they both denied it' type thing, and I wasnt pleased with the end result. Loves a powerful thing, it should be handled with care in stories. You'll see it blossom in my Ark Fanfic, its up to you though to decide who its between 😉
Cheers. And have fun reading and writing.
Ben, here are a few romance tips. I tend to write a lot of romance unintentionally so I have a LOT (at least I think) of experience.
There are several paths you could take in introducing the “love birds” to each other. (You have to introduce the characters before they fall in love and build relationship)
The characters meet and hate each other even though they are working together.
The characters meet each other and the main character loves the other character but she doesn’t love him back…yet.
The characters meet and instantly fall in love. (Personally i wouldn’t go with choice three because you need to build RELATIONSHIP. But you can if you want to.)
A good way to build relationships between them is to go on a journey together or go through trials together. Also another way to win a woman’s heart in a story is too save her life. Eventually the characters will have this this feeling that they can’t explain, they will be drawn to each other. After a while they will realize they love each other and will do anything for each other, no matter how dangerous.
Hope this is helpful to you. Sorry if it sounds strange, I’m much better at writing a romance story then explaining one.
I hope all of you are doing well. I’ll be praying for you guys. #FF4L. ✌️
-SunnyFox57.
P.S: I can’t wait for 96 Moon!
Moon, what I meant was that people like and respect you. A lot. Whereas the only thing I’ll be remembered for in Dododex is ‘the first person too fight with Moon.’ And do you know if there’s another person in Dododex named Ghost other than my friend? If so I can rename myself. Thank you for you guys support! And please continue with your story Moon! Ben I haven’t had the pleasure too find and read ur story so can you please tell me where that is? And Moon if your a real writer (which I know u actually are.) then I have suggestion! You know how The Obelisk has really good grammar and stuff like that? Well maybe you could like copy and paste it onto like a writing app (I personally would suggest Pages! It’s a really good writing app! I don’t know if it’s on computer tho.🤔 ) and you could like edit it and like make it like the characters are humans. (Bc I think you have too get permission from the Developer of Ark too use it’s Characters🤔. And unless you know the dev you can’t get in contact with him. He doesn’t respond too the reviews anymore.) And u could turn The Obelisk into an actual book. Then everyone can read it. Although you would have too finish writing first. If you like this idea (or if u don’t) pls respond! I hope this didn’t waste any of ur day while reading this. I hope u respond soon!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
To Moon
From Ben
holy moly i just finished 95 and not only im impressed, but shocked at what just happened. I can tell that your writing skills and all that have improved a lot since Chap 1, and I could feel the emotion of the characters in this specific chapter, but man looking back at it there were definitely signs, such a sad chapter. Fantastic. Motivates me to finish my Ark FanFic, once and for all.
plz red my story -_-,
End.
Wyverain , are you talking about me(MrGhostGamer) or Ghost the author of the paw print path in Dododex? If you were talking too me, thx I always wanted people mad at me(insert sarcasm) And I’m not trying too be mean or rude… im trying too resolve this fight WITH moon and SunnyFox57. I thought it had ended. Then Ben came. Then Ben apologized. Then people started yelling. I don’t understand how this fight works? I’m using SunnyFox’s phone. And plz don’t start a fight with me. I get VERY mad when being blamed. So this post SHOULD clear the confusion. I’m not trying too be mean or rude… but if you start fight then a fight I can get VERY worked up. Now I don’t want too fight and I bet you don’t either. Now plz don’t fight with me. I hope this clears the confusion. And this post isn’t directed towards just Wyverain, im warning you(not in a bad way) don’t fight me. I hate being bullied. (Not that u r bullying me just don’t bully me.) If you start a major fight… I WILL leave Dododex. Or just stop responding. I hope this clears the confusion. Thank you.
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer2.0
(P.s if you want me too change my name, if there’s another person named ghost on Dododex, I can. Plz accept my peace treaty.)
From Ben,
You seem off to an interesting start Nugget, although one thing you could add are quotation marks for Dialogue,
Ex: "I do not like animals," he said.
Ex: He said, "I do not like animals."
Ex: "I do not like animals," she said, "And I don't like you either, so quit it."
For question and exclamation.
"Do you like me?" I asked.
"No, I hate you!" she spat.
Good luck on your story.
HJK here, formally known as XNK, anyways id like to share a story. the trilogy of my ark play through as i tried to cure my swamp fever.
It all started when i woke up. base fine. still have swamp fever, its a pain.
i was held up in the underwater cave near herbivore island with my 2 tribe-mates. (cell and jaguar).
we were travelling to the swamp with our argents, it was a peaceful ride nothing special happened. so we got there, i threw out a cryopodded allo and started to search the swamp, lots of kapros and sarcos were biting my ankles. i delt with it because all i really need is leech blood, it was a long journey across the swamp. (reminds me of the righteous) once i FINALLY found them i started to harvest, i got about 120 and decided to go home, it was very late at night and i was falling asleep as i made the antidote. cell had tamed another sarco. when he came back i gave everyone an antidote. we were cured. but that doesn’t mean were safe… (next part soon)
-HJK
The Red Pike
Siyu's Story
Chapter 7
Siyu sat in a tree keeping watch, Xiaochou perched on his shoulder. Below on the beach sat Christopher and Tyrana next to a fire. The was an army of terror birds and dire bears stationed around their temporary camp. He looked up at the Redwoods in the distance. Once again, Nerva had caught them off guard and now they were all paying the price. The Demon King had lost its temper in the midst of the fight and destroyed his home, killing Harvey who was still inside. His friend was dead. Nerva had taken it too far.
Xiaochou shrieked at the sky. Siyu looked up. In the distance, heading towards them was a soldier on a pteranodon. One of Nerva's scouts, no doubt looking for them. Nocking an arrow, her aimed at the air in front of the scout and released. The ptera dropped to the ground, the soldier falling off its back. The scout's scream was cut off by a loud thud and crack as he hit the ground. Siyu lowered his bow. That would by them a little time, but Nerva would be here soon. Tyrana and Christopher stood. "What was that?" Christopher said, reaching for his gauntlets.
"One of Nerva's men." Siyu leapt from the tree and kicked sand over the fire to put out the flames and extinguish the light. "Get ready. Nerva won't be far behind."
Tyrana whistled to her tames, turning them agressive. Christopher put on his gauntlets. Siyu grabbed a bag filled with grenades from the ground. He had taken Xiaochou's proficient aim at throwing poo and decided to teach him to throw grenades instead. The would need all the help they could get. Siyu slung his bow over his shoulder and drew his sword. War was coming, and they would be ready.
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