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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Hello everyone! My name is SandmasterXD or you can just call me Sand. I have known people such as Moon, PrimApex, Ben, Wyvernian,SunnyFox and some more people! (The lists too long lol) I have joined the dex in late 2023 and dint reply since September, and I’ve see we have a lot of new writer!
I am the author of:
-Overseer
-All the Light We Cannot See
-The Great War of the Biomes
-Ark Broadcasts
I am looking foreword to meet all of you new fellow writers and read your stories!
Bob the Survivor, I missed you. I miss pretty much everyone here when they leave minus like 2. It's sad when people leave and never come back, but it's expected. This isn't really a social app. But it's good to have you back.
-DinoSlayer, thinking about the past and realizing that they should have started being a part of the community much, much earlier.
Follow the creatures in the island for more
chapter one: the gate
Once there were 2 brothers one older the other younger the older one was always making scientific discoveries and the younger brother was more adventurous the younger brother was celebrating his birthday and the older brother took him to his lab to show him something he showed him a rocket bigger than the younger brother had ever seen it could fit 500 people in it easy. “This is the first ship today we are going to fly it.” said the older brother “wow” exclaimed the younger brother
“So I take it you are in” said the older brother “you bet arekkusu” said the younger brother “open the gate!” Said arekkusu and the doors on the roof opened revealing a portal “now let’s get our suits on” said arekkusu as he handed the younger brother a space suit. “Now let’s go” said arekkusu “WAIT, what is that portal for” said the younger brother “oh that is how we get to deep space without using much fuel” said arekkusu as he was boarding the ship “now come on” said arekkusu “ok ok” said the younger brother “alright fuel is full all systems are green turning on the engines now” arekkusu said as the younger brother sat down. And they flew through the gate
Ark Mobile facts (subject to change)
1: The Island is completely free to play.
2: Scorched Earth and Aberration will be there at launch, and they will be 5$ each.
3: NORMAL XP GAIN
4: All creatures, nothing was cut. This will be the full game.
5: 600 Single Player Tame Limit, 100 for multiplayer.
6: Keys. Keys can be used to shorten the grind, and can be gotten in small amounts for free every day.
7: Single player cheats cost about 7-8$
8: Primal Pass returns, with every map being free to use, XP boost, free keys and stuff, and access to features early. Cost, 7.99 per month of 80$ a year. Kinda sucks.
9: Official servers at launch, unofficial server support will be added later.
10: Play testers have been playing it, so it should be smooth and have less bugs at launch.
11: Expected release date: 12/23/2024 (Soon)
12: 7 GB of storage for base game, extra 3 for every map.
Also, Sylveevee, I hope you can find your dog soon!
- An over hyped for Ark Mobile DinoSlayer. (I finally have a phone good enough to run the original Ark Mobile)
Hey SpecialRaptor!!!! You’re Alive!!!!! It’s good to hear from you, even if it isn’t good news. Sorry to hear that you’re grounded and not able to write more at this time. I hope it won’t be a permanent thing and you will get to write as soon as possible. And I hope you’ll stay around, A LOT has happened since you were gone. And you might want to catch up in your spare time. Anyway, Until next time!!
-Apex:)
From Ben
Hey everyone, how’s it going?
MrDemonRealz, it doesn’t really matter if there are some similar aspects. I checked your two chapters out and the only thing that is similar is 1. Main character doesn’t have implant 2. The way they get there. I do not think there is a problem here so keep carrying making your story, I’ll be sure to read it once your third chapter comes out 👍. I like it so far, although why was John and Tantum removed? I know you said that it would be easier to only focus on 2 people I still think it’d make more interesting if more characters are put into the fray, and John and Tantum would be pretty cool.
SunnyFox, it’s still pretty impressive your story is 10,000 words! You gotta remember most writers here on the Dex barely make it past the first few. So you’ve accomplished something most writers have not.
The lore drop is in Chapter 18 itself… although it’s very subtle and is not directly stated. What would the fun in that be?
Also thanks for saying that about my story, I didn’t know it was your favorite! That’s pretty cool. This is the first time someone say my story is their favorite on something… thanks.
I read Hyaenodon’s Scars Chap 11, glad you got around to writing this one. It’s a little short (much shorter than Tortuga!) but still so much more to uncover. So it turns out Roxy is within the Hyaenodon’s tribe already… almost like an undercover, I wonder how no body was able to even figure it out. She’s like a ghost. Well, she can’t be a ghost because Axel can see her too. I wonder why she is killing innocent hyaenodons, it’s pretty sad that a baby died and an old one too… 🙁. Now the Council of Hyaenodons probably thinks Zora really is a murderer, especially Nathaniel.
Moving onto Tortuga… WOW you got a lot written down in the past two chapters! Darn it I can’t believe I didn’t catch on with Emma getting hit twice compared to Jack and Jay! I should’ve said something about that in the last post… I wonder why Hawkthorne did that. Maybe she sees herself in Emma and wants to release her anger onto her, which is totally uncool btw, don’t do that Hawkthorne!
Anyway moving onto Mayor Creepazoid. Geez louise, this guy doesn’t know when to stop. He clearly doesn’t know how to read signs… He is a huge red flag, a huge red flag that is blowing in the wind for EVERYONE to see. He doesn’t even care about the fact that Emma is crying or that she was hurt. He only cares about getting with the pretty girl. Also Creepazoid can’t even get his facts straight with the age… he was the son of the mayor I’m sure he should know more about the people on Tortuga. Also Emma definitely cooked Creepazoid alive, you go get it girl! And I guess I exist in the Tortuga Cinematic Universe because she mentioned me 😁, or maybe that’s just a 4th wall break. And Creepazoid is definitely afraid of Aragorn, her father. He does NOT want to talk to him about how Emma doesn’t wanna go out with him.
Anyway moving onto Jack and Jay, I think I know what Jack’s power is. Or what the medallion/necklace gift is. He probably can heal wounds super fast, huh? Maybe a little bit of pain nullification too, in which case… that’s pretty cool! Pretty useful ability. It makes me wonder what the other Peterson's children are, especially Aragorn and Arianna. Do they have medallions too? Or maybe I’m wrong.
WOO HOO EMMA AND ANDREW, COUPLE GOALS! These two get along so well man, I can see the chemistry improvement right away SunnyFox good job on that. Also Aragorn accepts Andrew now… that’s sweet. He got the fatherly approval! The ship’s sailed for those two now, (and Eric and Elizabeth it seems). And Aragorn is a great dancer, huh? I agree with Jay, maybe he is a good swordfighter. Maybe that’s how he protects the family.
Creepazoid must be pretty mad that Emma decided to go with Andrew. I hope he doesn’t do anything rash… I really hope he doesn’t do anything to Andrew I’d actually jump out of my seat and be like “NAHHHH”. (Also Jay called him a creepazoid, LOL!!!)
Emma must be really in love because she giggled (and she never giggles according to the story). These two are so cute together raghhhh.
And finally, Aragorn and Arianna talk about a girl who became mad with love because of her ‘friend’. I wonder who she is talking about? At first I thought she was talking about Tom’s fiance/wife/lover (who is now gone ☹️), but it doesn’t make sense they’d talk about Tom lightly. Maybe they’re talking about themselves, which is even cuter. And from that conversation it seemed like they were enemies to friends to lovers, which is really COOL.
Alright enough blabbering, but those last two chapters were really fun to read. Seeya next time. Chapter 19 should come out tmrrw.
Ben, wow y’all have a LOT of words in y’all’s stories. My story only has 10,171. Also I’m so happy u love my story! I honestly didn’t think anyone would bc it doesn’t seem very Arky bc it’s AFTER the arks. And yeah, “Mr. Creepazoid” isn’t gonna dance with Emma. Nuh uh, no way. Now I won’t spoil anything else for u, the next chapter is coming soon!
Also I just read your new chapter. I’m very curious about Aurora and who this “she” they are talking about. Also that gold locket? What is that? And Ben, his powers are so unique. I have so many questions! I can’t wait for the next chapter! Anyways…cya around!
-SunnyFox57
From Ben
Samuel and his team would love to leave a message for impersonators, but they are too busy surviving to leave a message.
Instead you can hear from Paul, the coolest guy ever.
“Yo dudez! Paul here.. i hear there been some impersonators! not cool dud3! also, i think i hear something coming… i dont have much time left my dudez and gals!!! Okay there’s a dinosaur coming it’s time to go. Ba-bye, I’ll see you later!”
Chapter 17 has released in Ichthyornis! It’s a very lengthy chapter. Have fun reading!
More stuff to talk about. GhostGamer, that’s really really interesting that Jake is not Buddy. I guess I should’ve seen it coming, because they both have completely different personalities… I hope Jake can find his parents or at least some of his family safe and sound. I took a look at your news, and I didn’t even know they were releasing a Mufasa movie. Interesting movies. Also it’s very interesting that this new story you will write will be in the same universe as Tortuga… I’m intrigued now. And Neddy the Nerd isn’t directly inspired by Neddy the Noodle, but I do watch his videos. I love his survivor stories and especially Journey’s Core.
Sandmaster, your poem was very nice, I’m sure Moon appreciates it if she reads it. Although are you using a different device or something? Anyway, for the Sandmaster anyway, I read your first two chapters and it’s pretty good so far. I like how it’s based off Feroxes, just remember to give Fuzzball and any incoming characters personalities!
Chap 17 of Tortuga was fun to read, Sunny. And it seems you’ve caught up to me, good job. This old hag of a teacher isn’t much fun though, is she? Mizz Clara Hawkthorne (Also LOL, Mizz instead of Miss she really is a hag). Although I think you should’ve shown how Mizz Hawkthorne was mean and strict to the students, it would’ve made for really funny interactions even if it takes longer to write!
That’s all for now. See you on the flip side.
Tired of impersonators? Here is a little message from the Peterson family:
Aragorn: “I feel loyal to protect my fellow fan fictioners just like I protect my family so pls stop impersonating us.”
Arianna: “You can do better than this. Don’t worry we’ll help you be a better person.”
Jay and Jack: “We love mischief but not this kind. It is not nice.”
Emma: “Make the right choice and be nice!”
Josephina and Jaquin: “We don’t know why ur doing this but pls stop. We don’t know if ur angry at us or what. If you’re angry a good tactic is to take deep breaths and explain kindly how u are feeling.”
-The Peterson family sponsored by SunnyFox57.
From Ben
read Tortuga Chap 15 and 16 and it was pretty chill. Also i was like, woah, Tom is their uncle?! Well that just makes it even more heartbreaking. Also the fact they had a band is cool. It sounds like Aragorn is a great singer judging from his song.
I hope Aragorn's children do not suffer the same fate as Tom. Well thats all and seeya later.
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