To: DiploLover
To: DiploLover
From: Ben, & KM
DiploLover, Chapter 25 of CON was great! The inconsistency with Reign’s accent isn’t too noticeable, but it’s a good thing that you noticed it so you could fix it in future chapters. I’m glad she’s getting more screen time tho. Also the Crystal Wyverns’ appearance was really cool. The teaser for humans was also really nice. I can’t wait to see their role in the story. Will they side with Adira? Will they side with the Five Wolves? Or will they be their own, chaotic destructive force, only working for themselves? Also I like the map / worldbuilding for this story so far. So all the maps are combined into one (obviously spread far, far apart). I remember having dreams about this occurrence. If you’re wondering, in-game the maps are completely separated, each on their own separate “ARK”, as the game title suggests. If you go to the edge of each map, you’ll notice a barrier blocking you, and in-lore this barrier serves as a way to protect everyone inside from the outer elements of space. Yes, all the maps reside in space, orbiting the Earth, with the only exceptions being Extinction (takes place on Earth) and Genesis (Part 1 takes place in a simulation, Part 2 on a spaceship). You may not have mentioned The Island, but the mentioning of Carnivore Island was a giveaway that it was The Island. Anyway I can’t wait to see how the worldbuilding and the new humans intertwine with the rest of the story!