Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Someone is making a mod map for ascended called Pandora it’s not based on Avatar.. if it’s based on my description of my stories map I’m gonna be so happy, I am totally ok with someone making it a real map. It’s probably not though, Pandora is just a good name but still. Also wildcard should totally have Ubisoft (they made the avatar videogame) or someone make an avatar themed map and creature mod and avatar skins that would be soooooo cool but they’d have to make a deal with 20th century/Disney for the rights unless it was rip off but I don’t know how Disney would handle that.. probably shut it down knowing them.
I can’t remember the creators name but you can find it in the mod store under maps it’s in progress still so it’s just blank i didn’t look at it yet, but I think the picture was a bongo or some antelope type creature, actually the creator might have been “bongo studios” or something like that
-Wyvernain
Moon, I have to say that Yelena Belova fits so perfectly with chapter 96!!! As I was listening to the music, I could easily imagine the chapter play out!!!
Wyvernian, I read PoP chapter 24 and 25. (Spoiler alert from here on out with everyone’s stories I mention!! ) Nash’s accomplishment was astounding!!! But I and I feel bad for Bones, his poor eye. Also, I can’t wait to start reading the rewritten chapters of HoP!
Sunnyfox, I finished TTDOT this morning and going to start the prequel tomorrow or the day after!!! It was so good and it was sad at the end with Aragon and Arianna dying!!!!! At first its story and setting felt a lot more like a bridge between Ark and Atlas. And while in later chapters it was explained that this was post-reseed project, it still felt a lot more like Atlas and it made the story that more interesting!!!
Ben, I finally got caught up on your story!!!! I am glad that I did read TTDOT before I read your chapter, but it did leave me with a lot of questions! The naming the Carno part was funny!!! And chapter 25 was really good!!! I am really glad to see survivor Bob return and see Apex (the original) got a character in your story too!!! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
I think that’s it for now, though I might’ve forgotten about something. Until next time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Hi everyone, this is Apex. The reason I am writing this is because I am going to change my name due to the fact that I am not the first Apex nor am I the only Apex currently. I guess I wasn’t as thorough as I thought when I first picked my name🤷♂️.
Now why don’t I just say what name I am going to use, well because I have three choices and I wanted to see what everyone’s opinions are on the three I have. And basically all of them just add on to my original name. I have a personal one I am leaning towards but I’d like to see what everyone thinks about these three options.
1. Apexx
2. PrimalApex
3. FutureApex
Also Ben, I read chapter 23, I enjoyed reading it! I am still waiting for my dododex to update to read chapter 23.5 or whichever chapter you have released currently. It takes a while for mine to update but I can’t wait to read it!!!
I think that’s all that I have to say for right now. Until next time!!!
-Apex:)
MrGhostGamer, to answer your question about what are we talking about. It is some of the lore of Ark. Specifically about Arat Prime, if the Earth is still in tidal lock or not after defeating the King Titan and how that would affect what Arat Prime would be like if it came into Ark as a map. We also have been discussing how many explorer notes we’ve collected and how we collected them and it seems to have started with what all our opinions are on the new oasisaur. To answer your second question. It depends on if we are going to talk more about the lore of Ark. It also depends if Wyvernian is okay with continuing this discussion and if he would like to have more people join the conversation. But I think he probably wouldn’t mind since it is up for anyone to really discuss it with us. So if we do continue talking about the lore and Wyvernian doesn’t mind having you join the conversation. Yeah you can join.
Well, I think that’s it. Until next time!!
-Apex:)
Okay so Ben,
My favorite POV is probably third person. I do like First but third is my favorite.
My personal favorite book or story outside of Dododex is 100% Michael Crichton’s Jurassic Park, it’s an incredible novel and is definitely worth reading before or after ever seeing the movies.
This one is a little bit more difficult for me, but I would definitely say friends to lovers for romantic story arc.
Favorite Ark Map, I think for me, it’s Ragnarok or Fjordur that either tie for favorite or are switchable for first and second. Center and Genesis part one are very close behind but definitely Ragnarok and Fjordur are my favorites.
Favorite Ark creature. This one is hard just because of how many I really enjoy but I think it’s the Managarmr. The speed, great mobility, decent weight and good stamina make them one of my favorite go to travel mounts. I think after that, it would go Shadowmane second and Spinosaurus third.
Well that my opinion for your question Ben. Until next time!!
-Apex:)
From Ben (Part 2 Message)
I’ll start with PoP Chap 23 first. Wyvernian, you did a great job on this chapter as you usually do. I can definitely see that Ron is becoming more of a leader, I guess he’s becoming a captain of his own, eh? Also I like how Ping is becoming more smart, even though he may be a little naive or not so bright at times, gathering the Kairuku and persuading them to join their side by telling them the fish is gone because of the Ice Queen… LOL. Well I guess that’s all for now… Hopefully the heroes of Pandora manage to complete their journey safely. Although it makes me wonder what’s next after this season/series 🤔. Im sure you know the answer to that.
Next up, Tortuga Chap 22 and 23! Wow there’s a lot to dissect for 22… Okay, so apparently pirates are set to head to Tortuga because of Josh Swan, who is apparently a traitor within their pirate group. And their leader is Captain Piranha… I am wondering what Mr. Swan did to ‘betray’ these pirates. I’m guessing from their last names, Captain Piranha is a vicious, aggressive man who will tear apart at his enemies with no mercy, while Mr. Swan is a gracious, perhaps peaceful man. Perhaps Mr. Swan didn’t agree with the ways of the pirates, so he set off on his own and maybe did some damage to the pirates as a result. Perhaps that is how Captain Piranha here got his scar. Mr. Swan cut it in his desertion. Also ewwww, Captain Piranha does NOT brush his teeth. But this explains a lot about Mr. Swan, and how he knows how to fight with swords, he used to be a pirate!
And finally for Chap 22, it seems the British are here… I guess after Extinction happened and the Arks landed and the Earth was purged of element, some nations were reestablished, and Britain is one of them? I wonder how powerful these new nations are, if they even can be called nations, perhaps they are no more than towns. Also oh no… Captain Shortstacks- I mean Hugo thinks that Tortuga is a pirate haven, I surely hope that the town of Tortuga isn’t terribly demised (it’s definitely getting destroyed now that I said it).
Chapter 23 is next on my inspection list, hmm let’s see here, Eric probably has a crush on Elizabeth, and woo hoo Andrew asks Emma out on a date!!! Things are going great for the two, I even almost forgot about the curfew laws! And here we go Mr. Creepazoid showed up with his fam to ruin things, as per usual. He seems to be getting more demanding and bold with his moves, first of all, not cool dude, second of all, disgusting, dude. Also I guess his brothers support his creepy moves, which means there’s now THREE of them to deal with. Mike the… idk and Mickie the rat. I still haven’t come up with nicknames for those two yet. I wonder who’s like the leader of the three, or if they all just do whatever cuz they’re too dumb to actually run the town. How do they even run the town??? Weirdos. Anyway, yeah thats about it, although I do have some suggestions for the three M brothers (creepy #1, 2, and 3). Perhaps you could show how the three interact to run the town. It would be pretty cool to see their personalities (okay maybe not cool to see how creepy they are but you get the point), like who’s the smart one? The strong one? The logical one? (Although I doubt any of them are logical).
Also one more suggestions, perhaps we could see more scenes with the Buckleshoot family? I miss seeing Aaron, and I’m wondering how his tamed creatures are doing. I’d be cool to see the family chill together, see how they interact. I especially want to know what Elizabeth thinks of Eric…
Well that’s about it, you did great the two of you! Your stories almost made me forget Obelisk is on hiatus because of Moon’s broken computers… Welp, see you on the next run!
PS: Valentine’s Day is coming up… Perhaps it’d be a good idea to make a Valentine’s Special? I know I’m definitely making one.
From Ben
Sup dudes and dudettes,
Chapter 19’s out, in Ichthyornis. Woo hoo! It’s not a crazy chapter like the others, but Chapter 20 will be big because… well, you’ll find out soon. Also Chapter 20 might take longer to come out compared to the others because it’s going to be significantly longer, I think.
SpecialRaptor, great to see you after a while! Sorry i can’t respond earlier, I was very wrapped up in my story and others. It’s pretty sad that you got grounded, it happens to the best of us 😞. And a month sounds like a lot too. Well just stick it through and push through and you’ll make it easily.
SunnyFox, woah someone remembers Nova. Considering she’s Samuel’s best friend I’d consider her an important character. I tried to make her stick out and less forgettable by giving her a lot of screen time in the Prologue, but considering we haven’t seen her for the majority of the story I guess it would be hard to remember her (I wonder if people still remember the principal? Mr. Mo). Don’t worry, she’s not dead. That’s all I’ll reveal though. And I guess a little hint too, names. Yeah that’s literally it.
Also I’m assuming the medallions are a part of Aragorn’s family lineage… and thanks so much for saying that about my story. And thanks for praying for us, we appreciate it!
Blaze and Cleorapta… LOL SunnyFox that’s funny. I’m guessing Blaze or Blue would be fitting names because of the color schemes, I’m wondering which of the two I’ll pick. Or in this case Samuel.
I decided to save space and talk about the newly released chapters people made in a different message… I’ll see you in the other message! Or maybe, the other way around…
Sunny fox,
The oasisaur is a newly announced creature coming wraith the add on pack for scorched earth if you go to survivetheark.com you can find the ark news that will tell you what’s going on also I think the latest news shows up on ascendeds Home Screen idk if you own that yet or not though. You could also find it one YouTube but get ready for incredibly whiney YouTubers complaining about ark failing and it being pay to win now..
-Wyvernain
To the person who can’t find the next Chapters of The Obelisk—
The next chapters are all in order. Sometimes it just takes time for someone to write the next chapter. Starting in Snails extinguish, it goes down through all tamables in alphabetical order. If you are stuck on Gallimimus just check next section.
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