From Ben

Hi Sylveevee. I read your story, Im not too sure what to say since theres very little to go over. But according to your message its inspired or based off Wings of Fire? Never read the book but as long as you dont blatantly copy the story or text I think you should be fine. However its still a good habit to not copy, but take inspiration. Im not a lawyer so dont count on my advice but I am a writer, so what I can advise you is to take a different writing format. Your story is more like a script, and while theres nothing wrong with that it lacks details and centers the story on dialogue and not environment. The readers wont be able to imagine what the characters look like or the environment theyre in. I bet itd make your story better by lots!

Last script story I read (called The Incubator) was poorly designed and a little weird. So take my word for it!