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From Ben

PrimalApex thanks for reading Chapter 33! And that’s really cool how Ultimus’ name was inspired by that Latin prophecy I sent. And you’re totally right, The Last One does not sound as cool as Ultimus. I think this is going to be a great story, I guess I’ll be waiting for it when the next chapter drops next week! You’re a great writer I’m glad you’re here.

Anyway, I was digging around the Dex and noticed this odd story. I may have talked about it already (I think I was criticizing stories that are just scripts), but one of the characters in this story is named Moon. Now this may just be a coincidence as it’s a creature story, but I’m very suspicious about it because a chapter was posted named “Moon’s Birthday”, get this, on Moon’s birthday. Now maybe I shouldn’t be speaking since most of the characters in my story are based off real writers here, but I always am open to change, retcon, or remove characters if the original requests. Besides, I always treat these characters with utmost respect as they deserve it for being excellent writers here on this platform. But this person is using “Moon” in a really weird way… Earlier chapters portray her in a romantic relationship with this other character and if the character is based off the real Moon then it’s frankly disturbing and gross. This person hasn’t posted in a hot while, but still.

If anyone can, please go check it out. I don’t really know how to proceed from here on out. I kind of want a second perspective on this, yk? Maybe it’d be cool if Moon saw this. It’s in Fasolasuchus, if anyone’s wondering and the story is called The Incubator. Thanks in advance.

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