Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Chapter 17 is out!!!
Also, I’m thinking of making a story about a Theri I call Cato. The only Theri that hates me. Like Carl with Schwable. Except with a Theri.
You might’ve noticed the first chapter a few months back. I’m gonna make chapter 2 soon. It’ll be mainly a story on my encounters and experiences with Cato.
Anyway.
-RelatingHen8906
PS: when does Fleet of Fates Chapter 9 part 4 come out?
To: DiploLover
From: Ben, & KM
DiploLover, Chapter 25 of CON was great! The inconsistency with Reign’s accent isn’t too noticeable, but it’s a good thing that you noticed it so you could fix it in future chapters. I’m glad she’s getting more screen time tho. Also the Crystal Wyverns’ appearance was really cool. The teaser for humans was also really nice. I can’t wait to see their role in the story. Will they side with Adira? Will they side with the Five Wolves? Or will they be their own, chaotic destructive force, only working for themselves? Also I like the map / worldbuilding for this story so far. So all the maps are combined into one (obviously spread far, far apart). I remember having dreams about this occurrence. If you’re wondering, in-game the maps are completely separated, each on their own separate “ARK”, as the game title suggests. If you go to the edge of each map, you’ll notice a barrier blocking you, and in-lore this barrier serves as a way to protect everyone inside from the outer elements of space. Yes, all the maps reside in space, orbiting the Earth, with the only exceptions being Extinction (takes place on Earth) and Genesis (Part 1 takes place in a simulation, Part 2 on a spaceship). You may not have mentioned The Island, but the mentioning of Carnivore Island was a giveaway that it was The Island. Anyway I can’t wait to see how the worldbuilding and the new humans intertwine with the rest of the story!
Wyverain, that’d be so cool if they made a What if show about our stories!! But yeah….I wouldn’t want them ruining them. 😐. Not that my book would be ever made a movie or series anyway. There’s some stuff in it that’s based on other movies or books so….I don’t want to get accused of copying. Anyways…cya around!
-SunnyFox57
Sunnyfox, I read the last chapter of THoM!!! I enjoyed it very much!!! And Cole’s Back!!!!! I had very mixed feelings about him throughout this chapter. From Yay!! to NOOOO!!! back to Yay!!! It was a great chapter and I can’t wait for the next story!!!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Moon, Yeah I think you’re right, we might need to slow down in here. I think I’m gonna stop using the story page on the Dododex website. It’s nice, but I think I’d rather use it when I can’t find a new chapters.
I can’t wait to see your animations!! Whether their Pmvs, Animatics or proper animations. I am very excited to see them!!!
SandmasterXD, I’m caught up on Overseer!!! I can’t wait to read chapter 17!!! Fuzzball’s adventure is very interesting and I can’t wait to see more!!!! I am enjoying it very much!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:) for last time tonight.
Ben, take as much time as you need to finish your story! I can’t wait to read your arcs!! And I’m really sorry about killing the coolest guy ever, Paul. LOL, honestly I didn’t even realize that. And I read chapter twenty seven!! “Man, you think we can eat it?” “We shall not! Do you, by chance, know the tale of the Golden Egg?” LOL. 🤣I feel sorry for Simon and Bobby. Poor guys they don’t know what it is.
-SunnyFox57
*a hand reaches around a corner holding a note addressed to someone called Ben* *it reads this:* Ben, i see you’ve been wondering about Rachelle. Here a little hint, check out my newspaper in Allosaurus. It might….explain a few things. *after delivering the note the hand disappears once again* 🤫
-SunnyFox57
Wyvernian, I didn’t see the last message you sent. Also Yeah, I also agree with you on all that.
Ben, I get what you mean on being behind. I feel like I should be somewhere between chapter 50 and chapter 60, but I have had writers block for Journey and was stuck on 40. I finally broke through, Ultimus actually helped me with that. But don’t worry if you’re behind. Just keep working on it and you’ll be fine!!
Sunnyfox, I’ve been meaning to say this, I think that my favorite series title is The Riddles of the phoenixes series. Definitely sounds the best one to me!! Also Moon said to Rune in Achatina that she would put animations on her future YouTube channel.
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
Apex, nvm I just had to scroll down a lot. I see it now.
Sunny, I totally understand not wanting to watch the animated series I’ll be watching it just because I really want to see the Dino stuff.. also it’s really hard to avoid it… I’ll report back to you once I see how much There is. My guess is it’s probably only the first episode and then flashbacks (until season 3 because of mei yin and Diana..) but I’ll see. It really makes me mad that they can’t just put it in as a background thing no they gotta base like half of the show/movie/game off of it and every single character who hears about it is just unrealisticlly ecstatic, like they wouldn’t be making such a big deal about it if it was a man and a woman but since it’s two of the same gender neither of them can die, everyone has to be super excited, they CONSTANTLY talk about it and they have to have a perfect relationship. It just gets redundant and repetitive and takes away from the overall plot. Sometimes they don’t do this like the Jurassic world Netflix show didn’t make a huge deal about it but like dragon prince dedicated basically half a season to it, it got to the point where I just skipped it all because it was completely unimportant they were literally background characters that didn’t really matter at all but they gave their love like three scenes an episode.. anyway I’ll tell you how far wildcard went, but my guess is very far based on their track record..
-Wyvernain
Also Sunnyfox, I just went and read it. It isn’t just you being targeted. It’s all fan fiction. He just brought up you as he’s already encountered you. But his point is that none of us should be writing our fan fiction in the story section. And that the story section should be only for true Ark stories. Which has already been declared that fan fiction is allowed by the website designer of Dododex. So don’t take it personally as he was aiming for all fan fiction writers here.
Until next time!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
PrimalApex thanks for reading Chapter 33! And that’s really cool how Ultimus’ name was inspired by that Latin prophecy I sent. And you’re totally right, The Last One does not sound as cool as Ultimus. I think this is going to be a great story, I guess I’ll be waiting for it when the next chapter drops next week! You’re a great writer I’m glad you’re here.
Anyway, I was digging around the Dex and noticed this odd story. I may have talked about it already (I think I was criticizing stories that are just scripts), but one of the characters in this story is named Moon. Now this may just be a coincidence as it’s a creature story, but I’m very suspicious about it because a chapter was posted named “Moon’s Birthday”, get this, on Moon’s birthday. Now maybe I shouldn’t be speaking since most of the characters in my story are based off real writers here, but I always am open to change, retcon, or remove characters if the original requests. Besides, I always treat these characters with utmost respect as they deserve it for being excellent writers here on this platform. But this person is using “Moon” in a really weird way… Earlier chapters portray her in a romantic relationship with this other character and if the character is based off the real Moon then it’s frankly disturbing and gross. This person hasn’t posted in a hot while, but still.
If anyone can, please go check it out. I don’t really know how to proceed from here on out. I kind of want a second perspective on this, yk? Maybe it’d be cool if Moon saw this. It’s in Fasolasuchus, if anyone’s wondering and the story is called The Incubator. Thanks in advance.
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