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What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
From Ben
Hey everyone, Ben here. How y’all doing?
Hello LunarDragon, good to see you and welcome to Achatina! I’ll be waiting around for your story. Uhh there’s a bunch of others you can read if you like reading. There’s a whole list somewhere in here. Ask Apex for it.
GitezGood I’d join butttt i don’t know your username and all that so I can’t find your sever. Plus it’s a non-ded server so that’d be harder to get together and all that. We’d have to schedule something.
OMEGA09, Chapter 3 of Falling Tides was nice! Wish the chapters could be longer though. Like, idk, the length of ten of these combined. Is that too much? Idk, most of these chapters can be combined though. Or extended in other ways, like describing the scene and all that jazz. I hope Dylan and Sarah don’t get together though. That would feel too cliche, to me at least. Don’t know why I’m pointing this out. Usually the main male lead and female lead always get together by the end of the book. It’s just icky in my opinion especially if their relationship isn’t that well developed.
MrGhostGamer, Chapter 4 and 5 of Life Before was fabulous! I don’t like Jackson though, his German accent is annoying. I’m guessing they’re gonna try to find a way onto the ARK. It’s a bit different from the typical ARK story, but still pretty cool. I hope we get more background on these characters though.
Sylveevee, Chapter 5 of War of Aberration was cool. A bit confusing, especially with the whole Sylveevee and Pat betraying the others thing, but I’m working on it. Sarah seems cool but we haven’t seen her enough yet so I don’t care about her too much. A part of me does though anyway. Don’t think anyone’s forgotten about WOA though, just busy writing. Also plz don’t spoil plz put spoiler warning and then space out the message 😪
Hey Moon Tales Girl, thanks for taking the time to read all the stories people have here. Not many people do that and either post their own story and that’s it or read one story exclusively. Anyway, Chapter 12- uhh i mean Episode 12 of Moon Tales was really nice, feel bad for John now. I can see why he’s more willing to just work for Sand Clan compared to Andromeda. Hopefully John snaps out of it. Sand Clan is really shady.
Nazgul, the two new chapters for Convergence were amazing! I’m guessing that the main character for Book 1 is going to be Spark. Also liked the build up for the mega tribe on Ragnarok. Most stories have pre-existing mega tribes which is pretty boring in my opinion. However I like the take that Convergence does. Also I already like Eddie I know I’m gonna like him a lot. I’m guessing that Spark is going to ask Cole to help him lead the army with him. Hoping we get to meet more characters, maybe from other towns. Anyway that was nice, can’t wait for the next chapter!
Wyvernian, Chapter 10 of OOS was awesome! Welp there goes Dr. Flight. Dawg did not need to die. I’m mostly wondering about how Ryker and his gang are going to ascend off the ark and go to the earth if they can’t get to the dragon trophy. It’s making me really curious, since they seemed to have spent quite some time on the earth from the epilogue in POP. Anyway, that was nice. Dr. Primalis is probably gonna die now tho.
Sunny, Chapter 24 was… grahhhhh but really well done. Well, that’s that. At least she’ll see him again. Still so curious about this new mysterious Shadowy Figure 2.0. They obviously know about Andrew and Emma and about the medallion and her future-seer sight, and inflicted a painful death for her (#1 opp by the way), but how do they know? We don’t have as many hints this time as Shadowy Figure though. I don’t think it’s the Master. He probably wouldn’t go out of his way to kill her on his own. And if he had the power to do that wouldn’t he just go after everyone else? Still. Interesting to think about also i lowk would have freaked out better if the spoilers didn’t get to me guys reminder not to put spoilers unless you have spoiler warnings or its super long.
Moon, Pandora Chapters 13 - 14 were phenomenal! The flashback scene with Bria’s father’s (who we now know is named Wind) relatives was awesome. Lune clearly is afraid of or is disgusted by Pandora, but it’s really sweet that Wind still cares about her. Sasha is probably my favorite relative right now, because she doesn’t care about the fact that Pandora is different from the other wyverns in obvious ways. I loved the foreshadowing at the end of Chapter 13 with the rocks surrounding Sasha, hinting Wind’s fate. I caught that detail fast and I’m still pretty suspicious of why Pandora chooses not to tell anyone. Maybe it’s because she finds it hard to talk to people. I’m also a little suspicious of the lightning wyvern who claimed to be a cousin…
Chapter 14 was also really well done. I’m betting that Bria’s friends are going to play a bigger role now. Bria’s dream was also really creepy, and the owl was really really cool. Owls typically symbolize wisdom, knowledge, and spiritual type stuff, but seeing one in a dream can symbolize death too. Mysterious creatures, they are considered. We know Bria won’t die since we know she’s ‘Mother’ in Chapter 1, which takes place after the events of Pandora, but we do know that the Vardiland will suffer lots of death in the coming events. The owl also speaks German, and the words it speaks roughly translates to “Hello there”, “Please don’t remember” or something like that. I have a feeling the owl appears more often than we assume, and this is the reason why Bria doesn’t have good intuition of the future that Pandora does. I like the magical element of this, which plays into the overall larger world of Fjordur, which is based on Nordic mythology. I’m still trying to figure out what the owl means though. It might be Pandora herself trying to make Bria forget so she doesn’t interfere with her plan, since the owl has those creepy eyes like Pandora does.
Overall they were great chapters and worth the wait. The mystery of Pandora continues…
Yeah that’s about it seeya.
To, SunnyFox57, MrGhostGamer, Moon
SunnyFox57 I also copy paste my stories from another document then to Dododex, it's so much easier than just starting on Dododex on phone. Personally I prefer Docs, since it's a lot easier imo to use than Word, and theres a Docs app on the phone too so I can do it directly.
MrGhostGamer, I don't recall if there was anyone else on this platform named Ghost, but considering it's a popular username maybe someone's already used the name. Changing it is up to you. And I dont think anyone will know you as the first person to fight with Moon, you seem like a nice person like we said, Im sure you and Sunny will leave behind a good legacy. And as for my story it spans from a Prologue to currently Ch7. You can find the prologue under Achatina, and the rest of the chapters are posted in Aerial filter in reverse (starts with Wyvern will end with Archaeopteryx). I'll of course find myself reading you and Sunny's story when I have free time.
Moon, huh, thats pretty interesting. I didnt expect you to be working on THREE other stories at the same time as Obelisk! Idk who can do that but youve gotta be pretty dang determined if you can work on so much and still make expertful stories (pretty sure MrGhost or Sunny also working on multiple stories too, mad props to them). But hey, Wattpad seems like a good start. Im sure youll find an audience there (unlike me). But I guess that means we're opposites, I despise writing animal POV stories, it's just too much of a hassle and human POV's I feel and relate to a lot more.
Cheers, and I'll see you all in a future message. I'm glad to come back.
- Ben
(PS: Can you give me some tips on romance stuff? Im not very good at that.)
Oof, me? And OG? Really? Personally I don’t even think I’m close to being one of them. I’m probably the last of the “popular” writers on Dododex, especially since The Obelisk started out so terrible with zero plot. Maybe one day when I post my more thought through stories. I can only hope.
—Moon
From Ben,
Cool, it's over. Just one more thing though, Ghost, before you blame anyone for anything, just try to understand their perspective. Why someone does something. From Moon's perspective, she may have saw you as a troublemaker with this whole Hater League Association thing that happened and the multiple personas, and I was the one being yelled at? I'd be upset, because I tried my best to be as nice and respectful, but now it seems everyone's against me. I'd be sad too.
I don't think it's anyones fault. Just a misunderstanding that shouldnt have escalated to where it is. And I tried to understand your perspective, and the why, but I couldnt. Thats why i thought you did all this for nothing besides attention. But, you seem like a nice person. Even though i dont agree with some of your opinions, no one can be two different people at once.
Just keep perspectives into mind. Because after reading these logs, yes, Moon may have started this fight but she had good reason.
I hope youre doing well Moon, and everyone else. I've been in an annoyed mood again since my friends have been ticking me off again. Just trying to find a place where people actually share the same interests and stuff, yk?
Thats all, signing off.
- Ben
It appears I was mistaken. Sunnyfox, I’m sorry. So you had friends using Dododex on your phone, that was it? Apologies, I had thought you guys were one person trying to cause chaos on Dododex. But I was wrong, I see that now. I’ve been having an emotional month lol, I suppose I took some of it out on Dododex. A truce would be nice.
And to Ghost, I hope this sounds sincere, because I am genuinely sorry. I wouldn’t have said anything if I had known you guys were just using the same phone. I was wrong; you’re not one person and you never meant any harm.
Please don’t call me a fake writer. I’ve had a tough enough week and I’m so, so sorry, and calling me out for using a commonly mistaken English word, ‘acrossed’? You really hit the right spot, and I guess I deserved it. I would like to atone for you all by saying I’m sorry, and I’d like to forget any of this ever happened. I hope we can all mend this and be friends.
I hope you all believe me. I really was blaming you for nothing, after all. You’re right about me. I’m sorry!
Lol, I’m so stupid and sappy. I was literally crying earlier for no apparent reason, weird, I’m usually able to hold in all those dumb emotions. Yeah, this sounds super cringe now. I’m done talking. Forgive me?
—Moon
Hey everyone, Apex here! Gosh it’s been two weeks since I last spoke on here, didn’t realize how long it feels like. Just been busy and haven’t been able to chat. Been seeing new people like Ghost and X-23 (Welcome You Too!!) though I haven’t yet Welcomed any of them at all yet (and even though X-23 has been here for a while). Welcome All!!!!!! Read chapters 92 and 93, I enjoyed them and can’t wait for the next chapter Moon!! But yeah, haven’t been gone, seen what’s been happening and just been quiet. I definitely missed a lot of the conversations but I’m definitely going to try to keep up as much as possible now!!! Until next time, which I hope will be soon!!
-Apex :)
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