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From Ben
Yo!
PrimalApex Chapter 1 was really cool! Ultimus has amazing potential. And I totally agree with Sunny, it doesnt seem the Extinction event occured if the Terran Federation's still around, right? And this doesnt seem to be the guy who buried Reuben/Rueben. Hunter has his own business going on. Well Im excited for what you have in store for us!
MrGhostGamer I cant believe youve finished Hope's Cry!!! Woo hoo this is amazing! Well, that was a satisfying conclusion. I bet they will have the good ending they seek for. Well your new story Shores and Stars sounds really cool as I read the first two chapters. Im guessing Ares is the main character, and Ian is the one who built the "ark" of this world. He sounds crazy. Not my Ian! Well biggest thing im wondering is if this takes place on the same timeline as Hope's Cry.
And Elizabeth is alive!!!
I think. I hope.
I guess laters. I hope I can make Chapter 36 soon, but no promises.
Wyvernian, review on Star Wars: Revenge of the Zest.
Star Wars Imitation: 10/10
Scene Used: 9/10, definitely one of the greatest scenes.
Food References: 10/10
Ark Related: 0/10, but that doesn’t matter whatsoever on here.
Style of Writing: Script, Review on style: depends on the person, I say 7/10. I like script style stories.
Entertainment Purpose: 1000/10
Originality on Dododex: 24/10
Total Score: 1060/10!! This was hilarious!!! I loved it so much!!!
Well, Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
hey reader glad to see you around 😀
Everyone, idk when the next chapter will be out daylight savings threw me off.. a cliff… and it’s gonna be a busy week I think so it could be a bit and this also means I haven’t read anymore of anyones stories.. I think I’m to chapter 5-7 of AoH though.
Moon, I know your computer broke but are you ok? I haven’t seen anything from you in a month or so. I might have just not seen them though.
Also any Minecrafters out there, off topic but.. CAN NOT wait for the new wolf upgrades finally they get the treatment cats got years ago, and I can go on and on about what the game needs and how it’s irritating that mojang won’t do them but I won’t. (I did. I cut it out to spare you guys 😂, and cuz this is an ark site.)
-Wyvernain will complain about older Minecraft mob animations forever unless they fix them also the squid’s garbage texture..
From Ben
Woah, lot’s happened since I posted Chapter 31. First of all, thank you so much for reading my recent chapter, PrimalApex, SunnyFox, and GhostGamer!
Sylveevee and Angel, I don’t know who’s downing everything but maybe some people have high expectations for fanfic. No clue… your stories are still fine! Although Angel I might have to pass on your story. I don’t affiliate with AI nor do I condone usage of it in creative writing. So… probably not going to read it, sorry, that’s just a pledge I made a long time ago. We as humans can go beyond and use our creativity to outmatch artificial intelligence. So, good luck on your story, but I cannot read it. Also Syl nice work using your imagination to create your original story! Much better than Wolves of Fire, or whatever it was named (the Wings of Fire parody). You’re going to do great on this one!
Moonflight, I can’t wait for The Obelisk Chapter 97! I bet something really crazy and big will happen which is why it’s taking longer than usual to release.
Aww Sandmaster that’s lame. Well I’ll be waiting! I can wait a week for the next chapter to come out. And if it’s coming out in Allo… that means an Allosaurus will be involved! Well I’m interested, but we’ll just have to wait and find out, huh?
MrGhostGamer I cannot wait for Chapter 22 of Hope’s Cry! I wonder what damage Rockwell will instill and how they’re going to deal with the Dragon… and of course when Jake and Buddy are going to meet, and I think especially important is when will Jake meet his parents again? And what crazy visions are Buddy going to see now…
Wyvernian, Chapter 31 was really cool and the Dinopithecus King sounds very awesome! However I wonder if this is just a regular Dinopithecus who’s older or the real Dinopithecus King like the boss.
MrDemonRealz, Chapter 3 of Ark Tales was really cool! There’s so much worldbuilding going on already, especially cool considering there will only be 20 chapters of this? Well you don’t post as frequently but these are still nice tidbits! I wonder who Chief Zargot is, are they a threat? And looking back at Chapter 1, Greta and Hanson probably came from another ARK… at least it seems suggested as it says that a space station exploded. Well this seems cool, I can’t wait to see what characters will be introduced!
PrimalApex, I’m studying your teaser right now, and hmm, who could this dinosaur be? Well, first of all I thought Procoptodon because they eat rare flowers, but obviously it’s not that easy. I don’t know why but I immediately thought Baryonyx… dunno why it just felt like one. But the biggest hint here is “His toe claw tapped on the metal of the obelisk base”. So this dinosaur has a toe claw, so perhaps a Dromaeosaurid like a Raptor or… Deinonychus? It makes sense because it would follow the theme of The Obelisk, of carnivores banding together, and of course a Deinonychus was literally in The Obelisk as a main character, Rust! That’s the bet I’m going with right now. A Raptor or a Deinonychus. I’m wrong or I’m right, we’ll just have to wait and find out, eh? And I totally agree with you about the end of the Obelisk.
SunnyFox57 the previous three chapters were brilliant! Your comeback… outshined, most of the competition that’s for sure. However I think you mislabeled one of the chapters, Chapter 10 should be 9, 11 should be 10, and so forth. It’s actually kind of sickening how far down the gutter Tom has gone. He really did let rage consume him. Maybe he’s been evil all along. No. No he’s not, it’s probably his dad’s fault for being hard on him! I think. Also I guess Josephina/Hailey is getting her memories back. That memory of her and Jaquin riding on Jay and Jack’s back made me kind of sad because it reminded me of Aragorn and Arianna’s death. Sniff. Also does Tom want Jay and the rest of the family on his side? Might be, and then he’ll wipe their mind like Hailey, so stay away! First line of Chapter 10/11 just took me away 😭, because that’s the line that happened on the ball… I really hope Emma and Andrew made it out of Tortuga safely. That peacekeeper Paul did, so she must have, right? Right? And Jack too? And the Buckleshoots? Also Chapter 11/12… it’s the same as Prologue and Chapter 3. But Hailey is starting to remember more! Soon she’s going to break out, I’m sure! Except for Jaquin, that’s the problem he still hasn’t escaped the confines yet, he still doesn’t remember. Also Hailey hugged Tom I wonder how that made him feel… Well that’s the only difference I spotted between both moments, but it seems Tom says the same things every time he wipes her mind. I guess it’s part of the trick, right?
Well this was fun. See you next time!
All of Achatina Story section has been archived.
Now none shall be forgotten, ever again 🙂
In the meantime? I shall wait. I’ll keep planning my story.
I’ll wait for all of you. Moon, Sunny, GhostGamer, the Biggest Fan, SpecialRaptor, Lynx,, all of you.
I’ll wait as long as I have to.
Weeks, months, or years, I’ll wait as need be.
Call my name, and I shall arrive. Or, your return will summon me.
I’ll be going inactive for now… until someone returns or something happens.
I pray this inactivity season ends soon. It’s only been a few days but it’s felt like ages. But that doesn’t matter, because I’ll keep waiting.
Anyway, Chapter 29-30 of PoP was really fun Wyvernian! You did a good job on it!
- Ben
Ah, I wish I wrote the King of Wyverns. Sadly I don't, I haven't started writing a story yet. However, I have been pondering on a story for a long time now. I hope to call it (if I do make this story) Journey. It will be a unofficial sequel to the Obalisk (here where the problem comes in of why I haven't written yet) or an alternate reality. I am not sure which one I should do. But I might lean towards this way. It follows the story of the five and possibly the rune after Moon's the Obalisk book is over. I don't want to do it without his permission nor do I want to start until his story is over. Because if I start before he finishes, I don't want to make it feel like I am forcing something to happen in the Obalisk he doesn't want to do, this is why I said it would unofficial. This is why I might lean towards the alternate reality. Just gives me more freedom to do things with my story but leaves moon's to go on it's story and not mess with it at all.
Moon, if you want to see me try something like this, I will do a prologue of the story to see if you might like it and want it to continue, if you don't it ends there. I will still wait until you finish your story to write my prologue, just to give me a head start with the full plot and to write several chapters ahead. But it's all up to you for all of it. If you say no. I don't mind never doing this story. I have been on the fence for a while now about writing this that it really doesn't matter if I write this story. I think what gave me second thoughts about was the whole the unnamed copy of moon's story.
So I guess what I am trying to say is I don't know if I will write a story in the future unless I come up with a unique plot and storyline to do.
Anyway on the edge of my seat for Chapter 77!!!!!!!
Also whoever writes Heroes of Pandora. I want to say it's Wyvernian?(sorry if I misspelled your name there) Awesome story your writing!!! I'm in the early chapters where they were captured!! I am finally getting around to see other ppls stories, as I am not good at multi tasking reading stories so I am starting with two for now, those being Heroes of Pandora and the Obalisk. I will try to read more of everyones stories!!!!
-Apex
To: DinoLover360
From: Ben
Hey DinoLover360, don’t worry I’m not sick. I have just been kind of lazy. I should be more active now though. I just read Chap 2 Part 2 and it was crazy to see that the Alpha Tribe has Nerva as a member, I’m guessing that the Alpha Tribe takes some inspiration from the New Legion in the ARK lore. Jannie also has such a cool nickname: The Spino Beast. It was also crazy to see that Jannie’s tribe had a Titanosaur all along and that John was one of the alpha tribe members. I’m curious to see what happens in the next chapter. There will probably be some sort of battle to get Jannie free. Anyway, seeya next time!
Okay so I’m gonna try and see if I get the abilities of each of the Riddles we know of right now. Starting at TTOTSP. DO NOT READ IF YOU HAVEN’T READ EITHER STORIES!!!!
Edward and Sophia: Unknown
James: Controlling Shadows, retaining memories and seeing through them. Also includes the ability to trade places with his shadow, a form of teleportation.
Tom: It is unknown at this time exactly what his is. However from dialogue it is suggested that his ability has something to do with Mind manipulation or Hypnosis.
Jenny: Ability to Shape-shift into other people or abilities to a similar degree.
TTDOT characters:
Emma: Seeing Future and Past Events. Time viewing.
Jack: Accelerated Healing, possibly more? But uncertain.
Jay: Ability to create portals capable of Quantum Entanglement/Spooky Action. True Teleportation.
Josephina and Jaquin: Unknown Currently.
I think that’s it for now, Sunnyfox I hope you enjoyed my speculations on the Abilities of the Riddle family. Until next time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Sunnyfox, Journey is a sequel to The Obelisk in ways. I really don’t want to spoil anything just yet but I say a few things. It is an alternate universe and will follow the Five on a journey. It will start being posted after the Obelisk is finished, but I will be showing something soon to show off one of the new characters. It will have some new characters and a fair number of the characters in the Obelisk right now. And it will also involve the rune. I think that’s all l’m gonna say right now but I will say more soon. Until next time!
-PrimalApex:)
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