
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Last part of Chronicles of the iron tyrants for now - I’ve made way too many spelling mistakes in upcoming chapters sorry for anyone who’s excited for new chaps (I’m just being optimistic)
Logan - the man of the crown gathered with 4 other soldiers , the first , a chinese man of 5’3 with a crew cut of jet black hair , he shrugged and rolled his tek shoulder lazily , the next across to him was a 5’7 cypriot with light brown mop of shaggy hair , he wore an apron over his armour , third across was a slightly dark spanish girl , she was 5’6 ish and wore light tactical armour flipping a knife in her hand , the final gu the 7’5 behemoth was an aryan german ‘ the five bickered as they discussed what to do with the creature who now lay upon the sands at roughly 90ft
The spanish - Jewel - spoke firmly - ‘kill,it,now’ angrily , she punctuated every word with rage
‘Calm down princess’ the short one returned jokingly before getting slapped behind the neck by the giant jacob
‘Shut up’ the king - Logan announced bluntly ‘ I give you armies and you squabble at one creature , just cater it and wait for Aeron to show up , he’s late as usual.
Suddenly the soldiers , who had been resting for a total of a mighty 3 minutes , before a figure emerged effortlessly from the gateway - the face plate lighting in a 32 bit :) the soldiers stood to attention as the figure kept walking one of the newer recruits suddenly burst formation attempting to stab him through the back
‘ die invader ! ‘ the lad yelled and leapt courageously bless him but was not expecting the armoured figure to turn on his tail and materialise a tek greatsword into his hand , blocking the steel blade and riposting into a slash that cut of his leg ,
‘ bold effort - ‘ the voice was tired and cracked ‘ but i didn’t kill nations to be beaten by a rookie’ he kicked over the kid and kept walking towards Logan's convoy , clicking his fingers and whistling softly as the beast stood up and followed behind him - growling and snarling at the troops that backed up slowly from the dismembered man moaning on the floor,
Jewel turned suddenly before steven ran past her to hug the figure for him to awkwardly hug him back with a pat on the back before barding past
‘ ow mate ‘
‘ no hard feelings ‘
Logan stared as his helmet flicked down - his friends face - once round and cheerful , slim and stern with coldness - his blue eyes once hyper mobile and intelligent were dull and red , showing clear signs of insomnia and his hair , his short blonde hair that was golden in the sun of the island - it was a dark shade of grungy blonde - green , the darkened colours contrasting his pale skin.
I thank the 20 or so people who read chapter 1/2 that’s 20 more than I expected :D , Kind Regards Dr Wylder
Chapter 3 : The Ascent - King’s visage
The man Stared intensely at the portal , it was constructed from interlocking arches of writhing tek , shaped and molded like vines and cacti , between the two largest rings was a vertical sheet of orange energy - quickly turning a deep violet - sparks flew off the energy as it twisted like a cyclone - an eerie sound of silence filled the air , the shifting sands flowing almost scared of the portal - a roar sounded from the other side and the figure rose his hand - about 30 longneck rifles trained on the glowing gateway , a nasal horn edged through - and bullets were sent loose - the nose retreated but returned with a earkilling screech that would scare a saddled mammoth -
‘Oh cr–’ the figure’s authoritative pose was interrupted as he drew a revolving fabricated pistol ,
Gun shot rand rang out as a large armoured head broke the portal - troops with spears forming a barricade the head - the man gawked all hope of control shattered - the head of the creature emerging from the the energy was easily 12 ft long - about 3ft longer than a rexes - it was decorated with a crown of spikes with a glossy membrane connecting the tip to its head
‘Sir what is that’ two of his elite soldiers ran past a 5’3 soldier with a prosthetic arm and a behemoth 7’5 man with a ballistic TEK shield ‘ King - if you do not kill that thing i will you’ the short one roared as he chucked a javelin at the beast and ducked behind the shield the figure didn't understand why they hid though the beast was only half out the portal -
The man who you may of guessed to be the fabled king our hero served - kept shooting and cussing as nothing drew blood from the beast in the portal , he couldn’t risk sending troops to the portal or he’d have to wait 5 minutes or so for them to arrive at the aberration - as he contemplated risking a legion’s life he noticed a banner poking through the portal - it was familiar but not , whilst his empire flew a black flag marked with a silver yutyrannus skull - the ferrous tyrannus - this flew a dark purple background torn to ribbons with the faded form of the black skull of the emerging creature -
‘ Hold fire ‘ the king roared as his troops froze - backing up slowly ,
‘T-t-that is your baron’ he was nervous as the creature’s large left leg broke threw the portal ‘get to position to greet a noble’ his soldiers scrambled to position still scared sh*** from the unnamed creature ripping his tail from the portal - like his head it was decorated with spikes and membrane the length of his back and thighs —
Pastel, I’m ok!!!! I have been better, but I’ve been worse.
I’m very excited for Ragnarok and the Bison too!!!! I’m also excited for the Preorder package of Lost Colony as there might be some cool stuff!!! I’m kinda surprised we haven’t gotten a tease or anything of a Fantastic Beast. Was kinda hoping for something Aquatic like a Levitation or a mythological/cryptid aquatic animal.
-PrimalApex:)
To: DinoSlayer, Jerrald, PastelGothPower, DiploLover, RelatingHen
From: Ben
DinoSlayer, well, that’s kind of what I mean. I don’t know if you’ve written stories here in the past before on the DDEX, but I’m assuming that if you have you probably didn’t finish them (as most people haven’t, not too big a deal). If you lack passion or a specific vision in mind for what this story will even be about, then it’s not gonna be too fun once you actually start working on it even if you’ve done similar things in the past before.
Jerrald, I am excited for the next chapter of The Island!
Pastel, honestly not being as active is completely understandable and fair if you have a 5 min time limit
DiploLover, you’re back! I had a feeling. It’s nice to see you back, and I’m glad you can work on your story again. You probably saw my now unofficial continuation of your story in the Diplocaulus section; I only managed to get to Chapter 40 (it was gonna end at Chapter 50), but I think for the sake of finishing what I started I will probably finish that up, so don’t be alarmed or anything if you see more of those in the Diplocaulus section. Anyway, I read Chapter 37 and it was cool seeing the others’ reactions to Apollo coming back to the group. I’m assuming Apollo will keep that hood of his if he doesn’t want anyone else to find out (besides the Prophecy Wolves), especially someone like Adira, since that would mean to them that time travel is possible. I’m also curious to see what happened to the CloudPaws, I’m assuming there’s some answer to that (perhaps the humans attacked them? Or the Yutyrannus). Also wondering how your interpretation of the man goes (the one that ordered KJ around). I had one for Silent Funeral, but I’m still curious to see how your version (and the true canon) is. I’m excited for Chapter 38 and I’m guessing the next chapters will be in a Carnivore Island creature.
RelatingHen, Chapter 41 of JTAC was cool! I like how the Creator talks in morse code, and also the aftermath of Nal’s “death”. I feel bad for Dorack, tho i dont think being broken is the correct way to describe him. A more realistic diction would be just to have Sodden ask if he’s still grieving or mourning, since theres nothing flawed about missing what once was. Also interesting to see that White Mask’s attribute is detecting trails, now im curious to see Red Mask’s attribute (who seems the more competent of the two). I do think it wouldve made it more intriguing if White mask didnt reveal his attribute through dialogue, since realistically Red Mask already knows his attribute. Maybe through his POV he couldve seen an opaque trail in his vision. Anyway ive also been likjng the description of character appearances. I hope to see more of that in the future, its been hard imagining the characters looks (since they havent had any, not even Sodden). i struggle with character design a lot too but i know youll cook up some interesting ones for Them aight thats all laters
Hey guys M.G.G2.0 here (MrGhostGamer2.0) This is a new story I’m writing HOPE you like it!!! 😁 No? Just me? Okay. And btw do you fanfictioners mind if I claim Nori Dye? #FF4L
Hope’s Cry
Chapter one
“So tell me you love me…Even if it’s hard…”Jake started singing.“I’m sitting here wondering…Where You are!” Janae Continued.“Are you out there thinking of me?” Jake sung. “Am I near your Heart?” Janae continued “I can tell there’s a distance… pulling us apart!” Jake Sung. “Oh how are you so close…Yet you feel so far?” “Am I even talking to you, or a ghost that has my heart?” Janae finished lovingly. Jake and Janae were very close. Jake was Janae’s only son. Janae and Jake always before bed sang. But tonight was different Janae seemed sad. And Jake’s sister Melissa and father Sam were late for dinner. They were out hunting with the rest of the Purlovia tribe but none of them had returned yet. Jake was the second oldest sibling, he was only five years old, while Melissa was Fourteen. There was a loud boom as the front door slammed closed downstairs. Janae stood up and brandished her claws. Janae and Jake ran down stairs. But it was only Jake’s youngest sister Martha. Martha looked at the top of the stairs too see Jake. “Jake?” She asked sadly. Then the roof collapsed.
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Jake woke up in the ruins of his family’s house. There was fire all around in the camp. And in the middle of it all was the whole tribe. All of them were chained to the ground and standing behind each one was Gigantapithecus’s holding swords.The Gigantapithecus’s raised the swords and started chopping the Purlovias heads off. Then Jake saw her. Janae. Jake ran just as her head fell too the ground.
Next chapter in Allosaurus! My posts will usually come out around eight o’clock at night. Now remember next chapter in Allosaurus! And if the Rest of the Fanfictioners let me I will be posting updates too my story’s in Nori Dye. And can we plz stop cussing? It’s getting annoying. SuS and all the rest of the haters out there…we are FanFictioners, stop saying to stop posting stories… we’re FanFictioners it’s what we do!! And Shadow and Moon, I love your story’s plz keep writing The Shadow Wranglers though!!! And if you don’t want too continue writing The Shadow Wranglers, do you mind if I can continue writing it? Just too clarify I’m talking too Shadow.
Yours truly
M.G.G2.0
#FF4L
The red pike
Nerva’s story
Part 3
By Red Dragon
The tentacles came out of the water, and pulled two of Nerva’s soldiers that were on his raft down into the depths. Nerva grabs his pike by the red grip, and skewers the tentacle closest to him. He heard it roar in pain below, and it retreated, but not without taking two more rafts down with it. His force had been weakened, but it was still strong. By the time they made it to herbivore island, it was the dead of night. Good. The cover of night would conceal them. They spilled out onto the island, and took both the farm and the dinosaur pen quietly. All that was left was the main base. Nerva instructed his troops not to do it silently. Gunshots echoed through the dark sky, and in the end, the Painted Sharks were no more. Nerva went over to the enemy leader and said “I know there is a Li on the island. You are the one who hired Mei-Yin Li six years ago. Where are they?” “I don’t know, I didn’t hire THAT Li.” “Execute him”
My roommate LOVES these but.. she had one to many, turned them on wander, AND forgot to fix all of them. So we had one that we named Speedy and they went around breeding with EVERYONE else...
The moral of the story is; FIX. YOUR. SNAILS. we dreamt of sweet cakes for the next week 🥲
Ah. Yeah, I get that. Everyone has lives and things more important than a silly little dex. Thank you for telling me and I hope to be more active myself. And, hey, if need any ideas, you can just ask me if you want to. And yes Bob, I have been and will be back for a bit!
Break-it The Final Witness
To: DinoSlayer, Duke, Sylveevee, Wyvernian, PrimalApex, Break-it, RelatingHen8906
From: Ben
Before we begin, For MrGhostGamer and Break-it, RelatingHen has joined TOT so he will be writing soon and he cycles after Break it
DinoSlayer, you could write a story if you wanted to, but if you’re only gonna write for the sake of writing I wouldn’t recommend.
Duke, I will be waiting patiently for when FAF Chapter 5 comes out.
Sylveevee, Chapter 4 of SOH was great! Yes, you are up next for TOT.
Wyvernian, the finale for OOS and Chapter 2 of LOp was awesome!
PrimalApex, I am currently reading Ultimus Chapter 25.
Break-it, Chapter 28 of TSOR was really cool! I like Tim’s vigorous calculation and planning ability (which makes sense) and I’m more curious about Amanda’s past with raptors. Since they’re able to respawn (i believe, besides Bruce) trying to run through the cave would be better than buying the artifact. Also interesting to see how Bruce can telepathically communicate with creatures, i cant remember if he did that in previous chapters tho anyway ill be around for Chap 29 and their caving
RelatingHen, i enjoyed Chapters 39 - 40 of JTAC! I assume Reaper got dizzy because she isnt ammune to the radiation of Aberration like an aberrant creature would be. Also Red Mask Guy and White Mask Guy are very intriguing, i assume we’ll see these goons later down the line. Their cockiness makes them funny. I assume their armor has an attribute or is ascendant if the bullets bounced off like that. I was also very shocked with Nal’s “death”. I’m more interested with how she even got that whatever thing in her implant, maybe it has something to do with Dread’s attribute. Dread himself should be a force to be reckoned with though, if he’s lived this long. Anyway I enjoyed those chapters and ill be around for Chapter 41
I saw one in the swamp but I thought it was a leech so I shot it withe a tek rifle and ran. Then I was murdered by a dienosuchus and I then wanted revenge so I went to kill the Dienosuchus but guess what? More came. I was running with 4 deinosuchus chasing me to my base.(I was on a sarco) and killed the raptor squad Exept the alfa raptor.my carnos took care of it though. B ut I made a memorial for the raptor squad who inspired bravery in all of us.(in case you were wondering my carnos were killed by some rexes and allos.)
RIP Jelly bean and twix the carno you guys fought well. I always name my dinos after 🍬
Hi DinoSlayer!! I remember you from silver dye, and yeah DinoSlayer was your name!(I think?? My memory could be faulty.) We didn’t interact much but yeah, I remember you.
….😐. I literally have nothing else to say about the “argument”(Not saying it is one…bc that could possibly cause a argument) that hasn’t already been said. And I generally just don’t want to enter this unless I have to.
Im to stressed irl to do anything otherwise. :)
-SunnyFox57…
Hello. I'm new to this so it might not even work the way I want it to (also I'm kinda pathetic player in Ark even though the concept is awesome!) but I just wanted to drop by and say hi to my friend Moon. Great story by the way! Just read chapter 88. "Nyx! Don't listen to that one! That's a velonasaur that cause a bunch of problems for your friends!" Did Moon mention that she's working on a bunch of other books, and even helping me with my own series?? Good luck Moon! Or should I say "Fiera" a certain dragon? Are you ok with that? I heard you're going to write under your real name eventually so I hope it's ok. sorry not sorry. Can't wait to read more!
Also, if anyone has any ideas for what to call a fire dragon species, I could really use it. Already went over the scientific name.
- Analog Sky (or Galaxia in this case)
Guess this seals my pen name.