Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Hey guys, sorry for the delay. The next chapter of Ark Tales will be out soon. Just been busy with other stuff. Btw what is all this talk about a Dododex book club? If there is one, I would really like to join!
Pls respond quickly,
—MrDemonRealz— (You can meet me on Templars Mats LvL 100 on Fridays, if it’s on)
Happy Birthday Ben! 🥳🥳. I hope you had a great birthday with your friends and family! I just read chapter 20.5 and I’m curious about that girl that Ben made the forever promise to. I wonder if she’ll show up later. I’m sorry that Tortuga was so sad but there is a reason that I called it “the terrible demise of Tortuga”. And no unfortunately Ol’Betsy won’t eat the mayors. LOL. But there will be other books in this series after all this is only the second book. Thanks for the suggestions, I’ll try to improve more on my dramaticness. Anyway…bye and happy birthday!
-SunnyFox57.
From Ben
Hey everyone, I wasn’t on yesterday because it was my birthday (yipee), but I was able to churn out a chapter. Chapter 20.5 is in Griffin, it’s a semi-chapterish sorta but it’s still canon to the storyline, so go ahead and read it if you will!
SunnyFox you don’t need to keep working on A Hyaenodon’s Scars if you have run out of ideas, no one’s forcing you to work on it anyway. Take a break from it or cancel it altogether, that’s up to you!
Wow a lot of things I read. I’ll start with Sandmaster’s “Overseer” story first. Woah, this was some fun to read! You have so many unique ideas and I like the idea that the corrupted creatures make it sort of like a zombie apocalypse, fun! The Gigantopithecus Camp was cool, and Strongjaw was pretty dope, and man Blizzard’s pretty cool even if he didn’t survive long… It’s a shame he kicked the bucket so soon. Anyway I’m wondering what the Carno Investigation Agency or whatever it was called want with Blizzard’s body… Element? Anyway they seem like interesting villains, especially the Carcharodontosaurus, Ares. I wonder who would win in a fight, Ares or Strongjaw? Well it’s all a pretty cool story, so continue writing it, I’ll read it! My favorite character though right now is probably Scar, he’s pretty cool and loyal to his Fuzzball friend. My favorite scene is the part where Fuzzball transforms into his big form against the griffin, I could really feel the emotional intensity of it all.
Moving on to Tortuga; yep, you’re banned Michael. You’re banned from the redemption list. Very immature little runt, he will pay for what he did. Although I really hope it isn’t the end for those two. Something tells me it may not be with Aragorn’s medallion. (How come he doesn’t have a shadow? I really can’t tell… Clones? Nah, that sounds implausible). Actually tragic chapter today. And right after Emma and Andrew got married too, this is actually the saddest thing ever. Definitely on the same level of sad as Moonbeam’s death. If not worse. I actually recoiled in my seat when they got married. Then I sunk in my seat when I got to Chapter 30. Yep today was a sad day for Tortuga. And the British are here as they always are. Things seem grim. Hopefully Aaron’s animals take care of the problem, let’s have Ol’ Betsy eat Mr. Creepazoid and his brothers! Okay now i’m still sad anyway. Darn it. I can’t believe we’re nearing the end of Tortuga… it only feels like yesterday I read the first chapter and after reading a few more I just got more and more excited. Well I did remember you saying it’s part of a series, so I’ll be looking out for that.
SunnyFox, Well for some things that could have been improved… I think when Michael discovered his shadow you should have separated that one line from the rest of the paragraph to make it more dramatic. Dramatization really sets the tone, so when it’s just with the rest of the paragraph like that it sounds anticlimactic. If there’s any big reveals in the future, make sure to take that into consideration!
Sandmaster, some criticism for you would be to add more depth to relationships or friendships or family in the future. After Blizzard dies, Fuzzball cries a little, which there’s nothing wrong with, but the only connection they have is that Blizzard is his cousin, and they had only met for a little bit and Fuzzball barely remembered him. It didn’t make sense at first, so you could’ve had it that 1. Fuzzball knows Blizzard very well, or 2. Fuzzball doesn’t cry about his death, or 3. Have them have more scenes together and conversations so that the impact is more noticeable.
Well, guess that’s all for today. And before I leave off, thanks for reading my story pals, I didn’t think you’d read it either Moon, and thanks. I would say my story is less of an Ark Story and more of a Dod0Dex Story.
Later
From Ben
Supp everyone, how’s it going?
Just been dong nothing, as per usual. But hey, Chapter 20 is released in Griffin… This one is very very interesting. Lots of stuff to digest and detect and investigate and just yeah. This one I had quite a bit of fun, it wasn’t as long as I thought, but maybe it’s because I decided it would be 2 separate chapters.
Woo hoo two more chapters for Tortuga! And man does Creepazoid not know how to take a hint? She’s said no for more than like fifty times or something already! He’s very adamant about it… Also woah, it isn’t Aragorn it’s Aaron.
I wonder who the Mayors are more afraid of, Aragorn or Aaron? Aragorn is a pretty scary dude, fiercely protective of his family, and we still don’t know what his medallion power is… But Aaron has an arsenal of beasts. Including a giant crocodile and yeah you get the point.
Gosh the mayors are unintelligent. It seems none of them really know what they’re doing, it makes me wonder how they’re even going to run the town. And now that I think about it their names make me realize Mayor Roi and Reine aren’t very good with names…
Also woo hoo date between Andrew and Emma! Andrew is getting very bold with Emma, which is pretty cool since they have great chemistry! I totally feel the love in this episode, tonight. Although that darned bell ruined the moment, didn’t it?
Chapter 25, woah, so that Shadowmane-Dilo cross from a while ago has a name now, Umbra! It reminds me of umbrella. I wonder what it eats, fish or meat? Or both? Anyway it seems Elizabeth likes Eric herself… she calls it just a crush though, so I wonder how that’ll play out compared to Andrew and Emma’s relationship.
Welp that’s all! See you on the flip side!
Ben, Thanks for the suggestions! I really appreciate them. Also I’m writing TTDOT. Mr Ghost will be writing some of the other books in the series. Also I still remember Mr Mo. I wonder what happened to him…
The clue? Names? Hmm… let me put my thinking cap on! *grabs cap and pulls it comically over head* I’m gonna need to think… Cya!
-Detective SunnyFox57.
Apex,
I don’t want too be nosy. But what are you Wyvernian talking about? It sounds like lore and a lot of other things combined… if it’s lore… can I join in? I’m always open too learn more about Ark Lore. And from the bits and pieces of lore I’ve gathered… Nevermind. I’m a huge nerd for Ark Lore. It’s very interesting. TTYL!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
Ben, Moon,SunnyFox57 and the rest of Achatina
Unfortunately chapter eighteen of Hope’s Cry will not be coming out soon bc I’m too busy unfortunately. If you haven’t read or heard of Hope’s Cry… pls read it. It’s in The Island filter in ABC order. Pls read it. If you don’t like it pls don’t push the down button. If you have any critics on the story’s then talk too me in Nori Dye my HQ! Or you can talk too me in Achatina. Anyway… I’ll be posting a chapter of a new book I’m doing… soon.
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
👻MrGhostGamer’s Song👻
MrGhostGamer
Oh, Oh, Oh
MrGhostGamer
Oh, Oh, Oh
MrGhostGamer,
yeah you know his name,
He almost left once or twice,
But I think he’s here too stay!!!!
His stories, well their kinda plain.
But if you ask me the beginnings will make you cry!!
MrGhostGamer
Oh, Oh, Oh
MrGhostGamer
Oh, Oh, Oh
His random stories are the name of the game!
Some might say their his ticket too fame!
The occasional titles may not make sense!
But we all get a laugh at Buddy’s expense!
MrGhostGamer
Oh, Oh, Oh
MrGhostGamer
Oh, Oh, Oh
MrGhostGamer
Oh, Oh, Oh
MrGhostGamer
Oh, Oh, Oh
MrGhostGamer
Oh, Oh, Oh
Mr….
Pls sing this in the tune of the song: ‘Mr. Beast song’
It may be copyrighted… but hey at least I actually got it past Dododex security! Jk not really!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
From:SandmasterXD
So I have a lot of things to say. First of all I added the poem for moons broken computer is in the snail section.I also play ark mobile as well,although I play it solo. And I won’t be able to say anything that much from now in cause I’m doing a 100 days challenge in every ark map and I’m gonna need to focus on my story Overseer. Here’s the chapter in order:
Chapter 1: Ferox
Chapter 2:Wyvern
Chapter 3:Thyla
Chapter 4: Rex
Chapter:5 Gigantipitichus
Chapter 6: Megapitichus
Chapter 7: Giga
Chapter 8: Royal Griffen
Chapter 9 will be in Carno (Not finished)
Also Moon I have an idea for chapter 96, what if Forest knew a lake called a “healing lake” and took Moonbeam to that lake and she came back to life? Just an idea.
Ben,
I’m sorry the chapter was confusing! Basically Jake is a whole nother Purlovia than Buddy. I made the story too where people would think that Jake is Buddy! When really he’s not. Even who Buddy really is will be a twist. I hope you like the next chapter… once I post it of course. Btw I’m writing a news in my dye Nori. I can post it on a creature if you don’t want too look in dyes. I’m going to be writing another story later on. It will be related to TTDOT. Yes I got permission too write a story in the same universe as TTDOT! You won’t know who it’s about until SunnyFox57 writes the prequel too TTDOT! Btw I just started reading your story! And I noticed one of the names, Neddy the Nerd? Did you get it from the YouTuber NeddyTheNoodle? The guy that made the fanfic video of the backstory of the arks? If not if your able too pls check out his videos about the backstory of ark!!! It’s soooo good. And accurate! Anyway good night!!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
(P.S: In my new news feed(Ghost News in Nori dye) I accidentally put as the sign off name MrGhoatGamer. Oops! It’s supposed too be Ghost not Ghoat!)
From Ben
Chapter 15’s been released in Onyc. And yeah I totally agree, I can feel the love. And hey that’s pretty cool that your favorite character’s changing. But trust me there’s going to be a LOT more characters with their own personalities and stuff, and soon you’ll be struggling to pick.
Woah, okay, Tortuga has a lot to unpack, first off. Well, I guess I’m right again about Aragorn. He just wants to protect his family. Also the school moment was very funny. I guess everyone just takes the same class instead of it being separated into different grades. And Michael is being a creepazoid again. Maybe I should just call him that. Creepy Mayor Son. Or smth idk. I hope he has a good reason for staring other than he thinks she’s cute/pretty.
And also Chapter 12 revealed so much. So it turns out Tom was Aragorn’s friend once. Well, probably from what the picture looks like. And he had a wife? Maybe their rivalry started with something like that. And I wonder why Aragorn still keeps his pictures around if Tom hates them. Aragorn might still care about Tom, or might feel some sort of remorse for hurting him (if he did). Maybe there’s still a hope for Tom. Well, depends on what he did of course.
I guess that’s it for now. Seeya later. I love the recent chapters, and I’m interested in the fact that this will be a multi-book series. I’m wondering what you, GhostGamer, and your other friend will work on in the future.
Ben, I feel like you’re better at seeing the future than Emma. I just posted another chapter of TTDOT, hope u enjoy! Also the executioner kill Michael? LOL. As much as I would love that to happen, I got plans for Michael and his brothers. Also the other Childers powers will be revealed in the future. I love how u are incorporating yourself and other fan fictioners into your story! That is soooo cool! Anyway cya!
-SunnyFox57.
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