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From Ben
Okay its time to read some cool chapters from everyone here that released and dive into it!
Chapter 20 of GhostGamer’s Hope’s Cry was finished, and now I know what that white room is. It’s probably some sort of infirmary where the dinosaurs that the Gigantopithecus recruited are being nursed back to health. And ha ha, that’s pretty cool how that Jerboa is basically me! The references in Sunny’s Tortuga and GhostGamer’s Hope’s Cry is pretty neat. Also, peculiar, humans can talk to creatures in this world?
Also who are these humans? Mars, Hope, and Evelin? And is that where the name Hope’s Cry comes from? I’m guessing these characters are going to be important in the future… although I don’t know how. Also it’s kinda crazy how the raid on Allosaurus Island did so much damage to their numbers. I’m wondering where Dawn went, and the other recruits. Hopefully they’re safe.
And Chapters 8-9 for Shadow Phoenix were released. Man, I didn’t know there’d be another ball! I guess they’re going to go, but the more I look at it the more I realize James/Aragorn is so much different in Tortuga than compared to here in Shadow Phoenix. The whole thing that happened between him and Tom must have changed him like that. Well, not like I’m complaining. I’d rather have cold, mean Aragorn than stubborn, stingy, and potentially immature James.
Also Toe Crusher Tabitha is crazyy. That’s gotta be the funniest part of this chapter, imagine dancing with Toe Crusher Tabitha that sounds terrifying. That could be a villain name tbh.
The more I analyze, the more I can feel something bad arising from this situation. Cole likes Arianna, but James is eventually going to get with her, and from the looks of it this could cause a chain reaction which leads to the destruction of River Bend City. After all Tom claimed that everywhere Aragorn went, destruction followed. And if James fights to take Arianna away from Cole, Cole might get a little bit upset. Very upset, actually, considering they’re best friends and Tom knows Cole likes her! Maybe this is how things are destroyed. Cole gets mad, does something crazy, but somehow this ends up with Tom’s lover getting killed so now Tom hates Aragorn. Yeah that’s probably it.
Well, you know what they say. It takes one to know one. I know for a fact that if I was only a reader and not a writer I probably wouldn’t be able to pick up any of these details and put them to use. Well I’ll see you guys next time! And I’m having quite the blast working on the Valentine’s Special. Only problem is I don’t know where I will post it… someone please give me a suggestion!
Well Sunnyfox, that is an interesting thought. I thought personally that Star is the star of dodo tales season 5. But it does make a lot of sense that it could be Nova since Nova is a state of a bright new star. Also Paige is Goth Power, she was a reader of the Obelisk a while ago and would pops back in every so often. But I just read 22 and I really enjoyed it!! Until next time!
-Apex:)
Ben, first off thanks for reading my story! I’m sorry if the prequel is a bit boring right now but don’t worry it’ll get interesting. And yeah unfortunately Cole does like Arianna. Also Arianna had golden strawberry blonde hair in TTDOT but in TTOTSP she has brownish red hair. She didn’t dye he hair it just naturally got brighter. Also Tom was not talking about Arianna when he thought that Josephina looked like “her”. Also yes you are correct Emma’s blindness did come from her power. As for Joe’s blindness… well I can’t say much. It may or may not explain what happened to Mrs Lois the traitor and Mrs Hawkthorne. Also I don’t know if you saw it but Andrew’s father was a doctor and was slightly in TTDOT but that’s all. Anyway I hope you’re doing well!
-SunnyFox57.
P.S: I can’t wait for chapter twenty three!
Ben,
When I first saw that you said chapter 21 was 2700 words. I was shocked!!! I thought mine were getting lengthy at 500 to 1000 per chapter depending upon if it had two parts. But after reading it I can see why. I enjoyed seeing what each character’s special ability was in the Book Club. I can’t wait for Chapter 22!!!! Until next time!!!
Oh, P.S for everyone. I need to know everyone’s opinion on how I could make my name a little more unique in some way or if I should add on to my name a little bit or a lot. If you want to know why. Look at Orc Coloring under newest at the true story of “A Tale of Two Apexes”.
-Apex:)
Hey everyone, just Ben here. So many interesting stories to read. And thanks for wishing me happy birthday, everyone, I appreciate it.
With questions regarding my story, Sunny, I am sure you can figure out who Tiffany and Skyler is… although connecting the dots is hard and picking up on assuming details may be hard, once it is revealed, and if you go back to read the text, you’ll realize it was there all along! Although you’ll also need to know who those people relating to the Dex but that’s not the point.
GhostGamer, woo hoo, you released Chap 18! This was an interesting chapter to read. And Buddy’s dream/vision actually freaked me out. Judging from the looks of it the ending of Tortuga wouldn’t be going very smoothly… Boy was I wrong and things were even worse (i’ll go over that later). Hmm, I wonder what this white room is? And I wonder if Buddy and Jake will ever meet? And finally I wonder why Mrs. Kong seems so nice? I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again the Kongs seem pretty chill. They seem like fun to hang out with. And hey, thanks for the shoutman man, I appreciate it!
Sandmaster, Chapter 11 from you was good! It was a lot of fun seeing the conversations between everyone, and it seems Fuzzball can finally prove himself to his family. His family will soon see Fuzzball’s more than a pushover! He can be something greater, he can transform! Also that Mosasaurus ship is really cool, LOL. One more question, if you would choose to answer it or not because of spoilers, I am wondering what map this story takes place in? I was thinking Genesis at first because of the Feroxes, but it mentions the Redwoods and corrupted creatures… perhaps it doesn’t take place on any map at all. Well thats up to you!
Sunny… Damn things have taken things for the worst. So much of the cast is dead it’s phenomenal, and it all happened because the British thought Tortuga was a Pirate Outpost! Damn it if only they had fallen back and just considered the fact that MAYBE there are other civilizations out there, this wouldn’t be a problem! But NO. Here we are, and now I have to type this message out! Darn it, things could have been different if… yk what it’s whatever. It is what it is (i cannot fathom what just happened).
Jeez, I guess… this is The Terrible Demise of Tortuga… We should have seen it coming…
But… So many things were revealed in the past few chapters. Rachelle snuck onto the pirates’ ships, and is probably going to do some SERIOUS damage (guess she’s going to fulfill her role as peacekeeper, as Helen did). Jay can probably open portals with his medallion, very sick power by the way, Jay. Jack probably has something to do with vitality, he wasn’t dead just yet after all that. I’m glad for the guy. He’s smart and doesn’t deserve to kick the bucket just yet. And… Dude Tom is going to help Jaquin and Josephina?? That’s actually pretty sweet. I knew Tom wasn’t necessarily a villain, just a lost soul in search of revenge (very sad), but I know he may do some good. Although I give props to the fiery creature for saving Jaquin and Josephina. It was probably one of Aaron’s creatures, rushing in to save one more person before they bit the dust. Honestly now that I think of it it’s even more heartbreaking for Aaron’s creatures. What about the dogs? What about Ol’ Betsy who’s been around since Aaron was a kid? And finally… Woo hoo! The creepazoid mayors are KILLED by a shadowy mysterious figure… whom I do not know, I don’t know who it could be this time. All the hints I have are that 1. They’re pretty damn skilled with a sword, 2. They know Michael was the mayor, so they had to be a resident of the town, and 3. They HATE the mayors and someone else? The shadowy figure did mention “all of them”, so there’s still more retribution that needs to be handed out.
Well, that was pretty sad ending… Tragic. I’ll be around for the prequel, (whew, that means I get to see these characters again) and of course, the other books that may be made. I’m glad I’ve been around since the first few chapters. This was a very crazy roller coaster, I can’t believe it’s over already!!
Welp. That’s all for now. See you on the flip side.
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