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From Ben
Sylveevee tell Cooper I said happt birthday!! Also I do have some questions for your story (btw i liked Chapter 12)
1. Why did you choose Aberration as the setting of the story?
2. Will Rockwell make an appearance in the future as this is in Aberration?
3. Is Pat ever going to come back?
4. What was the biggest inspiration for the romance in Queen of Ab?
5. Which creature is your favorite in Aberration? (this one isnt related to the story but i thought itd be fun to ask)
Moon, I will definitely try to give him a good name. Though it might be a while til you see him again. But I have been planning to bring him back!!
Sunnyfox, the pegomastax is actually the pego who tried to steal the rune from Forest before (I can’t remember the exact chapter). And yes he was talking about the drake, he was talking about Forest.
I’m very glad that you both enjoyed prologue!! The next chapter will come out on Wednesday!!
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
I just wanna go on a little rant about revenge fantasies, half of the time they are STRAIGHT. UP. GARBAGE.
Im moreso talking about romance stories. Revenge in romance has got to be the corniest thing that has ever graced my ears and eyes. Goodness gracious almost all the time, and I mean ALWAYS, it ends up being some guy getting back at the girl who rejected him. Some lame ass story writing, not only does the character deserve getting rejected most of the time but they didnt even work hard for getting their "revenge". Such goofballery i actually hate poorly written revenge fantasies. And dont even get me started on the little kids who eat it up its always 8 year old dudes who trash on the girl because she didnt want to get with the main lead. Lame fandoms and lame story, boring boring boring. Its just so deplorable.
Revenge isnt SUPPOSED to be the 1st option to everything. Things can happen because of misunderstandings or because we made the mistake ourselves. Now obviously when a guy kills your parents because you didnt want to get with him... (erm, Michael), maybe it wouldnt be such a bad idea to kill him. But if all they did was crease your shoes, or dare i say... Reject your love, then whats the point of getting revenge by beating them up like bro just move on.
I actually hate revenge fantasies so much. Lame storywriting, lame lame lame. Just an attempt by the author to allieviate whatever rejection theyre going through. Poorly written garbage. Oh hey Journey came out gotta read it.
Ben, Oh wow, I thought Mo’s meaning was to sorcerer or wizard and would have some relation to his power. I wasn’t sure what Ma was though. I really wasn’t expecting it to be Horse and Do Not. But yeah, they really do have a lot of different meanings and a lot fit his narrative of his character!!
As for your question, this one I’ll answer. The next chapter will be about Andrew. (Were you expecting me answering a different question?). I can’t wait for chapter 50.5 and 51!!!
Wyvernian, I’m sorry about taking so long to respond about chapter 38. I read it last night and I really enjoyed it!!! Quan saving Ron and the day with his beak and the club!!! I’m wonder what Salizar is up to?! I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Moon I pulled a few questions out of my head for the future stories you plan on writing!
Which story do you have the most ambition for, or you think you’ll have the most fun writing?
This one isn’t necessarily related to the story but do other creatures that weren’t mentioned in The Obelisk (like the Rex, Raptors, Giganotosaurus, most herbivores) have their own story/lore/world building? Or will?
Final questions, before i become hungry for more; Who was your favorite character to write/develop in The Obelisk?
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY SUNNY! Sorry I couldn’t come on time! I hope you have a nice rest of your weekend off! Chapter 18 was a special treat and I really enjoyed seeing all the characters come together in a celebration! And of course Michael’s going to be Michael… oh well. Also his parents scolding him cracked me up 🤣, they aren’t even scolding him for being a creepazoid they’re scolding him for standing on a barrel… Parenting, am I right? AND PAUL IS IMPORTANT ENOUGH TO BE IN THE CELEBRATION WOO HOOOO. Even the Executioner is having some fun that was kinda sweet. And even though the chapter was heartfelt, with everyone dancing and being happy together, it was also kind of bittersweet especially seeing loved ones reunite after their deaths… man that was kinda sad how this is the only time they’ll get to see each other (TOM AND LEAH, JAMES AND ARIANNA OMG SAD). No shadowy figure?
Maybe he’s somewhere in that crowd.
Well that was bittersweet, like PrimalApex said. Alright onto Ultimus, then PoP!
DAMN that chapter was sad. But honestly who wouldn’t want to keep their loved ones safe? I can understand that it’s a hard choice as they may never see him again… but if it’s for the well-being of your son, then you have to do it, right? Is there really any other choice? ALSO WAIT IF HES GETTING CRYOFREEZED DOES THAT MEAN HE’LL NEVER GET TO SEE RUE?! I hope not, Rue has so much potential as a cool character, and it’ll be heartbreaking to see that Rue may never get to see her good friend ever again :( And her effort to work for the ARK project instead of Genesis is very respectable.
Man you really know how to make our hearts twist and turn. Well Hunter and Kim are off to Arat Prime… although I have to ask will the next chapter or few be focused on Hunter and Kim or go straight to after Andrew’s cryofreeze is over? Anyway…
Alright onto PoP… wow the recent 3 chapters were a lot of fun to read Wyvernian! I just love how creatively written this story is it’s such a wild, wacky, silly yet fun and well written adventure! Okay so I bet Caesar can understand the human because of his implant, and that is why Jaxz can’t understand the human and perceives it as gibberish. And all hail Emperor Xu! Man that title has a ring to it! Well the dinopithecus deserves it for being a great guy. And man Nash is really starting to grow on me I must say. He’s an honorable knight. And Ron and Ping are doing great on their own in the tundra! Man I loved that battle with the true Queen of the Ice, that was so good! I like how they managed to beat her, it was pretty unique and makes sense. Very clever. Ping and his pengujas are a true stunning team, and Ron is a good leader too. I think I may have said this before, but Ron is becoming a captain of his own. Have I said that? Deja vu, idk. And a dangerous wolf inmate was accidentally released? Uh, whoopsie daisy. I hope this doesn’t cause problems. And Salizar… what are you planning, is he trying to bring together all the villains on each ARK for his villainous plan? Who knows, ig we’ll have to find out.
Alright laters everyone.
Moon, here are my questions for your future stories and questions about other things.
1.We know Pandora happens one hundred years prior to The Obelisk. But what about Clans and See? How many years prior do they occur before The Obelisk?
2a. Will we see any characters from The Obelisk in Clans?
2b. Will we see any other characters from the Obelisk in See other than Peeri and Jethezzar?
3. Is The Island still coming out? It’s felt like so long since anyone has talked about your book you’ve been working on and wanted to know if you’re still working on it?
4a. How many chapters will Pandora be?
4b. How many chapters will Clans be?
4c. How many chapters will See be?
4d. If you don’t know or don’t want to answer these questions. Will these stories be around the same size as The Obelisk?
5. In the Obelisk Chapter 69, one Shadowmane says that Pandora died years ago (not decades or a century ago). Was this a figure of speech and she died a lot longer than years beforehand? Or does this mean Pandora will be seen in any of the other stories besides Pandora? This one doesn’t really need answered unless you feel it’s okay to answer.
I think that’s all the questions I want answered currently that I could think of.
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Okay, went through a lot of the stories I didn’t U word. I still have some to go through still though.
Wyvernian, was that there before!?!?! I swear it said last night that it would be ‘double the size’ and only that. Well I guess they clarified that one quickly.
And from what I saw this morning about the Gigantoraptor (I watched a video posted by GP this morning so it might have been clarified on more by now.). It will be added into the base game first after it’s removed as a mod and the then when Rag is released it will be available on the map immediately. So I think it means it will be on The Island, The Center and Rag from how it sounds. But yeah, they might want to clarify on that one a little bit more.
Until Next Time!!
-PrimalApex(:
Apex, I saw the thing, it says it’ll come to island or center or something then ragnarock when it releases but idk if that means only rag or if it’ll stay on multiple maps, honestly with its abilities I’d be fine with it being on multiple maps. Also everyone seems to have taken the “twice the size as the island” part way wrong, it’s always been twice the size of the island that doesn’t mean it’s gonna be twice the size of the evolved center. Hopefully wildcard will clarify soon so nobody gets their hopes up too much
-Wyvernain
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