Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Nexus, I don’t know if you are aware of this, but authors of posts can be looked at to see what other posts they have made on the site while using Google/Safari/etc.. This makes it more difficult to “fake” having an imposter, or easy to distinguish yourself from an imposter. In other words, either someone in your family is using the account, or you were both and that you have a change of heart about the rebellion you were leading. But don’t try to fake having a imposter. If you don’t believe me, check the tips in your tip section. It will show you.
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
I have no story but I can make a good grilled cheese
Start by getting a small but not too small pan and then set your oven to 450 degrees
Then get bread while you wait for it to heat up and cheese
Put the cheese in the middle of the bread and you need 2 bread and 1 cheese or 2 if you want extra cheesiness
Then cook it for 10 or 15 minutes and flip it every 5 minutes but I recommend 10 minutes then it should be done then cut it and boom and if it tastes bad I’m sorry but when I do it it is the best just keep trying to figure out how to cook
Today We Rise
Chapter 1 -
I sat up and looked around. There I was, sitting on the beach in nothing but my underwear and… what is that? I looked at my arm to see a strange diamond shaped thing. I scratched it, it was so itchy. I carefully stood up, my joints felt stiff and numb. After struggling to my feet I pressed the strange diamond. It began to glow a pearlescent blue color, scrolling through the menu in front of me I learned that my name is Lexi. Being that I was completely alone, I couldn’t help feeling happy. I'm not the kind of person that requires attention.
(3 Hours Later…)
I’ve noticed that there are strange things wandering around here on this sandy beach. They are large and scaly, well not all of them. Maybe I should attempt to tame something? I don’t know anymore. This cute little bird-like thing might be a nice companion, they don't seem very bright though. One of them ate a rock… still they could be a very good source of… I don’t know… protection? I walked casually to a bush and began collecting berries to feed it, assuming it eats berries… Running up to the bird I realized that I don't know how to tame one of these beautiful creatures. Whatever… I ran to the bird and held out my berries. The bird watched me for a second before greedily gobbling up the sweet fruits. It licked it's beak and waited. After staring at the bird for 10 minutes I finally realized it had wanted more food. God am I stupid, I now understand why I am choosing this creature as a friend. It will be nice to have something dumber than me around. I fed that stupid little bird for a while before the thing on my wrist began to glow that blue color again. This time a bubble that read “Name Your Dinosaur” popped up with a little rectangle.
I looked at the bird, “How does this thing work?” I asked her. She tilted her head.
“Alright guess i'm figuring this out by myself then,” I grumbled. I thought for a long moment.
“I'll name you… Chicken,” I smiled proudly. The rectangle began to fill with the word “Chicken” before disappearing.
“What the…?” I didn’t have time, a green blob hit Chicken, knocking her off of her feet. She squawked and flapped her wings widely.
“HOLD ON!” I shouted, grabbing the bird and running away from our attacker.
-Anonymos-
NEXT CHAPTER IN ALLO SECTION
*Fades in menacingly*
*Trips and falls*
SPECIAL YOU’RE BACK! AGAIN! ITS BEEN SO LONG! These stories sound awesome, I’m gonna read what you released the second I get the chance. I got so excited when I heard you were here! Guess who’s back
Back again
Special’s back tell a frien—
—Moon <3
Nice to meet you, Fauther Fang!
I'm PastelGothPower, but that doesn't really matter, because I rarely interact...
One of my favourite stories on here is, without a doubt, The Obelisk
It's in alphabetical order in tameables, starting right here in Achatina
I'm afraid I haven't started reading TAOH yet, so I can't help you there...
Hey, primal!! Nice to see you too! And yes, I do remember. I see that ur name has changed? PrimalApex. I like it! : D
Just posted the prologue for Forest of Light in cat section. Kind of like a narrative interactive kinda thing? I dunno, just thought it’d be cool! Hope u like it! : 3
-specialraptor or zznake
To: SangToareGirl, DiploLover, and RelatingHen
From: Ben, & KM, creators of The Arks: Over Heaven
We have read all three of your stories (Valguero’s Guardian, Creatures of Nightmares, and Journey Through All Creatures respectively). Let us give our thoughts.
SangToareGirl, your story was pretty cool. There wasn’t much to say about it, the plot flowed well and all the like. It was simple, but then again, nothing needs to be complicated. My only gripe was the human x creature shapeshifter theme, which I found very weird. Even if the creature is sentient as a human, it’s still weird. Though I don’t think your other story will be like that.
DiploLover, Creatures of Nightmares was also really nice. I like the concept a lot, it reminds me of Moon’s The Obelisk, a long while back. I feel as if there should be an explanation/lore as to how these wolves got powers (more specifically Pax, whose time powers I assume won’t correlate with the Wings of Fire-esque thing), though I think you’ll do that when appropriate. Also an explanation as to how Astra turned into a wolf would be good too, though I think you got that as well. It seems that Astra and Pax will be the main ship, since their names are similar and Pax is even described as more handsome than Prince (sorry bro). Anyway it’s cool, my only gripe was the prophecy felt too obvious but prophecies are already difficult to write. I hope that we will see other characters besides the five prophecy wolves and Shadow, especially of other species, as it would help establish the world building and what not.
RelatingHen, your story was also fun to read. It’s a fun concept, and I think a few other writers with no names did something similar, though you’re the first to get past the first chapter. C Tribe dynamics are cool, though I wish that we could get more information on other tribes around the Island, as the world building for that still seems barren. The idea of the Ravage also sounds cool, and I have a wild guess at what Rod supposedly did to Serenity. So besides world building, in terms of feedback the only thing I’d say is to clarify who “this person” is. For example, when Terad lands in the bush, it’s described that “a person came out of the bushes”, but it’s never elaborated who it is until a few sentences later when Terad is randomly described to be crashing out, which makes the readers think, “oh so that person who got out of the bushes was Terad, I think it would be helpful to have learned that earlier.” Same thing for the person riding the Titanosaur, we were wondering who it was for like a paragraph until Rod was just thrown out there. So yeah that’s the only thing we’d say to fix is. An example to fix this is: “Someone emerged from the bushes. It was Terad.” So just say immediately afterwards who it was. Yeah that’s about it, I’ll be reading Chap 10 when it comes out. I’m guessing Terad died permanently, since he’s in C Tribe (though I’m wondering why he had only like 20 levels if he can only die once and be unable to respawn). He was annoying anyway. Also, KM says that to add more female characters, one way or another. KM finds them more interesting than dudes. That’s all, later.
The Chronicles of Corruption
(a prequel to Dodo tales)
Prologue: the Ark Jerry would soon call home was once a peaceful and beautiful place, but things never last forever, and the once perfect world would soon fall to evil
(Chapter one: before the beginning)
For the longest time, Corrin had felt like his tribe was lacking unity, and that the king should have more power. As the prince, he was quite lonely, but was treated well by strangers. The only friend he had ever had was Simon, who he assumed only wanted to tie his family to the royals somehow. His father was 54, and honestly just refused to end his rule. One day, Corrin asked his father if he could go hunt. He was experienced, and could throw throwing knives very accurately. On the way his "friend", who was about his age, 17, found Corrin, and tried to talk with him.
"Leave me alone" he kept telling him
"Don't be like this again. I saw some dilos in the canyon, Why don't we go and try to hunt them" Simon responded...
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