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To Ben
Thanks for your feedback! Yeah there are references to the events in the Aberration segment. Cool. And also the fact that Dread is the leader of the tribe after Rod left Aberration and we will see him soon. More info is yet to come for Extinction.
Also I reposted Chapter 30 to fix the error of the day count being 75 instead of 61. It will make more sense now.
-RelatingHen8906
To: RelatingHen
From: Ben
RelatingHen, Chapter 29 of JTAC was pretty good! I enjoyed the Morellatops taming process, and now my suspicions of Rod are raising because of what he said. Who is Dread, and what shield is he talking about? It seems he’s only coming along the journey out of revenge against the Rock Death Tribe, which I think was the original tribe who had betrayed him on Aberration and caused the Ravage. Clearly though Rod’s plans conflict with Sodden’s, so he’s going to have to deal with him one way or another. Suspicious indeed. I also liked the flashbacks to ARKtic / Snowball, and I’m curious about who the survivor Nal and Dorack saved is, and if we’ll see them in the future. I still think it’s a bit contradictory to have the two enjoy their time on Snowball for it being a ‘great challenge’ if they almost died doing it, it would make more sense if they’re just thrillseekers. You’d have to show it in their dialogue and actions in future chapters if so. Also it was interesting to see some information about C Tribe’s reaction to the others’ ascension on the Island, and just getting a POV on The Island in general. It seems there’s a ‘barrier’ of sorts between Extinction and probably the rest of the ARKs. If they can head to Extinction earlier, it’s probably because the C Tribe has an Explorer with them. It was awesome seeing Cordor’s wrath get the best of him, and the sticky situations he keeps getting in is only because of his impulse and irrationality. Seeing how C Tribe is strengthening the barrier, though, makes me believe that there will be some giant war between C Tribe and Sodden’s group in the Extinction Section of the story. I’m interested to see what Cordor wants with it though.
Chapter 30 of JTAC was also cool, the Alpha Raptor taming process was nice and the flashbacks to Nal’s near-death was also really cool. There’s not too much to say about this chapter, but the only thing that seems off-putting is the information Dorack gives in Chapter 29 seems contridcatory to what happens in Chapter 30. Dorack says that his best friend (Nal) was mere centiseconds away from death, and her HP was in the hundredths, on Day 60. However the convo between Dorack and Nal about the situation happens on Day 74, which is before Day 75 when Nal wakes up. The timeline seems a little off, I would suggest going over it and revising it to avoid confusion. Overall, my favorite part of this chapter was Dorack sacrificing his blood to save Nal using the blood syringe, it was a creative way to get it done.
To: MrGhostGamer
From: Ben
Chapters 3 and 4 of AOEE were great! I’m even more curious now as to why the United Republic is throwing their own citizens and people into the ARK. I already like Josh, he seems to be an eccentric fellow who will help Percival and Ethan survive and acclimate to their new environment, especially since he’s already got a basic base running. Now I’m even more curious as to who could be arguing outside their base.
Just posted Chapter 81, working on the next!
Really glad to be back, this place and you guys make me so happy 😁
And the Platinum Heart of Ark, ugh, the admins do that password thing a lot. It’ll reopen in about a week.
All of yur stories are doing great! Appreciate you all, and I mean it!
—Moon
Moon-
I have good news and bad news.
I’ll tell the good news first. I can finally go on safari! (Or online.)
Bad news? I lost ark. My dad deleted it for this thing so called, kids messenger? Did I HAVE to loose ark for that STUPID reason? :(
At least I still can talk to you guys! Byeeee!
-SpecialRaptor
The Phoenix Kronicles
Prologue
Kronos was ruler of the world. There was no doubt about that. His face was in every continent. All four of them. Unicorn, Phoenix, Dragon and Manticore. Sag knew what Kronos was planning. With the help of his lightning wyvern, Kronos was going to attack the world and the survivors will become his slaves. Sag had to stop this. Under the light of 10 moons he snuck into Kronos’ palace. With a wyvern claw he stabbed Kronos. Kronos leapt up from his bed and ran to the kitchen. When Sag got there Kronos was on the floor. Covered in blood. Drako, Kronos’ son, came in. “Dad,” he said. Sag explained.
20 years later, two explorers were traveling in the cave of wonders. One gasped and dropped his torch. The other looked confused. And then horrified. And dropped his torch. There was the angry face of Kronos and his wyvern. He fed one to his wyvern. And made the other his slave. “I will finish what I started.”
A phoenix lay in the Phoenix cave. Looking at a moon as silver as unicorn blood.
A prophet muttered these words. “The terror will return. Nothing will stop him. One phoenix. Two riders. One destiny. If the ashes lay down. Nothing will stop him.” One wild adventure was about to come.
Next in anklo
Hey! Writing back to Johns creator! (Maybe you could have a cool nickname like Johnny J or something😏)
I am writing a story! It is called never to be free. It starts on shadowmane, and I usually post where the next chapters are on the section, and so on. Just a suggestion, maybe not try having two stories running at the same time? You know, because it may get scrambled? I just don’t want to down you. (It makes me feel bad for some reason 😱) Can’t wait to catch up on your story! 😊👍
Tina. Wright back soon! Ps I always check sections where I post notes, so feel free to wright anytime! Well, it may come later. It takes like TWO DAYS to post. That is annoying.