To: Sylveevee, Bob the Survivor, Jerrald, RelatingHen8906
To: Sylveevee, Bob the Survivor, Jerrald, RelatingHen8906
From: Ben
Anyone looking for a good length per chapter that isn’t too long but not too short, Season 2 of Dark Dragons is a good start. It’s an enjoyable story, and although Bob is currently revising Season 1, the rest of Season 2 is great.
Sylveevee, Chapter 1 of SOH:SOTS was great! I can’t wait to see how the rest of Cloud and Jungle’s story goes!
Bob the Survivor, the recent chapters of Dark Dragons Season 2 have been amazing so far. I cannot wait to see how the story goes and how you’ll do Season 1 Reboot now!
Jerrald, the wait for Chapter VII of The Island was so worth it. I understand that life gets pretty busy sometimes, so that’s quite reasonable. A lot of us actually have been busy too, which is why story rate has decreased somewhat. Anyway, it was a great chapter; I loved the encounter with the pet Pegomastax (though who would willingly tame one of those? I feel like their pickpocket for PVP is worthless since they’re so fragile). I’m interested about who “Chaz” is. I assume that stealing his stuff was of malicious intent, so they’ll either be forced to cooperate with Marcel for the sake of survival, or be a minor antagonist against Marcel (they are only using a Pego after all), who will perhaps progressively get stronger and more geared up as Marcel also grows on the Island. I’m interested to see how the interaction will go when they inevitably meet. Also the Raptor encounter was a lot of fun, I like how his stomach was torn open, just like they usually do. Marcel is definitely gonna get trauma from all the repeated deaths, especially with how gruesome they can be (eaten, stabbed, shot…). Though if Marcel can respawn, will Chaz be able to? Or any other Survivors on the Island? Quite intriguing. Anyway, it was an amazing chapter, and I cannot wait to read Chapter VIII!
RelatingHen, Chapters 33 and 34 of JTAC were awesome so far! Rod is growing more and more untrustworthy with each chapter that comes out, and whatever his plans are for when he arrives in Aberration are definitely no good. Elaine is also an interesting figure, as she appears in TCR. I wonder if that will tie in at all to the Multiversal stuff at play. I’m interested about how Tundra managed to show up on Scorched Earth too, and who could have transported her over. Maybe it was Jerboa, as a sign of his appreciation, but how would he know to send it over to SE of all places? Anyway, interested to see how the rest of the SE arc will go. I’m assuming Chapter 37 will be the Manticore fight, and 37.5 the bridge between SE and Aberration. I’m assuming 36 and 35 will both be prep chapters, with either of the two being when they start hunting down the creatures they need to hunt down to clear the list of creatures.













