To: Wyvernian, SangToareGirl, DiploLover, RelatingHen
To: Wyvernian, SangToareGirl, DiploLover, RelatingHen
Wyvernian, Chapter 15 of TOP-OOS was awesome! Putting this here to raise awareness of the story to those who don’t know.
Sang, Chapter 1 of TFAF and Chapter 5 of TFTOA were great! Of course I’ve already left thoughts on Fandom blah blah blah, I’ll leave it here though anyway.
DiploLover, Chapter 26 of CON was great! Very excited to see how the five wolves will adapt to their new human forms, and how KJ and the human girl will inevitably interfere with the Five Wolves’ operation of saving the wolves from Carnivore Island, especially if the human girl is going to try and tame Reign. This makes me interested though how creatures act when and after being tamed, especially since the wolves are sentient. Considering that Paradise the Crystal Wyvern doesn’t seem to speak (then again, we just might not know), it seems they become automatically obedient as is in the original game. Interested to see how it goes! Also as RelatingHen said, if you don’t want to create multiple parts for the same chapter, once you run out of space simply switch to a category like Funny and then back to Stories. There’s still a limit to how much you can put, but I doubt anyone here would reach that limit through conventional chapters. (*cough cough TAOH chapter 100).
RelatingHen, I’m sure anyone’s stories being made into a TV show would be a wonder, though the question of whether media “deserves” a show is a strange one. Shouldn’t all books deserve their own adaptations if they’re all good pieces of work? Anyway, Chapter 19 and 20 were good stuff, I liked how the Immune cave was done in Chapter 19, I like the cave chapters in general because it can actually be reliable source of info on how to clear them. Also interested to see how Terad’s scheming with the Titanosaur will interfere with Nameless, who seem to be as big as a threat as C Tribe if not more. Also considering Sodden is also nearing T creatures that means he’ll probably get involved in the mix too to try and kill it. In usual gameplay though Titanosaurs weren’t too useful, at least in my opinion. Idk, maybe it’s a PVP thing I’m unaware of. Also like how mindwipe tonics are utilized in the last part of Chap 19, I suppose that’s a useful way of using them. The only reason why i don’t use them constantly in my playthroughs is because they’re a bit expensive and they also reset all engrams which means constantly re-learning stuff. Chapter 20 was also really cool too, and it’s interesting to see the stakes now that Sodden’s implant is about to break, and seeing that Nameless is also around the corner. I’m guessing Chapter 21 will be about that encounter, and it won’t be very pretty.













