To: Duke

From: Ben, & KM

Duke, Chapter 2 of FAF was great! It was nice getting to know the cultures of each Wyvern’s kingdom/place of origin. There wasn’t much else to say there, but just a quick note that Forest Wyverns are much smaller than the usual Wyvern. They’re around half the size. Not sure you know that, just keep that in mind. Since Jasper is not a full adult yet (I think) them being same size could just be because of age. Or you could say that Elm is a Forest Wyvern with a mutation that makes her much larger than the usual ones.

Another thing to note is that Forest Wyverns only spawn on Extinction, and during the Forest Titan boss fight (which takes place deep underground in the Fallen ARK). I know you already thought up some ideas for the Forest Wyvern culture, but you could also find a way to incorporate that into the idea.

Also cool you got a cover done, if you want to show it you could go to the Dododex Fanfiction Wiki Fandom if you’re able to, create a Fandom account and then upload the photo that way. We don’t have a page for your story yet but we could easily make it. Anyway seeya around!