From Ben

Hello everyone! Chapter 96 is out in Paraceratherium! There are now 4 chapters of TAOH left! Anyway, that was nice. It actually went better than I thought. This is a reminder that it might seem hard writing a chapter at first but once you get into the flow of it it becomes a thousand times easier.

Hello Moon Tales Girl! Welcome to Achatina section! Your story Moon Tales is very cool.

Break-it, sometimes you need to reflect on the direction of your story and what you want to do with it. Understanding that mastery doesn’t come immediately is fine, because if you work hard enough toward your goal of mastery you’ll reach it. Mastery is a very interpretive matter but I think you’re close to reaching it. You still need to work on a few things such as a consistent writing schedule and overall some more important literature topics that don’t need to be covered right now but your dialogue and plot and ideas with the story are doing great so far, so don’t give up! Anyway seeya around i sent a message about your previous three chapters a bit ago (although not too sure if you saw it yet). Anyway I noticed you just finished QOA. I hope it was as fun to read as I had fun reading it. I suggest heading over to read Hope’s Cry next by MrGhostGamer. The story is in the All filter alphabetically, although you will need to skip boss creature sections. The story is 24 chapters long and not too long of a read.

Sylveevee, Chapter 2 of WOA was awesome sauce! I wonder what Drake’s vision was all about and what the stone Sylveevee picked up was. Still curious about why Sylveevee and Pat betrayed Moonhigh. I think it’ll come up later. I’m guessing the story Drake learned was about the Phantom Legends as teased. Well that was a fun chapter overall!

SunnyFox57, Chapter 4 of The Lost Soul was great! It was so nice seeing Bella again even though we didn’t see her much in TTOTSP. I’m guessing the voice Tom keeps hearing is the Krakos. And now the strange thing in the shadows makes sense, it’s Bella who noticed and smelled Tom’s scent and decided to follow him. I can’t wait to see how the rest of Lost Soul goes!

Chapter 18 of The Lost World was also really nice. Kinda sad Chapter 17 can’t get posted because of technical issues but oh well. I don’t like Cedric as much as the others. I think my favorite characters are in the order Rowan, Kannon, Elayne, Oliver, and then Cedric. Cedric’s prankster ways come off as more selfish and inconsiderate than the other characters and in my opinion I actually don’t like him as much as Samuel from TAOH. Anyway it’s nice seeing Rowan get out of her comfort zone and learn to be more vulnerable and expressive. Wonder what that thing at the end was… Eh, we’ll figure out soon. Unless you pull a cliffhanger and have it in like the chapter after.

Moon, Chapter 10 of Pandora was really great! I really enjoyed the symbolism of the deformed bird and its parallel to Pandora. The fact that Pandora was able to envision the Flier horde again with her visions was really trippy and honestly really cool. I’m still going to place my bets on the fact that the thing scaring the horde is the Dodorex, which was teased on Fandom. I can also sense the tension between Bria and Rainstone. I hope they become friends and we get another convo between them. Also can’t wait to see Toxin actually pull his own weight and talk to people on his own… Anyway that was a good chapter, I can’t wait for the next! And also for whatever you could be planning and scheming…

Wyvernian, Chapter 49 of TOT was awesome! The banter between Nova and Fjordur’s Dragon about the whole name thing was pretty funny. The teleportation of all the villains was also really well done and makes sense since the White Obelisk can do it with the heroes. Drain’s transformation into the wyvern-like creature was also really cool. Also Rockwell’s Innards… can’t wait for HC Rockwell to discover this region eventually. Anyway since I think we’re nearing the end of the arc we should all discus which groups go to which regions of the TOT map for the corruption apocalypse arc we were planning right we’re doing that next? Anyway can’t wait to see what PrimalApex does for Chapter 50… (WOAH WE’RE THAT FAR IN CRAZY).

Although, I would say that I did not really appreciate the stab at Samuel in this chapter. I didn’t mind him crying over Star betraying him, but describing him as “broken” felt a bit disrespectful and done only because he is not a likable character within TAOH. I could also go over the fact that Star was described to not have the capability or desire to go out or do anything due to her feelings of not being there for Samuel, and thus it would be illogical for her to act out against him (this was explicitly stated in the Fandom discussion chain), I will not go over it now. Some communication about some of my characters would be appreciated and I think the same for others. I literally do not care what you do with them as long as I am told about it. I try my best to make everyone’s characters accurate and true to themselves and I expect the same from you. Anyway, nothing personal!

See you all soon!