From Ben
From Ben
The first draft model has released onto Dreadnoughtus! I can’t wait to see your submissions for this thing! Remember the rules for your story:
No “it was all just a dream” endings.
You don’t have to make it ARK related
No 18+ content (if it wasn’t obvious enough already)
No “script” stories
Try your best to follow the genre
HAVE FUN DONT STRESS ABOUT IT DONT GO TOO CRAZY AND WRITE A WHOLE TEN BOOKS ON IT PLEASE ITS MEANT FOR 5th GRADERS
Break-it okay if you aren’t moving your story that’s fine i’m still gonna read it anyway
Wyvernian ahh I see, okay that makes sense then. So it’s more of a hatred for humans thing rather than it being forced, got it!
Sylveevee, Chapter 22 was great! I can’t believe Pat still feels bad about the whole situation between him and Queen Syl. Can they get back together? Eh, probably not (he did try to kill her numerous times and she locked him up in a dungeon). But she can still forgive him. Hmm, but now Milo doesn’t trust him as much. That’s great! Now they might end up splitting off! That was good stuff, can’t wait to see the next chapter.
PrimalApex, Chapter 13 was awesome! So they were Corrupted Raptors. Well that makes sense considering we saw them in the last chapter. Anyway that was super suspenseful and I almost thought this was how Reuben was going to die. I wonder what that earthquake was though. Was it from a Titan or something? I don’t remember if titans could cause earthquakes. Well I can’t wait to see how Andrew takes these Corrupted Raptors down. I hope it doesn’t come with heavy sacrifices.
Sunny, Chapter 28 of TOT was amazing! I’m glad that both the ROTP groups and the QOA groups came together and put their differences aside in order to go home (Arianna really is the MVP). The description of the White Obelisk was also really cool, like how it was in Chapter 26. And ten cats?! That’s a lot!
I wonder what Wyvernian is going to do for Chapter 29, since right now nothing is really going on in the Pandora section (except for the wall engravings thing). Maybe they can go meet up with one of the other groups or something? Nothing’s really happening for them right now.
Anyway that was awesome. I’ll see ya around!
From Ben
The first draft model has released onto Dreadnoughtus! I can’t wait to see your submissions for this thing! Remember the rules for your story:
No “it was all just a dream” endings.
You don’t have to make it ARK related
No 18+ content (if it wasn’t obvious enough already)
No “script” stories
Try your best to follow the genre
HAVE FUN DONT STRESS ABOUT IT DONT GO TOO CRAZY AND WRITE A WHOLE TEN BOOKS ON IT PLEASE ITS MEANT FOR 5th GRADERS
Break-it okay if you aren’t moving your story that’s fine i’m still gonna read it anyway
Wyvernian ahh I see, okay that makes sense then. So it’s more of a hatred for humans thing rather than it being forced, got it!
Sylveevee, Chapter 22 was great! I can’t believe Pat still feels bad about the whole situation between him and Queen Syl. Can they get back together? Eh, probably not (he did try to kill her numerous times and she locked him up in a dungeon). But she can still forgive him. Hmm, but now Milo doesn’t trust him as much. That’s great! Now they might end up splitting off! That was good stuff, can’t wait to see the next chapter.
PrimalApex, Chapter 13 was awesome! So they were Corrupted Raptors. Well that makes sense considering we saw them in the last chapter. Anyway that was super suspenseful and I almost thought this was how Reuben was going to die. I wonder what that earthquake was though. Was it from a Titan or something? I don’t remember if titans could cause earthquakes. Well I can’t wait to see how Andrew takes these Corrupted Raptors down. I hope it doesn’t come with heavy sacrifices.
Sunny, Chapter 28 of TOT was amazing! I’m glad that both the ROTP groups and the QOA groups came together and put their differences aside in order to go home (Arianna really is the MVP). The description of the White Obelisk was also really cool, like how it was in Chapter 26. And ten cats?! That’s a lot!
I wonder what Wyvernian is going to do for Chapter 29, since right now nothing is really going on in the Pandora section (except for the wall engravings thing). Maybe they can go meet up with one of the other groups or something? Nothing’s really happening for them right now.
Anyway that was awesome. I’ll see ya around!