From Ben

MrGhostGamer you’re up for the next chapter of TOT!

PrimalApex, I really loved Chapter 24 of TOT all the character personalities were on point! Aurora and the others’ reactions to Andrew and Erica’s academic achievements were so accurate, I don’t think I would have come up with something like that. It makes sense considering Aurora tried all her life to be the best so she could get into a good college, but meeting two bigger fish would obviously be a shock to her.

Ruby also feeling lonely was really accurate. Over time in TAOH she grew really close to Neddy, and now he’s one of the only people she’s comfortable with (not even Aurora, who was her friend, doesn’t really help she abandoned her).

Andrew is honestly such a good guy in TOT, he probably will be the same in future Ultimus chapters too when he meets these survivors. He’s a really good leader and I definitely like him more than Samuel (not like anyone does).

Erica’s discovery that they all come from different worlds was also really well done. The conflicting decision was well done as well and I really liked how their characters conflict with one another. Erica obviously doesn’t trust them as they come from other worlds, but Andrew reasons that they need to work together because the news would cause more panic and destruction. Really good stuff. (also I laughed at the part where Andrew said that Sylas could die from the panic LOL).

Anyway this chapter was super good. I really enjoyed it.

Hmm, some ideas though for the next chapters with TAOH or Ultimus POV:

Erica did tell Ruby about the ARKs, and we know that the TAOH group isn’t exactly aware they’re on a ARK. They do know that the place they’re on was once in a story though. Neddy does have his speculations that there’s something deeper though. So maybe either of us could explore that (especially since he and Ruby are close).

Anyways I loved it. Later!