From Ben
From Ben
Lolz i just saw a more recent comment on Hati and Skoll asking for 2000 likes on their story in Overseer ππ
its definitely above the average "fanfic" length, but certainly not the best. Definitely does not warrant 2000 likes. Length does not equate greatness, and like count does not equate quality. A writer could get 10 likes on a below average story, and another could get 3 likes on an above average story.
If i had to rate this story, it would be like a 60% since theres no character depth. I also love it when newbie writers ask for like ten likes for Episode 2 when their story is actual slop that took a few minutes to put together. Put a bit more effort in your story before you ask for likes, am i right?
Okay PrimalApex so if you need more time on Ultimus thats fine. Ill write Chapter 4 then? Also I read Ultimus Chap 6 it was really nice how Andrew was listing off names suggested by Rue first. I guess his best friends on his mind first. And Reuben is like Rue, but, with ben at the end so he must care right right? Also i reread the Prologue and i think i noticed a change, Andrew speaks Japanese? Maybe he meets a Japanese person?
Im trying to deny the fact that Reubens going to die, but, hey im holding onto that hope.
Journey Chapter 4 was also really cool, and something tells me Forest is really far from home... i wonder where he landed, The Island? Guess we'll have to wait and see.
Ok laters guys













