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From Ben

Lolz i just saw a more recent comment on Hati and Skoll asking for 2000 likes on their story in Overseer 😭😭

its definitely above the average "fanfic" length, but certainly not the best. Definitely does not warrant 2000 likes. Length does not equate greatness, and like count does not equate quality. A writer could get 10 likes on a below average story, and another could get 3 likes on an above average story.

If i had to rate this story, it would be like a 60% since theres no character depth. I also love it when newbie writers ask for like ten likes for Episode 2 when their story is actual slop that took a few minutes to put together. Put a bit more effort in your story before you ask for likes, am i right?

Okay PrimalApex so if you need more time on Ultimus thats fine. Ill write Chapter 4 then? Also I read Ultimus Chap 6 it was really nice how Andrew was listing off names suggested by Rue first. I guess his best friends on his mind first. And Reuben is like Rue, but, with ben at the end so he must care right right? Also i reread the Prologue and i think i noticed a change, Andrew speaks Japanese? Maybe he meets a Japanese person?

Im trying to deny the fact that Reubens going to die, but, hey im holding onto that hope.

Journey Chapter 4 was also really cool, and something tells me Forest is really far from home... i wonder where he landed, The Island? Guess we'll have to wait and see.

Ok laters guys

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