From Ben
From Ben
Woah, lot’s happened since I posted Chapter 31. First of all, thank you so much for reading my recent chapter, PrimalApex, SunnyFox, and GhostGamer!
Sylveevee and Angel, I don’t know who’s downing everything but maybe some people have high expectations for fanfic. No clue… your stories are still fine! Although Angel I might have to pass on your story. I don’t affiliate with AI nor do I condone usage of it in creative writing. So… probably not going to read it, sorry, that’s just a pledge I made a long time ago. We as humans can go beyond and use our creativity to outmatch artificial intelligence. So, good luck on your story, but I cannot read it. Also Syl nice work using your imagination to create your original story! Much better than Wolves of Fire, or whatever it was named (the Wings of Fire parody). You’re going to do great on this one!
Moonflight, I can’t wait for The Obelisk Chapter 97! I bet something really crazy and big will happen which is why it’s taking longer than usual to release.
Aww Sandmaster that’s lame. Well I’ll be waiting! I can wait a week for the next chapter to come out. And if it’s coming out in Allo… that means an Allosaurus will be involved! Well I’m interested, but we’ll just have to wait and find out, huh?
MrGhostGamer I cannot wait for Chapter 22 of Hope’s Cry! I wonder what damage Rockwell will instill and how they’re going to deal with the Dragon… and of course when Jake and Buddy are going to meet, and I think especially important is when will Jake meet his parents again? And what crazy visions are Buddy going to see now…
Wyvernian, Chapter 31 was really cool and the Dinopithecus King sounds very awesome! However I wonder if this is just a regular Dinopithecus who’s older or the real Dinopithecus King like the boss.
MrDemonRealz, Chapter 3 of Ark Tales was really cool! There’s so much worldbuilding going on already, especially cool considering there will only be 20 chapters of this? Well you don’t post as frequently but these are still nice tidbits! I wonder who Chief Zargot is, are they a threat? And looking back at Chapter 1, Greta and Hanson probably came from another ARK… at least it seems suggested as it says that a space station exploded. Well this seems cool, I can’t wait to see what characters will be introduced!
PrimalApex, I’m studying your teaser right now, and hmm, who could this dinosaur be? Well, first of all I thought Procoptodon because they eat rare flowers, but obviously it’s not that easy. I don’t know why but I immediately thought Baryonyx… dunno why it just felt like one. But the biggest hint here is “His toe claw tapped on the metal of the obelisk base”. So this dinosaur has a toe claw, so perhaps a Dromaeosaurid like a Raptor or… Deinonychus? It makes sense because it would follow the theme of The Obelisk, of carnivores banding together, and of course a Deinonychus was literally in The Obelisk as a main character, Rust! That’s the bet I’m going with right now. A Raptor or a Deinonychus. I’m wrong or I’m right, we’ll just have to wait and find out, eh? And I totally agree with you about the end of the Obelisk.
SunnyFox57 the previous three chapters were brilliant! Your comeback… outshined, most of the competition that’s for sure. However I think you mislabeled one of the chapters, Chapter 10 should be 9, 11 should be 10, and so forth. It’s actually kind of sickening how far down the gutter Tom has gone. He really did let rage consume him. Maybe he’s been evil all along. No. No he’s not, it’s probably his dad’s fault for being hard on him! I think. Also I guess Josephina/Hailey is getting her memories back. That memory of her and Jaquin riding on Jay and Jack’s back made me kind of sad because it reminded me of Aragorn and Arianna’s death. Sniff. Also does Tom want Jay and the rest of the family on his side? Might be, and then he’ll wipe their mind like Hailey, so stay away! First line of Chapter 10/11 just took me away 😭, because that’s the line that happened on the ball… I really hope Emma and Andrew made it out of Tortuga safely. That peacekeeper Paul did, so she must have, right? Right? And Jack too? And the Buckleshoots? Also Chapter 11/12… it’s the same as Prologue and Chapter 3. But Hailey is starting to remember more! Soon she’s going to break out, I’m sure! Except for Jaquin, that’s the problem he still hasn’t escaped the confines yet, he still doesn’t remember. Also Hailey hugged Tom I wonder how that made him feel… Well that’s the only difference I spotted between both moments, but it seems Tom says the same things every time he wipes her mind. I guess it’s part of the trick, right?
Well this was fun. See you next time!













