From Ben,

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From Ben,

Wow, the climax of Obelisk draws soon? I didnt think itd be so quick. Yk some days I wish I was around longer, but im still thankful to have you all here with me. As buds. And I read 89, and like, yes! I agree, go save your girl Nyx! Whew. This is gonna be fun. Ill also be interested to hear Galaxia's stories.

Apex, I didnt know you were going to write a story too. Thats pretty awesome. I cant wait to hear it.

Bob the Survivor, I was able to read up to, I believe Mek. I think its really nice, but Im most confused about Johns allies. I know they are characters from explorer notes, but how did they all meet? I think that should definitely be explored. To me I just found it confusing. Also, one very very important thing in a story is character interactions. Creating good relationships and conversations is what really brings a story to life. It helps readers relate to the characters and connect with them. So, I think itd be really good if you work on that. Or maybe you already have, and im just going on. On the other hand, I like the Chapter Names! I wish more people did that. I think were the only ones in this little group that does.

TA:OH wont be able to be releases. My wifis actually out for next 2 weeks πŸ₯². But, i want to be productive. As soon as my wifis back up, Im going to release Chapters 7-9 in a bundle (separately but at once).

Whew. That was a lot. And, of course, a question for the day. Whats your favorite genre of songs and stories? I enjoy romance.

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