From Ben,

Bob The Survivor, Wyvernian's "Heroes of Pandora" prologue can be found in Allo and the story continues in alphabetical order in the category, Tameables (i think).

Also, I read Chapter 1. I think it was a good beginning, I dont know if youve done this but dialogue would suffice even if Johns the only character. Like thoughts or talking to himself would add some heart. Overall easy to read, but the only problem I have is finding Chapter 2 is hard, because when I check I think there's multiple chapter 2s. What order does it go in so i cam read the right chapter?

End, Ben