Hey Cheesecake, cool story so far! I already gave Spirit some advice for beginner writers, so ask her if you need it. You're already good with sentence structure though, which is good for cohesiveness. one final thing, there is a Dododex Stories website which you can use to view tips on real time. Whenever you get this, you'll know. That's all, I'll see you around.
- Ben
Open the Dododex app on iOS or Android, select a creature, and go to Tips > Submit Tip.
The Arks: Over Heaven
Prologue: Ill-Fated
The day was sunny. The day was bright. There were no clouds in sight. All that filled the skies was the light that poured in from the sun. It seemed like the perfect day.…
The Arks: Over Heaven (by Ben)
Chapter 22: Briefing
Part 2/2
Everyone burst into conversation once again, pretty much everyone arguing over who the heroes could be, but Samuel had already figured Skyler out.…
The Arks: Over Heaven (by Ben)
Chapter 22: Briefing
Part 1/2
βI am glad that weβve all been able to come together to discuss what comes next for the Book Club,β Skyler said as everyone settled down…
The Arks: Over Heaven (by Ben)
Chapter 95: Finality
Alan let out a roar of rage and slammed Dr. Aston down into the metal counter. Dr. Aston let out a grunt and looked up into Alanβs bloodthirsty eyes. He…
The Omega Timeline
Prologue: Intervention - by Ben
Once, there was a tale of scholars on an island.
Once, there was a tale of a cruel, remote city on an island.
Once, there was a tale of heroes on an…
The Arks: Over Heaven
Chapter 10: The One Behind It All
Original Post Date: Jan 20, 2024
Note: Story starts in Wyvern, Aerial ABC backwards filter and has a Prologue. Last chapter in Scout, next chapter in…
The Arks: Over Heaven (by Ben)
Chapter 94: Memory Palace
βDid-Did Ben just activate Attribute Amplification?β Ian asked, almost stunned. John looked on in awe as a strange barrier was constructed. It was a…
The Omega Timeline
Chapter 55, Part 2: Totality
- by Ben
βThere are no winners in war.β
Andrew released the string of his light bow and the arrow of light instantly shot out and hit Drain in the chest.…
The Arks: Alternative Timeline
ACT 6: Calm Before the Storm
This is a Theri exclusive story.
Written by Ben (OBJ)
You do not have to read TAOH to understand this story.
Author's Note: There's a…
The Arks: Over Heaven
Chapter 4: Cranking the Difficulty
Original Post Date: Nov 4, 2023
Note: Story starts in Wyvern, Aerial ABC backwards filter and has a Prologue. Last chapter in Voidwyrm, next chapter in…
The Arks: Over Heaven
Chapter 9: Sacrifices for Success
Original Post Date: Jan 18, 2024
Note: Story starts in Wyvern, Aerial ABC backwards filter and has a Prologue. Last chapter in Sinomacrops, next chapter…
The Arks: Over Heaven
Chapter 7: Night Hunters Strike
Original Post Date: Dec 3, 2023
Note: Story starts in Wyvern, Aerial ABC backwards filter and has a Prologue. Last chapter in Summoner, next chapter in…
The Arks: Over Heaven
Chapter 6: Game is Game
Original Post Date: Nov 23, 2023
Note: Story starts in Wyvern, Aerial ABC backwards filter and has a Prologue. Last chapter in Tapejara, next chapter in Snow…
The Arks: Over Heaven
Chapter 5: I Miss You
Original Post Date: Nov 10, 2023
Note: Story starts in Wyvern, Aerial ABC backwards filter and has a Prologue. Last chapter in Tropeognathus, next chapter in…
The Arks: Over Heaven
Chapter 3: Intermission
Original Post Date: Oct 31, 2023
Note: Story starts in Wyvern, Aerial ABC backwards filter and has a Prologue. Last chapter in Vulture, next chapter in…
