Dododex

ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion

Hey Cheesecake, cool story so far! I already gave Spirit some advice for beginner writers, so ask her if you need it. You're already good with sentence structure though, which is good for cohesiveness. one final thing, there is a Dododex Stories website which you can use to view tips on real time. Whenever you get this, you'll know. That's all, I'll see you around.

- Ben