Hey Spirit Dragon, read the 2 chapters thus far and they're good so far! Just remember to keep into account the main conflict of your story (the problem) and the antagonist thats causing it (a character, a natural disaster, or a force of nature). As it is an ARK story, you should also try to figure out which one you will put it on. This will help determine possible future settings and the geography. U can also come up with your own fictional custom ark / world. Make sure to come up with a title too. It will attract more readers and will make it easier for them to find your chapters. Also, since chapters and episodes are the same thing, omit one or the other. If I'm correct, you're using Chapter as a Book. one final thing, there is a Dododex Stories website which you can use to view tips on real time. Whenever you get this, you'll know. That's all, good luck with your story.

- Ben