From Ben

Hi Reader, I finished the first 30 Chapters of A World of Dinosaurs, and I liked it quite a bit. Snows a fun character to watch hunt and do stuff, although the pacing felt a little weird in the beginning because all they did was hunt rabbits, it got better near the end of the 30 chapters when more dinosaurs were introduced. Although one problem I do have is dialogue, I think quotation marks should be used if they havent already, itll make it easier to tell whos saying who.

Thats all the feedback, and im wondering who that black dog is. Fenrir? And of course what map this takes place on, and what Rose has to do with the enemy wolf pack. I also wonder why Snow gets weird dream visions, is it like a special power?

Well, Ill be around in Achatina with SunnyFox and friends. Come by soon! And if you have any response, feel free to put it anywhere. I always find those messages.