Uh, actually, Storm becoming part of the hivemind doesn't make much sense, after all, heirs are special in that they can be controlled as a hivemind, that is a feature of only alphas and heirs. Also,
hiveminding is too good for him, first he'll spend a year in the incinerator, and then year two in the cryogenic storage chamber, and then ten years in the chamber I'll build where all the robots scream at you
(reference that you may or may not understand)
Also, there are far better things to do with Storm, for instance, D.T.'s pinãta idea, and, trust me, as a pinãta for wyvern heirs, blood and internal organs and other gruesomeness not to be named are far better than candy, because, ya'know, wyverns just prefer innards to boiled sugar as food 🙂
Or, of course, other good ideas for Storm could be:
The others find a gravestone in the middle of nowhere saying:
Here lies part of Storm
R I P
(Rest In Pieces)
The crystal queen keeps him and claims he's a good food source and cuts lumps put of his tail and feeds them to the heirs like what people do with leedsicthys
(Weird and kinda disgusting, but still)
Similarly, the crystal queen changes her mind about hiveminding, and instead swallows him, because, well, he does contain delicious primal energy, and of course, it doesn't leave any corpse in case the others try to find him later😃
He is rescued by the others and "dies from natural causes" which should actually be "dies from brother" as Hurricane murders him thinking he might do the same to him because they fought over who gets to have Vein once
He dies bravely protecting Vein from a giant spike falling out of the sky, Hurricane tries to save him but he just gets impaled and all three of them become a sort of dead-wyvern kebab which Blicket rudely interrupts Qinter eating before they get a chance to bury it
(Ironic, depressing, noble, what's not to like, other than the main character a kebab of course)
He escapes but forgets that the crystal queen clipped his wings and he falls off a cliff and by an unusual twist of fate Flame happened to be right below it and he hits him with such force that the others later find nothing but a lot of blood and a very surprised looking orange allosaur head
(Messy, but it gets rid of two characters nobody likes)
He kills the crystal queen in an escape, quickly absorbs her crystals, then becomes the crystal king and is so confused he goes insane and becomes the antagonist
The others get him back but are forced to kill and eat him when stuck in a cave with no food
(Same reasons as number three)
He is possessed by the vengeful spirit of his unmentioned other sibling who he decided was ugly and so smooshed under a giant rock he pushed off a cliff
(Well... If there are reincarnated yuties as wyverns then...)
He eats a rare mushroom and starts claiming he can see purple mammoths dancing on their back legs and blowing tintoberries(that's the ARKiverse name for blowing raspberries) at him,
starts talking to trees, and thinks he's turned into a giant snail, he then dies of strangulation as he tries to have a headbutting contest with some animal guts
(Because, why not🤣)
"Um." Vein turned redder than she was ever.
'Oh, Blood,' she cried, 'please let him say yes.'
"Uhh.." Hurricane stuttered. "Y-yes," he answered. "I had always loved you and your rebellious ways, it was brave and smart and I never thought I had the right body to do anything until I met you."
'Oh, wow,' Vein thought. 'Really?'
"BUB-BORPH BON!" Chroneo bellowed.
"WUNGRY! FUNGRY!" Deuvo screamed.
"I think they're hungry," Hurricane observed with a hint of laughter. "After we warn King Scorch," Vein pointed out, "that's our first priority."
"Nuu," disagreed Chroneo.
"Let's go," said Hurricane as they took off with Unnigh and Deuvo. Somehow Chroneo was flying.
"Wook at meeee!" He screamed happily.
"I'll catch him if he falls," Hurricane positioned himself under Chroneo.
They grew nearer to the main throne room.
"I don't think they would want Wyvernets, stay here with them," Hurricane suggested as he flapped in.
"I fwy gweat!" Chroneo said.
"Yes you do," Vein agreed. Deuvo tackled Unnigh who was busy writing something in the dirt.
Wait, writing? Is Unnigh a mute?
'Well, obviously,' her brain suggested. 'Haven't you noticed?'
Vein picked up Unnigh as Deuvo ran over to Chroneo and put her where she was.
Small wing talons brushed over the dirt area next to the Phoenix Palace. It spelled, "I'm hungry too," in big, messy letters with many spelling mistakes.
"Oh, do you want a tablet for writing you can carry?" Vein asked. Unnigh nodded. "Cool."
Hurricane stumbled out, escorted bt guards.
"Let me go!" He said. "I was warning you, not spreading rumors!"
"Save it for the tropicals, once you have served your time in prison for threatening the king."
"PHHTH! I WAS NOT THREATENING!" He bellowed after being taken away into a dark tunnel.
'Oh, no,' Vein thought.
Vein had flown all the way back to The Valley with the wyvernets to drop them off.
"TAKE THEM, IT'S URGENT!" She yelled as she dropped them.
"Wha- what's going on?"
Blicket, who was on guard for the night, asked.
"NO TIME!" Vein flew away, back to the palace.
She got there, and landed on the dirt area.
'Hmm, which tunnel was it?' She thought curiously.
'Ah!' Looking at the right tunnel, Vein flew hard. As hard as possible.
Diving into the path-tunnel thing, she started to hear screams of "WHAT DID I DO!" And "WHY AM I HERE! HELP!"
"VEIN! HELP ME!" The voice she was looking for. "Hurricane!" Vein answered.
"Halt!" A guard said.
Vein blasted acid blood all over him, melting him and a few more guards.
"There you are," Hurricane's releaved sigh sounded.
"Wow, they lock these wyverns up for no reason?" She asked.
"I don't know, probably a bit overprotective of the king."
"Yeah," Vein agreed with Hurricane.
"Vein? Is that you?"
She whipped her head around, scanning the hopeless wyverns.
"Father?" She said, seeing the familiar bright red scales. "Father!"
She melted Hurricane's cage bars with her blood and ran over to Acid's cage.
"Father! I missed you," she cried.
Vein tried to spit blood on the cage bars, but they were reinforced with something.
"Let me try," Hurricane froze the metal and cracked it, sending it falling to the floor.
"Thanks," Acid said, coughing. "They don't give us much water."
"LET US OUT, TOO!" There was atleast twenty other wyverns in here.
"Fine," she said.
With Hurricane, they let a storm of tropic and blood wyverns out. Obviously the ember wyverns knew if they were going to far.
"Father, meet my mate, Hurricane."
The END of CRYSTAL LANDS is SOOOON! I will soon make another one in Wyvern (Crystal Queen is already occupied with two stories) and I'm going to put them in bunches so it's easier to navigate. But anyway it's basically just Crystal Lands narrated by someone else and with a different title. Like I said, it's REALLY SOON. AND please look at my character descriptions at the bottom, I really need name suggestions for him. Please help!
Question 1: Well I was going to do a time skip after some time so we CAN make them save the world.
Question 2: I forgot to mention in the summary that Furbeak told her to keep it a secret, due to the secret being let out once, and them finding the void.
Question 3: Yes I was planning that after the whole "Saving Crystal Isles" thing.
They had to head to the Emberfall Palace. It was the closest, and they should know how to take care of things like this.
Vein was REALLY nervous to ask him.. She wanted to express how she likes Hurricane but.. She just doesn't know how to do it.
Panting, they finally saw the orange and fiery palace ahead on a volcano.
"Ther- there it i- is!" Hurricane panted, holding Chroneo.
Vein was out of breath, too. Maybe she can wait to ask him when they stop.
"It's so hot!" Hurricane observed as they landed.
"Yeah," Vein agreed.
She spotted an ember worker.
"Hello! Can you take us to the medic?" She asked.
The ember wyvern took a look at Chroneo and nodded, "Follow me!" She offered.
They rushed throughout the castle, taking a right and a left to a right and FINALLY they got there.
"Alright," the ember wyvern said, "here it is."
Hurricane walked inside with Vein close behind.
A medic looked up. "What do you need help wi- oh, uhm.." Vein didn't know if he was suprised by a blood and a tropic wyvern with three ember wyvernets, or the wound.
"Come, I know how to help with that." He said. "Put him here, what's his name?"
"Chroneo." Vein answered.
"Ah," the medic said, "well, Chroneo, you need banadages." He said while grabbing a red wrap and putting it around Chroneo's spot.
"Voin," he whispered, "Hurrifaoun."
"Is Chroneo trying to say our names?" Hurricane whispered as Vein nodded.
"Mhmm, Voin an Hurriboim," Deuvo tried to say.
After Chroneo was wrapped up, the medic nodded for them to go.
"Have a nice day!" He said.
"Hurricane?" Vein asked once out of the castle. "Can I ask you something?" Nervously, they landed.
"Yes?" Hurricane anwered cheerfully.
"Do.." Vein tried so hard not to mess this up.
"Do you love me?"
Guys if anyone is going wondering. Yes I’m still here. School has been quite busy so I have not been able to post. I also propose that dodo tales guy and crystal lands person. Should we save a dossier to just chat together on? I was think the attack drone but that’s just an idea. Have a nice day everyone! - bob:D
Amethyst flew over the last of the ember ring until he reached the edge of a huge cliff plummeting into a circular valley with a huge mountain in the exact centre, he flew down into the valley, with Obsidian flying nearby and Bluefeathers, Lupus and the wolf, which had stopped glowing now except inside it's eyes and mouth, climbing down the cliff.
Inside the valley, Amethyst noticed it was much colder than the ember ring, cool enough for normal trees to grow.
Flying across the plain towards the mountain, he looked for good ways in. Over the top would be too obvious, but from what he had learned from the heir, he knew that there was a secret network of tunnels inside the mountain leading into the open crater of an extinct volcano, which would seem a likely place for the crystal wyvern queen to have her home.
Person asking about how Unnigh, Chroneo, and Deuvo are meant to save the world, firstly, two of them are called Time and God in Latin, that hints that they are unusual in more ways than one, also, remember the supernatural growth speed of animals in
ARK, I am not seasnake, but this seems a good enough answer
Ok guys and gals, this is going to happen.
The Crystal Lands
"No!" Hurricane shouted as Storm let himself be taken away. Tears reached for the ground. "Why him?" He said.
"Hurricane," Vein said, trying to comfort him. "How do you want to see the ember wyvernets?"
"They hatched?" Blicket, who walked over with the other two, nodded.
As Vein beckoned for them to come out, three dark orange wyvernets crawled out.
The darkest one, Unnigh, silently jumped on Deuvo, her brother, and the only one who made any noise was the brother. Chroneo just sat confused.
"Well, the sun is setting," Flame observed. "Maybe we should find a place to sleep."
"Great idea, near the hollow I had found a cluster of trees thick enough that nobody would see us if we slept there," Quinter said.
"That would be fine," agreed Hurricane, completely forgetting his brother.
'That's the right choice,' Vein thought, 'to forget about losing someone. You can't let it weigh you down.'
"Let's go, Vein!" Blicket bellowed, running across the lining of the dark hollow. "Coming," she whispered to herself as she flapped away with the ember wyvernets.
Vein awoke in the middle of the night. Hurricane was snoring sadly, probably missing his brother next to him.
She then had a horrible idea to go comfort him.
'Why are you doing this,' one side of her brain groaned, and the other, 'well maybe I like him.'
Standing up quietly, she walked over to the other side of the tree dome and, trying not to wake him, silently sat next to Hurricane.
* * *
A quiet huff came from Hurricane. Vein slightly awoke to hear what he says.
"Oh my Crystal Queen," he had whispered to himself, suprised, "is this seriously the result of liking someon-"
He must have realized he should be thinking, not whispering.
Thin dawn light filtered through the trees as Vein stood up. Hurricane had gone back to sleep.
Smiling, she went to go find some crystals hungrily, sucking the energy immediately after finding one, trying to remember when was the last time she ate.
Bringing back prey and crystals for the rest, she settled down on watch next to Hurricane. She kind of liked him, to think of it.
After a while, Vein wanted to wake everybody, so she tried to.
"Snoogle dorf!" Deuvo screamed. "SNOOGLE DORF! SNOOGLE DORF!"
That was easier than expected.
"Ugh, what?" Hurricane yelled,
"Wait.. What's wrong with Chroneo?"
Vein saw a pale Chroneo in the back, with a leech on him, a GIANT leech.
"AGH! Chroneo has a giant LEECH!" Blicket bellowed, waking Flame and Quinter. Unnigh just sat there, trying to pull it off.
"Here, here," Hurricane offered, spraying salt water on the leech, making it fall.
Chroneo wailed, and thrashed as a huge, bloody spot opened where the leech was.
"We need to get to a doctor," Vein said, "Blicket, Flame, Quinter, stay here!" She yelled as she whispered "C'mon," to Hurricane and grabbed Unnigh and Deuvo, who was screaming, as Hurricane grabbed Chroneo.