Stories Tips
What are some stories about the achatina? Memorable achatina stories, wild encounters, and fan fiction.
Wowwww, glad you guys liked the latest chapter. And yes, it was the middle portal for Asgard! This is so epic. We’re so close. It’s HAPPENING AFTER A WHOLE YEAR—
Anyways, not much to say. Still don’t have a new computer lol, but I am using my family’s from time to time to write. A bit why the chapters take a little while! Also bc I’m working on my future stories as well, since they’ll be coming after the Obelisk. That’s all for now!
—Moon
Sunnyfox, your story is great!! I love it so much!!! And it is Ark related. As Ben said, it’s a sequel to the original 4 Ark Survival story maps. If Redtail said he doesn’t like seeing random fanfics in the story section. He probably doesn’t read through them or doesn’t understand them. Don’t worry about the few people who pick at your story without giving anything that benefits you as a writer or to your story. There will always be some, you just have to see if the people who write good things outweigh the people who say bad things. And from what I’ve seen, there are more people who enjoy your story than hate. Trust the person who put down a funny and got -12 downvotes for Rhynio.
Mr.GhostGamer, I only have two stories currently. Ultimus is the only one that is being released right now while Journey’s the one I’ve worked the longest on and will start releasing soon(once The Obelisk is finished.). The teaser is already out in Achatina (if you’re looking for it. Look it up on Google as Journey Teaser Dododex or on the website Under more stories by this author when looking at one of my longer messages.). I read chapter 23!! So wait… Does that mean that TTDOT is in the same universe as Hope’s Cry?!? And Buddy is JAKE’S DAD!!!!! Didn’t see that one coming!!!
Until next time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
Ben,
I know what’s off! Someone is stalking them with pterodactyls!!!! Someone is riding the pterodactyls! There was a Pteradon above them in the SKY. And the grenade fell from the SKY!!! I think it’s that crimson lady! This is just a theory but I think it all checks out!
Yours Truly,
MrGhostGamer
Hi guys.
PrimalApex, thanks for the questions. Some of the answers I know and some I don’t so that’ll definitely help come up with more ideas. Thanks!
Ben, I’ve read “the incubator” before and I found it strange that coincidentally one of the characters was named “Moon”. Maybe it’s coincidental maybe it’s not but I still think it’s weird. The story was very weird and didn’t make a lot of sense to me and I wasn’t sure what was going on. No offense to the person who wrote it. Also I read ur newest chapter and…WHAT US WRONG WITH YOU SKYLAR!! FOR PETE’S SAKE YOU COULD HAVE KILLED RICK!!! I don’t trust her. She’s acting weird and I wonder what her power is. What’s up with her? Idk. Anyways…I can’t wait for ur next chapter! Cya around!
-SunnyFox57
P.S: PrimalApex, Brutus and Peggie are the only animals in the series that can actually talk. Each normal animal kind can communicate in their own way as normal animals do.
Sunnyfox, I read your newest chapters. I enjoyed them very much!!! I am excited for the next chapter!!!!
I have mixed feelings about Tom, on the one hand I feel he’s a complete megalomaniac who definitely lost it at one point. I mean he kidnaps his niece and nephew and neglects his nephew and causes his niece to have mental issues and tried to do the same with Jay and Sylvia. He killed his father and mother and who knows how many more for power. And he wished to kill James because he blames him for Leah’s death when it wasn’t his fault.
On the other hand, I feel bad for him. He’s a broken man, and while I don’t have pity or sympathy. I do feel bad for him.
Well, Until next time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Chapter 33 of Arks Over Heaven has released in Archaeopteryx, the final creature in aerial.
The storys far from over, but id like to thank everyone whos stuck it through until this moment. But now its time to move on from this section and to the next. Here we come, Aquatic! (will be ABC regular order)
Hey everyone, nice seeing what type of stories were released today! Let’s see…
Take as many breaks as need be Angel.
Sylveevee, if you’re writing your story on mobile device, there should be a setting to disable autocorrect entirely (on your settings app, depending on which device you are using). Hope that helps!
PrimalApex, WOAH your Prologue for Ultimus was really cool! First of all, cool story name, “Ultimus” sounds super menacing. Also it’s really cool how it’s a story revolving around the Extinction DLC!!! I always thought that was the coolest one. I remember I was so excited to fight the King Titan (with cheats), I even recorded it for my little brother because he was going out and wouldn’t be able to join. But there’s a lot I’m intrigued about, the backstory, and everything! It all seems so unique, who is this guy? Also it’s very sad he has to bury his friend Reuben. Now he’s alone, the “Last Man on Earth”. Super cool story so far, and if I may ask how much have you got finished? Have you always been working on this or is this recent?
SandmasterXD your new story is also pretty cool! At first I thought it would be like one of those war stories, but there’s probably going to be dinos, right? The ending sentence seems to suggest so. I think it wasn’t too boring as it helped develop the setting and the mood, and of course the characters which is always cool.
Chapter 33 is coming soon it’s 80% done. By the time you see this message it’ll probably already be finished.
Alright anyway I’ll see you later. Fun talking!
PS: SunnyFox, PrimalApex I did notice Dododex went down, I think. It didn’t load in for me either. Also Warren is not a detective he is a Deputy Sheriff, just to clear confusion as they’re very different. Maybe you got it confused with Darren, who is the detective. I don’t think you need to respond though. I have a feeling someone else will cover for him ;)
Hey guys, I’m doing two stories now cause like if I don’t have an idea for one story then I have one for the second one so ya know what I mean? Anyways the second story I’m doing is called “All the light we cannot see”. You may heard of it before. First chapter in Allo and is in the island ABC order. See ya!
-SandmasterXD
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