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ARK: Survival Evolved & Ascended Companion
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Sunnyfox, I’ve read chapter 21, 22 and 23!!! Brutus and Peggie’s fib was funny!!! And Cole’s the Mole, darn it. I definitely felt that it would be him, but I hoped it wasn’t. I wasn’t expecting though his backstory to be that he was forced by fear!!! It still doesn’t make it any more right. Neither does it make better to run. I mean if he doesn’t warn or give intelligence to the Dark Phoenix kingdom before he starts running. Hmm, the Shadowy Figure is manipulating Jack into leading him to the Dark Phoenix Kingdom. Curiouser that he has Deja Vu about him. I definitely think that’s a clue to who!! They were really good!!!! I really enjoyed them and I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!!
Until Next Time!!!
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
Ye Wyvernian ik it supposed to be a "villain" obelisk but i kinda forgor about that sorry. But the way to find the white obelisk is really genius!
Sylveevee, Chapter 16 was amazing, I loved it! So Pat has teamed up with the leader of the rebel raiders, Carnilius. Very cool name, is he going to show up in a future chapter? Because he didnt show up in Part 5. You also did a good job conveying Moonhigh and Sunhigh's feelings in Part 2. And woah, we get more backstory. So Syl and Draco have known each other since the Island? Really cool. Although one thing? You dont have to put in parentheses that Syl used to have anger issues in SE, because a good reader can tell that by reading the dialogue and action and stuff. Anyway Part 3 really does explain why Syl and Draco seemed to know each other in Chapter 13.
Anyway, Part 4 was really sweet. Cooper was smart enough to battle Milo in tennis and not Pat, because Pat is better than him at tennis. And Cooper really could have been like a dad to Sunhigh, but then... oh my goodness that was so sad I feel so bad for Drake man...
Moonhigh's power is really cool. And it was a really good idea to add the flaw to Syls power (that she cant shapeshift if shes badly hurt). Because if something like that didnt exist things would get a little too easy..
but i loved it overall. Keep it up Syl, the story has improved a lot since the first chapter
Wasn’t expecting Jethezzar.. when did you and Moon agree to that?! Chapter 21 was great I loved the description of the black obelisks region, and the fight. Wonder what Sunny will do for her chapter, continue the black obelisk part? The team QOA and Petersons part? Both?
I know I’m excited to write chapter 23!
-Wyvernian
Umm…guys? I’m not COMPLETELY sure but I think someone just tried to impersonate me.
This is what they said in broodmother lysrix:
“ You all should be more supportive today #sunnyfox”
?????? Idk if they were impersonating me or telling me to be supportive or what…
I don’t know what is going on. Anyways…I’m off to read chapter 64 of TAOH! Cya!
-A slightly confused SunnyFox57
Sunnyfox, I read chapter twenty!!! It was great!!! Hmm, so Cyra is in love with Jack. But how she describes it… it seems like something else. And Josephina and Jaquin may be able to share a fraction of their powers with each other. Interesting. Does that mean it’s the same with Cyra and Cyrus (I can’t remember if they share the same color medallions). I really enjoyed it and I can’t wait for the new chapter!!!
Ben, maybe Tom wasn’t talking about the Shadowy Figure in that one chapter of THOM, but maybe the spy. I don’t know. Maybe he doesn’t see his brother as family anymore and meant friend in a sarcastic tone.
-PrimalApex:)
From Ben
OK thanks for your villains. Uhhh, guess were waiting for MGG and thats it. Anyway, Sunny I really liked Chapter 20. So if there are twins the medallion may glow the same color? Interesting.. That means Josephina and Jaquin might be able to use each others powers like William suggested. I also feel the same way about Jack, Cyra.
whew im tired